FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 53

Wow sim its really a wonderful story it brings out eternity of pure love I really salute ur writing skill really u are god gifted

Amazing yaar SIM!

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Riya
Someone intentionally created a fake account and wrote bad stuff about my story
This story dosent need any publicity
I get several readers each day on Twitter coming to read it , I hvd great frnds like Ann who still tweet their support. This person commented on her tweet, claiming this story as degrading love n humiliating ur lover, infact septically dissecting the names n characters
I should have understood their intent was to hurt and stop me from writing
I wrote the 3rd chap in anger, it dsnt hve a soul tht I put in each update
I realize my mistake sumthng tht evn Harshu did , he saw hate tweet more than love
But just like him, I say stay blessed
You don't like it don't read it, it's not a favour on me
If I write well I hve ppl coming bck to read it
N ur one of those readers tht I love to get feedback from
Above was not a reply just a note to tell you
I love you too
I need 2 days to reply to all the earlier comments
Evry wrd tht u all type matters to me
N it's my way of saying Thnk u
Loads of love to you dear
Sim

Lovely update, poor zain he is sick and his resolve is starting to falter a bit and who can blame him but what he doesnt know that aliyas resolve is also breaking and its showing in how she takes care of him without him knowing. zaya r so alike he does things for and she for him w/out the other one knowing the truth. Someone pls just lock them in a room and force to spill everything out already lol. cant wait for the next update

Your words are my strength...love you all

Dedication: Rida ..my twitter delight and my dear friend ..she never ever missed any update ..and her comments make me blush ...Ridhu, you are a very nice person...stay blessed sweets ..the love that is sealed in ur heart ...is very touching...and I pray you will end up with your dream guy like Zain one day ..till then read this ..love you loads

I have to still reply to all...running out of time...Saleha missed talking to you and Sakeena ...i loved those lines ..so happy that you write ...

Love you all

Sim

Chapter 26

Ulze Rishte...

As he strained to get out of his bed ...he realized it was already 8 am ...he had missed his classes and Aaliya was nowhere to be seen,

he gulped down the lump of sadness ...she never even asked him once...maybe the coldness would never melt...making him think hard ...what is he going to do ...one day he would have to decide ...but where will he go ...

Gathering his scattered thought, he slowly got up from the bed...surprised how come the bed was still cold...even the warmth of his body had not warmed it, unaware of the night

...he didn't have the courage to take his bath ...and just got dressed up as Rehmaan came ...

Zain clinic chalo..

Kyu...

Tumhe abhi bhi bukhaar hai ...kamjori hai ...

Chachu ...mujhe sach mai is naukri ki bahut zarrorat hai ...aapke beti ke paas mandrane ka itna accha mauka mai nahi gava sakta ..

aise agar chutti leta raha ...toh Sharma sir mera bori bistara ...unke playground mai bichayenge ...

Rehman giggled... aree who Sharma mera bachpan ka dost hai ...tum uski tension mat lo ...chalo clinic ..

Na baaba ...gaye baar 4 injections lagi thi ...ab toh darvaze ka andar jaate hi attack se mar jaunga ...nahi joh ilaaz hai yehi kariye ...theek hai ...

Muhe tumhe saline lagani hai ...yaha nahi de sakta ..

Ya Allah ...saline ..matlab nas mai sui daloge ...

chachu ek baat batiye aap kya kisi horror movie ke writer the ...joh aadmi ek sui se darta hai ..usse saline ...nahi mai yehi baitha hu..koi weakness nahi hai ...

dekho raat bhar thand mai soya ...aur bukhaar phir bhi kam ho gaya mera ...

Rehman smiled ...he had no idea who took care of him ...maybe Aaliya did not want him to know ..so he too kept quiet ...

Ab seedhe seedhe chalete ho ya bulau logo koh...tumhe zabardasti kidnap karke le jaa sakta hu..haq hai mera

Yeh yehi tareeke se baat karti hai Da mujhse zaroor aapne sar par haath ghumaya hoga uske ..haina ...ab yeh idea mat daliye uske jeham mai ...maloom padha kal mujhe kisise kidnap bhi karvaye ...he was laughing

Chalo ...

They reached the clinic as Rehman left him in the cabin and Zain looked around as someone walked from behind ...he turned to see a familiar face and another familiar person ...

Rizwaan ...tum yaha ...he went and hugged him ...as he acknowledged the other person in the room ...a bit reluctantly ...

Dr. Das ...aap yaha ...as memories of his hospital stay came back...

the memories where he was crippled to a bed ...when his world had encompassed only a bed and a grilled window ...he still had chills remembering the days when he had no recollection till he had heard Rehman speak about Aaliyas condition.

It was a fight to get him discharged as they kept on questioning his mind frame...several hours of counselling, medicines ...to a point he was scared that maybe he will never be able to get back to Aaliya ..the 15 days was his living nightmare ...

He distinctively remembered one night on the 12 th day when he was in his room ...he had dreamed that Aaliya was crying in the shower ...reminiscing him ...seeing her wet and sobbing had given him a panic attack ...pleading to set him free had become a habit ...seeing Dr.Das ..those moments flooded back ..and the heart barred his vision ...

Zain kaise ho tum...

Mai toh theek hu aap yaha kaise ...

Rehman walked in...maine bulaya hai ...counseling ke liye ...

Zain turned back and looked at Rehman ...Chachu ...aap koh ab bhi lagta hai ...mujhe inki zaroorat hai ...yakeen nahi hai ...ki mai theek hu...

Zain ...tumhe zaroorat hai ki koi tumhe sunne ...jao ...Dr.Das ke saath baath karlo ...

As Dr. Das kept a soft hand on his shoulders and Rehman and Rizwan walked out ...leaving them alone to talk

Zain theek hai na uncle, Rizwan couldn't see his bro in this condition...as Rehman nodded...

mujhe darr lag raha tha ..isliye apni tasali ke liye bulaya ...baat karega toh halka mehsoos karoge ...Suraiya begum kaise hai ...theek hai na ...

Rizwaan smiled ...aapke clinic ke khidki bahar Zain koh dekh rah hai ...chupke se ...Rehman was startled ..milegi nahi usse ...yaha tak aayi hai ...

Nahi...janab ne mana kiya hai ...kasam diya hai ..jab tak Aaliya nahi lautegi ...tab tak ...

Uncle dil jalta hai in dono koh dekhkar...Aaliya Bhabhi kitni takleef mai hai ...najaane ek saal kya kya jhela hoga unhone...aur phir Zain ...usse shayad pata nahi hai ..mai uske room ke neeche pura pura din baiththa tha ...uski hasi uski cheekh ...eke k lamha uske saath jiya hu ...

Rehman shook his head ...due to Aaliya all their relationship were getting twisted ...mere bas main ahi hai beta ...Aaliya ki soch ...woh khud lad rahi hai ..har roz...zain se nafrat karna uske fitrat mai nahi hai ...aur usse iske takleef dekh kar dugni takleef hoti hai ..

zillat yeh leta hai ..sharminda who hoti hai...yeh sab jald hi sulaj jaiye yehi umeed kart ahu...har sajde mai khuda se bas ek hi dua maangte hu ...mere zaya koh mila de...yeh pyaar zaya na ho paaye ...

4 hrs later when Zain walked out he was smiling ...as Rizwaan left with Dr.Das ...Zain held him...

Aaj ruk sakta hai ...bahut yaad aa rahi hai ...sab koh miss karta hu

Rizwan smiled Suraiya was waiting outside he had to leave ...Zain jald hi tum aaoge ...bhabhi koh saath lekar ...tab ...aaj nahi...jaroori kaam hai ...as Zain hugged him ...and they bid goodbye

As they left Zain looked at Rehmaan ...ab khush ...peth bhara aapka ...aap dono mujhe kitna tang karte ho..

He smiled ...nahi ek kaam baaki hai ...he looked up...

Chalo ...and took him inside ...

As they got the saline drip ready ..Zain smiled ...

kya baat hai aaj nahi chilla rahe ho...he laughed ...

aap bhi mere overacting mai aa gaye naa...

Matlab ...who Aaliya dekh rahi thin a ..toh usse satane aur hasane ke liye kar raha tha ...

aap shayad jaante nahi 15 din mai kitni cheeze chub chuki hai in haton mai ...aap nahi aate toh shayad wahi pada rehta ...thanks Chachu ...hum dono ki jaan bacahi aapne ...

As he sat there ...closing his eyes, as the needle pricked his vein ..he felt someone was watching him ..he turned towards the window ...there was just a shadow ...that walked away ...

as he spoke loudly MOM...he tried moving when Rehmaan assured him there was no one...

When Aaliya came in the evening she was hyper tensed ...not seeing him the whole day ...made her miss him too...she walked towards the garden ...and didnt spot him in his room either ...she finally asked Kashif ..woh bukhar hai na unhe ..toh clinic gaye hai ...

Aaliya looked sad..he still was not well...she wanted to be with him ..but how ..she had to take extra classes for the things he was missing..he never knew she had volunteered ...the whole day she was sad..calling Rehman was not possible ...so she called the clinic ...and was getting all the details ...she was puzzled to hear why an outside doctor was examining him...was he seriously ill...her heart sank ...

Bahut sazde se mile ho tum...Yehi sazde par ummed hai...

har baar khuda se ...tumhe maanga ...ab yehi is dil ki akhri zid hai

SIM

Pre-cap: Aaliyas love ...and her ways ...wait and watch

Dedication: Moumita ...tweetie ...this ones for you ...for all your lovely words ...you have no idea how happy i get to read those comments ..keep smiling ...love you loads dear enjoy

Nafsha ..Happy Birthday sweetheart ...a warm birthday present for you Riya ...from my Rhea 😳

Chapter 27

Ek shaam ki mulakaat...

As she reached the clinic and peeked in ...he was resting on the bed, legs swinging and head towards the wall. ...and the drip was still on ...as Aaliya wiped her tears and went inside ...he woke up ...and smiled at her ...it had been a long day ..and not seeing her made him miserable ..

Da...tum mujhse milne aayi ho ...he asked excitedly

She looked at him and blankly asked...bimaar hone ka natak ho gaya ho toh ghar chalo ...tum kal date jeete the na ..toh mere treat hai...hiding all her care in her stern exterior

Zain looked away ...scarred ...he had too much talking done in a day ...seeing Dr.Das...Rizwaan and having a feeling that his MOM was around was making him feel low...maybe today he wont be able to handle her hatred ...he needed to be away to get his thoughts right ...

Aaj nahi ...

Aaj hi milegei ...Aalisha ...ne mera jeena haram kar diya hai...agar nahi le gayi toh who mujhse baat karna band karegi ...isliye ...

Zain smiled ..his La was his true friend ..theek hai do ghante baad aaunga ...tum jaao...he didn't mention the 200 calls La had made to inquire about his health ...a rare friend and he was so happy to have her ...

Nahi mai yehi wait karti hu...

Kyu...

Meri marzi...

He knew she wanted to be with him...maybe ...that's what he thought ...

Theek hai ...

Aur zyada khush mat hona ...dad bhi wapas aa rahe hai isliye wait kar rahi hu...

Ok..maine kab bola mere liye kar rahi ho ...

Aur haa ...mujhe aavaz nahi chaiye ...

Nahi baat karunga ...subhah se nahi ki ...shanti rahi hogi na ...sannata ...aur ek kaam karo ek pacifier woh joh baccho koh muh mai daate hai na taaki woh roye nahi ...woh bhi kharid lao...mera muh band karne ke liye ..he twisted his nose

She looked up ...

Da ...ek baar dekh toh lo...mere bhukhar theek hua ya nahi...he said with a puppy face

She didn't move ...he smiled ...zyada nahi hai ...tumne ek baar bhi nahi poocha isliye bataya ..kal shaam se ek baar bhi nahi aayi...raat koh mujhe hosh hi nahi tha ..pata hai sapna dekha tha ki tum mere gali lagi ho ...mere sar par haath rakh hai ...

She was crying as she turned back ...Update ho gaya ...

Haa ...aur ek baat ...

Kya ...

Mujhe pyaas lagi hai ..paani dogi ...

She got up and got the glass of water near him...as he took it from his left hand ...she eyed the drip line ..and her heart ached ..the mind humiliated ..the guilt eating her ...she wanted to touch him ...and gradually brushed her hand on his arms ...as he eyed her and smiled ...he saw her needs too...her love seeped in a single touch

Thank you ...she took the glass back...

Doosre bottle hai ...bas ab bahut khoon bana hoga ...tumhe chhoosne ke liye ..he ducked as she threw a book at him ...

Da...ab sar fodogi kya ...koi bharosa nahi tumhara ...

JAldi karo ...poors din chutti lete rehte ho..kabi pair kabhi koi jaanwar aur ab bhukhar ...kitne natak hai ..tumhare

Da...aadhe cheeze toh tumhari meharbaniyaa hai...

Haa maine kaha than a bahar sone koh...

Ab bhi ussi baat par lad rahi ho...thode mere massom shaqal par concentrate karogi toh melt ho jaogi..

Da.. bahut miss kiya tumhe ...

She kept mum...avoiding to tell him her heartbeat had stopped the whole day ...

When they came back ..she asked him to dress ...

Da...please aaj nahi...La koh mai bol dunga ...mujhe aaram karna hai ..

1o min mai gaadi ke paas....as he got ready and walked towards the car ...he saw her ...a red saree and her hair in a unrustled bun ...a slender bracelet ...and alight lipstick...

Zain gulped down ...his last dream ...had crashed in a drivers uniform ...he had no clue what she was upto today ...

Baitho ...she helped him sit ...as they reached the hotel...a majestic palace in between a lake ...so breathtaking ...she walked in and spoke to the manager ...as he arranged the place ...

As Zain walked in ...the hotel was deserted ...

Da... please aaj kuch naya khel mat khelna ...please ...

Zain ...baitho...she pulled his chair ...

Yeh hotel khali kyu ha..khana toh theek hai na yaha ka ...pata chala chachu ke clinic phir jaana pada food poisoning ke vajah se ...

She looked relaxed ..maine book kiya hai ...

Wow da ...hmm candle night dinner ..not bad ...

As the waiter came ...she placed order of all his favorite things ...he looked up with pride at her ...

Da...subhah se I love you nahi bola ...bolu ...

She kept quiet ...I love you Da ...bahut acaha laga ...

As they silently ate their food she smiled looking at him ...he looked at peace ...

Da...bas ek baar haath pakad sakta hu ...yeh sapna nahi hai na ...yakeen nahi ho raha hai ...

She extended her hand...his hand still felt warm ...as he touched her so softly as though she would crackle ...

Da ...sapne haqeekat bante hai na ...adhoore toh nahi rehte ...

Zain ..kuch sapne kabhi hasil nahi hote ...khauffnak darr joh shayad is jahem se kabhi na mit paaye ..

She smiled again ...Zain ...mai bahut thak chuki hu ...nafrat karte karte ...mere kabu main ahi hai kuch ...aur mai nahi jaanti tumhe kaise samjho...please wapas chale jao ...mai tumhe nahi chahti ...tum mere jitni nazdeek rahoge utni hi chot khaoge ...chale jao please

He looked down for a second ...Da...agar tumhe sach ka pata chalega ...toh tumhari soch badlegi ...mujhe sirf ek mauka chaiye ...meri hi galti thi ..mujhe tumhe bahut pehle rokna chahiye tha ..dono mauke gavaye maine...

mujhe pata hai tum bhi bahut dard mai ho...azaad karo...khud koh ...saara dard bahar nikalo ...dil mai sirf pyaar bachega Da ...humara rishta itna kamzoor nahi hai

Zain ..rishta toot chukka hai ...mat ummed mai jiyo...tumhara chehra mujhe sukoon se door karta hai ...aur ek waqt yehi mujhe Jannat deta tha ...mai badal chuki hu ..par tum ab bhi wahi khade ho ..laut jao...isse pehle ki mai kuch aisa karu ..jiska dard mere khuda bhi nahi mita paaye..

Maine zindagi mai humesha pyaar diya hai...aaj joh mai hu ...mere astitva aisa nahi hai ..aur yeh baat jab mujhe khud yakken nahi hai ..toh duniya kya samjhegi ...nafrat karna aasan hai mere liye ...pyaar mushkil ..aur tumhe uski kimat har din chukani padti hai ...

Zain smiled ...Da ...mai bahut khush hu ...shayad meri koshish hai joh aaj atleast tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho...bas dil ki suno...dimaag ki nahi ...

Zain ...wapas jao ...

Da...mera pehla bhi yehi javab tha ...ab bhi wahi hai ...meri kismet ka faisla...tumhari haton mai hai ..nahi laut sakta ab ...bahut daer ho chuk hai ...

She got up...as they had finished their dinner ...bahut samjhaya ...pyaar se ..bahut satya ...par tum maanoge nahi ...shayad hum zindagibhar aise he rahe ...mai nahi laut sakti...

haa tum chaho to Alisha se baat kar sakti hu ...acchi hai who bahut ...khush rahoge tum dono...nikaah kar lo

He held her hand ...Da ...who dost hai ...tumhari jagah koi nahi le sakta ...iss zindagi mai toh nahi ...aur mai yaha sirf tumhara dard mitane aaya hu ...

mai jaanta hu tumhe ab bhi pyaar hai ...parvaah hai ...bas dakh rakha hai ..jis din yeh nakaab hatega ..tum pehchaan logi ...aapne aap koh aur mujhe bhi ...

Bas ...Zain ...koi fayda nahi hai ...she walked out as he sat and saw her dwindling shadow...was she right ...as time had elapsed ...the hope was breaking out ..how long will he sustain ...as the day of his final path was coming closer to him...he had a very bad feeling ...

He walked behind her ...

Da...she turned back...

Bahut khoobsurat lamha tha ..ek khoobsurat biwi ke saath ...khuda kare aise lamhe aur bakshe mujhe...uski inayaat tum par humesha banaye rahe ...dua padh sakta hu ...

She didn't speak ..he went and kept his hand on her head ...blowing the dua after his eyes opened...she remembered his care when he had saved her from the cylinder blast ...Zain ..her love ...her hate ...was still waiting ...she quickly turned back to hide her tears ...

Ab kya ...subhah ka breakfast bhi yeho karoge ...

Chalo ...

He smiled and walked behind...love ..he was getting his share in trickling drops ..the ocean was still barren ...

lamha lamha ..teri yaad chod jaata hai...

nami in ankon ki ek adhoori dastaan likh jaat hai ...

umeed ka daman kabhi nahi chodenge ...

tumse ab kabhi nahi muh modenge ...

SIM

Pre-cap : A difficult time ...as her efforts intensify to push him away ...and he holds on ...

Empotions . It's about motions , it's about feelings , it's a tale which needs to be felt . Guilt , Fear , Hatred but deep down Inconditional Love , Aaliya is an erased version of herself , it's horrible how pain can damage the soul of a person . But these two chapters prove one thing if he goes away from her she would not be able to beAr it was a small moment yet it spoke so much , another particularity is the characterization be it La , Zain's true friend or Rizwan the one who was with Zain the first time he met Gabbar . Beintehaa Ishq it's about love true love !

P.s if you could make a cover for Bi Ishq what would it be like ?

Sorry for commenting lately actually I was buy but I read your those 3 chapters(22, 23 & 24). I liked those chapters also and today one also as usual you are amazing. Keep going on with the flow of your story as it is you planned. Don't ever stop writing there are lots of readers who admire and liked your work including me. You are really an amazing writer. Good to know that you keep with the decision to continue your work. Without you day is incomplete. Loved you sim and I admire your work, never stop writing. I joined this forum last month and I was a silent reader, your work push me to comment on your work and appreciate your work. I also liked other writers who wrote on Indian forum. All are good in their work but what a writer wants is the apprection from the reader for their work. And you get in good numbers and in very good words who liked your work so carry on with the flow. It's sad that this story is going to end next week. This is one of the story which I don't want to be finished. But I know it's has to be end. But you have to promise that you will come with the new story.

great chaps...loved ...im glad to know aaliya spoke her heart out a bit ...bt she still wants him to go back coz she dosnt want him hurt anymore ...bt zain as usual is adamant on his decision ;) ...bt one thing i want to know wat has doc. Das told zain?? ...cont soon !!

wow I just loved it very well written u describe their emotions so beautifully no one can write as intense as u write I'm in love with this ff n who thought its a humiliation of love then he/she don't know what is love Sim u r the great writer cont soon n thanks a lot for all d pms sorry for commenting late
sanjana