FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 51

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

heart wrenching update

beautifully written

Originally posted by: harsh_pree

Inshallah zain will get his aliya back..
Feeling bad for both..
Beautifully written..
Cont soon..


Mariya

Originally posted by: arohi_

Read chapters 13, 14, 15 & 16 today in one go. While reading went through the same fellings that they both went through. In the end, now I left with no words again to express. Just to tell you that you have written very beautifully.U are really a great writer with a magic only few people have and u are one of them. Love for u increasing day by day and word by word.
Love u a lot sim, always stay bless.

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

Emotional update...really loved it...aaliya's pain I can understand... Bt zain is suffering more than her nw :(...I think she should forgive him...plz cont soon !!

Originally posted by: nashfa

Emotional update

Poor zain i just wanna hug him

i think she should forgive him

i need to read the precap

continue soon

Riya

Originally posted by: manny136

Wow man aliya did it again but zain is getting to er and her reaction though extreme is taking her to her breaking point. Poor zain how much will the guy go through lol Aliya is so hurt and confused her judgement is getting clouded and so her actions going to the extreme. Though this was a mini blow up soon a big one is coming. Cant wait for the next update, great chapter btw.

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

CONGRATULATIONS!!!

for thread 2.

Sim,

Some love stories cannot be predicted, and I seriously cannot get a slightest glint of the further story.

According to me,maybe,one of the most difficult things in writing is to maintain the character,It can change abruptly but not as abrupt so that the reader feels dazed with the character.

Rhea's petulant,penalty wala behavior to Aaliya's mature behavior,its amazingly portrayed.

A peculiar kind of feeling provokes,(honestly,I never experienced that feeling before)while reading Zain's love and Aaliya's confused state between whats right and wrong.

So many feelings- JEALOUSY,LOVE,HATRED,ANGER,SORROW,DISTRESS all are so perfectly written that you can understand the difference but they are perfectly blended too

We can so properly understand the dept of their love.

Aaliya wants him to realize the value of the gift of LIFE.

That moment,when nurse insults Zain in front of him,unaware,unintentionally,that was the time when I was crying like an idiot,

I don't have enough words to tell you how lucky I feel to read something like this,Zain makes me believe true love exists and there are so many things

When you like a book,you start using its sentences or phrases in your practical life,we all call them quotes.

There are so many sentences in Beintehaa Ishq I would never be able to forget,

Sometimes you read something and it fills you with this weird evangelical zeal,and you become convinced that the shattered world will never be put together unless and until all living humans read it! - ah! Not my words,but they depict my feelings.

I want to scream and tell everyone to read it!!

But nor will everyone understand it neither will everyone understand me*sigh*

And there are yet some incomprehensible feelings which are just palpable,I can't write them

Everything what I have written

Just loving this rollercoaster ride.

There is always that desire that Bi Ishq should not end,

and it won't!!

It will always be cherished in my memory,just like our Beintehaa ZaYa

Love you

And Thank You😳

I know i was supposed to update on Saturday and its still friday night. But I just couldnt stop myself😆.All your responses were overwhelming ...and its really bowls me out. I still see few people have cloudy thoughts, few asking when is it going to end. I have 15 more chapters to go and then I am off for a road trip for few days. so this story is ending by next week, maybe multiple updates over the weekend.

I know the last note was too long, and the person who had the audacity of masking behind multiple Ids to mock others and name call people just proves one thing, desperation. So desperate for revenge and mocking that these small herd of people are cyber bullies. When they dont leave big stars I am really a small fish😆. if you blv this zaya FF is demeaning love, glorifying one character over another, then maybe u nvr ever understood Zaya. Claiming to love someone, dsnt mke u a fan, prove it.I challenge those dimwits to come ahead and write even a single chapter as intense as what i write, leave apart a chapter they cant even write 145 characters of one good thing abt anyone. Its really sad to see people stooping to such degrading levels, I will not stop writing, this is my story and i will say it my way. You want to read ...read ...mock ...go ahead ...i have tonnes who say this is good and i blv thm over the handful few who as it is have no existence in my life. i dont care,I write cause i want to tell u a story a diff one, its long a bit dragged but it has all the elements tht i missed in BI. If u are bored, stop reading, if you are irritated stop reading, no one has asked you to sneak in and read and thn go crazy analysing it.

Enough of this ...😆

The only people cause of whom you all will see the upcoming chapters-Ann, Akansha, Shatakship,Nidhi,Ishu and Riya. This story is for u...and to all others who came and told me...this is worth their time ...

Love you all

Sim

Chapter 25

Khel Khel mai...

The morning when Aaliya saw him waiting near the car ...she felt he looked different ...

Good-morning Da ...he smiled still blowing his nose in the tissue ..

She didn't reply ...

Khadoos ...he spoke and sat in the car ...

Ek baat batao ...mere muh par Mujhse Nafrat Karo ka board hai kya ...

She starred back...thoda sa toh concession de sakti ho na ...jaise school mai recess hota hai waise ...time please ...kabhi ek smile ..galti se haat pakd lo ya slip hokar mere baho mai giro ...

By the way Da ..bahut smart lag rahi ho...she had worn a sweater ...and a stole ...woh topi tum par bahut hi cute lagti hai ...par gloves jitni thandi padi nahi hai ...he laughed in between his bouts of cough as her eyes deepened to see his pale face ...

she was still angry at him for sleeping out ...she had not slept the whole night and her headache was back ...

She eyed him as he laughed ...he was wearing his formal green shirt ...with no sweater ...Gram kapda kaha hai tumhare...

Da ...kapde pehne hai wahi bahut hai ab sab kuch itna garam hai ..toh kapde bhi garam ho hi gaye honge..she didn't realize that he was refereeing to his fever ...

Mazaak ke alava kuch aata hai tumhe ...

Haa...he smiled ...yeh stupid si hasi ...tumhe dekhkar apne aap hi fudak kar bahar aati hai ...

Zain ...jao aur sweater pehn kar aao ...

Sweater ...are mai Mumbai se aaya hu ...kashmir se nahi ...us sehar mai aaj tak kisine sweater dekha bhi nahi hoga ...

Toh aise chaloge ...

Toh ...Oh ..kahi who driver wali uniform phir se pehnane ka plan toh nahi hai na tumhara ...he looked angry at her ...

Andar jao aur Dad ki sweater pehan kar aao...

He sneezed...chachu ki...noways mai Zain Abdullah hu ...mera bhi koi standard hai ...yeh buzurgo ke kapde pehan kar ghumunga toh La toh shock ho jayegi...

aur who pyaare pyaare nanhe cute ladkiya joh mujhe dekh kar thandi ahe bharti hai ...who wahi jam jayegi ...chalo ...mujhe der ho rahi hai ...Madam ...

She shook her head ...stuborn just like her and starred back...baap re Da ...tumhari ankhein hai ya button ...kitni bahar aane lagi hai ..mai andarr dal du..she moved back...

Uttro aur peeche baitho...

Da...nahi mujhe tumhare saath hi baithna hai ...kal bhi driver banakar aage bithaya tha ..mujhe yaha saath mai baithna hai ...alag nahi

Peeche baitho ya gaadi se utro...

Jab dekho ...mujh par hukumat chalati rehti ho...dusht ...jaata hu

She watched his antics that had grown wild now ...

Agar jyada bole to muh par patti band dungi...

He extended his face ...dash board mai hai duct tape ...laga lo ...

She smirked and started the car ...he would never give up on her ...

The whole day ...he struggled ...but didn't let Aaliya know, he came early from his second job of taking tutions and waited ..it was just 5:30 and his fever had beamed ...body ache had taken over and tiredness of exertion was proving fatal ...he was sitting in the basket ball court when the ball hit him ...

Altaf ...aree yaar dekh kart toh game khelo ...he requested nicely ...not noticing that Aalisha and Aaliya were standing at his back...and ignoring his last nights commnents on him...not today ...a fight some other day ...today he was too sick and tired to even talk to this langoor

Zain ...kya hua lag gayi tumhe ...Altafs laugh that sounded straight like a gaabr singh laugh ..

Nahi ...Zain spoke angrily ...still ignoring his provocation

Bade nazuk ho tum ...Altaf went on irritating him

Accha ...tumhe bada knowledge hai mere bare mai...Zain had started to get angry

Rhea ke cousin ho na ...sab khabar rakhta hu...

Oh ...jassosi ...

accha hai lage raho...tumhare jaise iss duniya mai aur kai fizul log hai ...jinhe aapne kaam se matlab nahi hai ...par doosre ki life mai taakjhaak karne ka passion hai

Altaf cut him short ...Waise tumhe paise ki zaroorat hai ...do do jagah par kaam karte ho...

Zain kept quiet ..Altaf ...maine tumse paise maange the kya ...nahi na ..toh apni naak har cheez mai mat ghusedo ...

Zain ...agar naukri chaiye toh mere ghar par aa jao ...Zaroon ko dekh baal ki zaroorat hai ...tum karloge ..

Altaf ...zaroon tumhara bhai hai ...tumhe dekhbal karna mai kya sharam aati hai ...

Altaf came close to Zain now ...when Aalisha walked in between ..

Aree tum cutie koh kyu pareshaan kar rahe ho...

As Altaf mocked ...cutie ...hmm...bada cute sa naam hai ...

Rhea walked from back...and didn't say anything ...

Aalisha felt bad and started fighting with Altaf ...

Altaf sudhar jao abhi bhi waqt hai ...who tumhe do minute mai theek kar dega ...yeh joh tumhara ghamand hai na ...basket ball mai ...bas do minute mai ..kyu cutie ..

La looked at Zain, who was as it is tired and sneezing ...blowing his now red nose ...trying to still sit straight as his body was engulfed in fever

he looked at Aaliya ... and spoke to Aalisha

La...rehne do ...kuch log fizul hote hai ..muh mat lago...aapka muh ganda hoga ..

Aalisha bursted out in a laughter ...cutie kya dialogue maarte ho tum ...clean bowled ..kyu Altaf wicket gul ho gayi tumhari

Oh ...Sir ...chalo ek game ho jaaye...joh jeetega ...who Rhea koh date par le jayega ...Altaf boasted without looking at Rhea ...making Zain lose and winning his date would be a double treat ...

Alliya spoke firmly now ...Altaf ...

Zain turned back anticipating her anger ...now Altaf is going to get what he normally gets ...a big one ...he was smirking quietly waiting for the fireworks to begin ...

Good luck ...mai tumhe cheer karungi ...

Zain looked shocked...how can she agree for the bet ...La kept a hand on Zains shoulder ...mai bhi hu cutie ke saath dekhte hai ...kaun jeet ta hai ...

The match started ...a three point goal ...just throwing the ball towards the basket from a point on the court was decided ...5 shots were to be played ...

Altaf went first ...Aaliya cheered for him as Zain looked at her ...igniting his senses ...of being mocked and ignored at the same time...

for a moment he was happy to hear her voice even in revenge, she looked free ..her soul lingered away from the haunting past ...

Altaf ...jeet kar aana ...her hooting made Altaf misjudge one shot and he ended up with 4/5 ...

When Zain walked in his spot ...Aalisha cheered and clapped she whistled too...his head was aching and the fever had made his body ache worse

He could barely walk..but he didn't want to lose the bet ...he knew winning too will be a loss..since she would never reward him ..

it had been 15 days ...and there was no improvement her anger hatred everything was intact ...almost every day ...her taunts and words were harsher and harsher ...he was feeling his isolation was increasing the distance just expanding ...

just like how water freezes and takes the shape of a container ...not leaving any vacant spaces ...her hatred had filled up her heart ...his love was not able to seep in ...and her mind was still over shadowing her thoughts ...

Last night he had starred at her balcony for long ...till his eyes had started watering ...the cold wind chills were less biting as her way of breaking him ...the soul however he would try to make himself understand that one day her intensity will reduce,was now beginning to withdraw in a shell...scared that he might remain like this ...an outsider forever

Before going to the court he walked near her to drink water ...

Da...tayaar rehna ...date par jaane ke liye ...mere saath .aise peetunga tumhare is languor koh ki koi pedh par bhi jagah nahi milegi ...he giggled as he saw her angry face

He walked back and threw the ball the first three went in perfectly ...on the fourth he almost stumbled ...in his weakness ...his La cheered for him the legs refused to move as he realized he couldn't do it anymore ...as Altaf smirked and Aaliya held his gaze ...

He smiled at Aaliya and put the 4^th one ...it was tie ...

Altaf looked on tensed ...Zain mocked him and put the fifth basket ...perfect 5/5 ...he sat down there itself ...the fever resonating like flames now and his eyes burning ...his head had started spinning and the throat ran dry ...

Yeehhh his La came and was about to hug him ...he told her to stop..saying he is tired and wants to sit ...she still threw some flying kisses as Aaliyas face fell...she couldn't watch him with anyone ...

Sorry Rhea ...haar gaya ...Altaf put his head down ...Zain had bet him in his own game ...

Aalisha looked at him ...toh pehle prize Rhea ...aur doosri mai hu ..tumhe aise date par le jaungi ki yaad rakhoge ...kal shaam court mai milna...she again gave some flying kisses to Zain and left ...

Altaf walked away too keeping his eyes down...shaking his head in frustration as Aaliya walked close to Zain who was sitting down ...

Mil gaya sukoon ...jeet kar ...galatfehmi mai mat rehna ...koi date vate nahi mil rahi hai tumhe ...yeh lo ...gadi chalao ...