GHSP Family FF Thread 2 Part 27 PG 53 & 27A Pg 55 28/7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Geet Hui Sabse Parayi Family Fan Fiction



Character Sketch

Geet Handa-
Modern Girl , Beautiful ,Bold ,Bindaas,Fearless but Simple with Values Intact , Rich ,and Educated yet down to earth


Sameer Handa - A Don ! Villian for everybody else but is the best father for Geet and she is his world He can do anything for her happiness and to keep her protected and away from his world,as he don't want to lose her like he lost his wife



Vivaan Singhiania - A Sweet And Cute Guy,was Geet's best friend


Rudra Singhiania - A Don , Villain , has a negative character



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Index

Thread 1
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4351355


Part 14 - below ( indunno)

Part 15 - Pg 4 Anky_S)

Part 16 - Pg 8
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Part 17 - Pg 11 - Aishwariya

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art 18 - Pg 14 - sidlik

Part 19 - Pg 21 - sanghita0000

Part 20 - Pg 26- JaasChowdhray

Part 21 - Pg 29 - indunno


Part 22 - Pg 33 sophiexx

Part 23 - Pg 37 - indunno

Part 24 - Pg 37 - indunno


Part 25 - Pg 40 - Jannat Fictions

Part 26 A - Pg 44 - indunno

Part 26 B - Pg 46 - indunno

Part 27 - Pg 53 - indunno

Edited by taahir004 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations.
The story will continue here? ??
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Part 14 20/04/2015

Maan Drift in to the thought and message replayed in his mind

"Hi baby just arrived from my business trip will meet you, tomorrow evening, love u always bye" Why she wrote, love u always? Is she falling in love with me? We had been dating since last 5 month but we never address like this before than why now? And he gone back in past...

Samara Khanna an emerging Model, very beautiful, sexy, and very very sweet talker, as if she born with sugar on her tongue, She meet him in one of their clients party where she came with her friend and he liked her on first sight only, his client has introduce her to him and she ask for dance, Maan couldn't refuse her and they dance together and there they started their friendship, and started to date each other.

'Khurrana fashion house' - one of Maan's another business run by his sister Annie who is Fashion Designer, and was looking for Model girl for her clothing line, and Maan introduce Samara to her and like that she got job in Maan's company, but her ambition was very high, she was wanted to become one of the top model and if get chance was wanted to work in movie also, so Maan was the best person to use to climb the ladder, he is one of the means to reach her goal, and to lift her carrier and if he fall in love with her, than she can get all the luxury of her life and don't have to worry for her future, with that thought in mind she took initiative, become friends, and now dating each other but not in LOVE or has not confess their love yet. Maan has dated many girls before but never committed to any one and was not serious with them, however he is always faithful to his relationship and never cheated on any one and was quite frank in his dealing with girls, he was looking for his soul mate but so far no one remain successful in winning his heart, he is inclining towards Samara but not sure of his feeling. And now Samara coming back to India from overseas trip, Annie will follow her after few days, they went overseas to promote their new fashion lingerie on foreign soil.

Present - He got confused and ask himself If he is in love with Sam? And immediately Geet's face resurfaced opposite to him, Why I become ready to help that disaster queen? I knew I am dating Sam, than also I had help her and become her jooth mooth ka boyfriend come lover and admitted to her father also? What will Sam think if she will come to know about this? Oh Jesus help me and take me out of this mess created out of good will gesture foe Geet. Though I am not sure about my feeling for Sam still she is my GF and we are dating each other, I have interest in her and am attracted towards her it is my duty to let her know? yes ! that is right I will talk to her about Geet tomorrow and will explain her everything.

Again her thought drift to Geet and vivaan...

About Geet, he thinks there something more deeper cooking inside her character as she is not afraid of her Don father and she is quite friendly with Vivien who is also prominent businessmen and son of don Rudrapratap Singhania,and it looks like Geet going well with that guy, the way he hug her gave kiss on her cheek sounds quite cosy with each other. Is there is more to this story? Today in lift also she told her father, if Motibua is there she is not going to come home, and she didn't even care where she will go? Sounds like women of substance...?

He came out from his Reverie when Dadi called him and ask what happen and whose phone was there? Maan told her Dadima Sam message me and told me to meet her tomorrow and Dadima's mood get off and told him jaldi fresh ho ke aajao dinner is ready. She has imagined Geet as her Bahu and was very Happy, she didn't like Sam and got disapointed.

Here Geet got big shock of life when Rudra uncle threaten her, if she will not brak off with him and come back to his son,he will kill Maan...!

She never imagine Rudra uncle can stoop so low ! Now she is in fix, on one side this motibua's problem and other side Rudra uncles blackmailing her, oh babaji is bachi per rahem karo ye mamala to bahot hi petchida banta ja raha hai,(oh! God please show some Marcy on this child, this matter is becoming more and more complicated,)How can I tolerate the death of someone due to me? ek baju kuaa hai to doosari baju khai hai? kahan Jaau? Maine bichare maan ko holi ka nariyel bana diya, aur unki jaan ko jokham mein daal di, babaji ab aap hi batao main kyaa karoon? Should I tell to dad? Agar papa ko kahegi to ubal much jayega,nahi use nahi kahe sakti...Oh God show me the path?

I have to do Something very fast ,yes let me think what can I do jis se saap bhi mar jaye aur lathi bhi na tute...

She went back in to car, and ask driver to take her to farmhouse and her bodyguard also followed her...

Note- My heartly thanks to JANNAT FICTION for helping in correcting mistakes.

enjoy update-😉

Edited by idunno - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 14 - idunno
so maan don't have any feelings for her but still he was loyal to her and wished to talk about get's problem...
sam want maan only for her impending success...she only using him for name & fame...maan will be more broken if he comes to know...in all this he still was thinking about geet & her problems...
dadi was not happy to learn about sam coming to India...she wants geet as her bahu..
geet is really in a big problem...lets see how she will solve this problem..
PS. already posted in previous thread...posting same here again
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update!!!👏👏👏Loved it❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update so wants name n fame thats why she is with maan
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it's good u have taken responsibility of this thread
i am really loving this story so far..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice
commented on previous thread

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