FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 52

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He got up not saying anything and sat in the car, the hands a bit shaky now...he knew he had to make her drive...so he decided to bug her ...the fever wont let him even sit down

The moment she sat ...he started coming close...

Tum sudharte kyu nahi ho...itna sab kuch ho gaya par harkatein nahi gayi ...

He smiled and again reduced the gap...

Utrro aur peeche baitho ...chalo jao ...

His trick worked ...as he slipped on the back seat ...unkown to her that he needed to sleep...

As they reached the house...he called Rehmaan ...

When the car reached Rehmans house...her dad was already waiting for him and Aaliya was surprised to see him at the gates...

Kya hua dad..aaj yaha kaise khade ho aap...

Rehman didn't answer and just helped Zain get down ...as Aaliya looked puzzled ...she didn't figure out why was Rehman helping Zain ...and what was wrong with him ...

Beta ...ghar ke andar chalo ...

Chahchu ...nahi ...aap sirf davai de dijiye ...

Zain ...kab zidd chodoge...

he looked at Aaliya ....kabhi nahi ...please chachu

Rehman took him to his room ...and gave him medicines...the fever had shot up ..

Kaha tha mat jao...par sunte kaha ho kisiki...

Ab lete rehna ...mai soup lata hu ...

Mai bana lunga ...khana bhi banana hai

Ab maar padegi mujhse ...chup chaap lete raho ...mai aata hu...

By the time he went ...soup was ready ...as Aaliya stood in the kitchen uneasy

Rehman looked at the bowl and her ...jao pila bhi do...

nahi aap dijye ...

As he was about to walk away ..she did ask ...usse bhook bhi lagi hogi ...mai kuch bana deti hu ...

Rehman turned back...Aaliya ...bhooka hai woh ...tumhare saath ke liye ..baat ke liye ..pyaar ke liye ...

He shook his head ...both were adamant ...as she turned her back ...not answering him

Rehman fed the soup to him as Aaliya watched from behind the curtains ...he never told her ..and she never realized ...he looked so pale...she just wanted to hug him ..she took out his snap ...a torn one...and hugged him tight ...

As night fell...she was worried ...he would not sleep inside and what if the fever rises at night ...she decided to use a trick...a bad one...

When Rehman gave the soup to Zain ...he was smiling ...

Aapki beti wakai chudail hai...mai itna bimaar hu ...par ek baar bhi nahi ayi...poocha bhi nahi..

Rehmaan smiled woh nahi toh kya baap toh aaya na apne damad ke paas ...chalo aur andar chalo ...

Nahi ...chachu subhah milte hai ...usse kehna aaj davai khud le le ...nahi chal sakta ...

Woh kha legi choti bacchi nahi hai ...

Haa par mai toh hu na ...bina usse dekhe neend nahi aati ...najane aaj kaise sounga ...

Zain please andar chalo ...

Goodnight chachu...

He smiled and pulled the blanket as his head was swaying from side to side ...

As he dozed off in her sleeping pill spiked soup...Aaliya walked out with Kashif ...and took Zain inside to the guest room...

Rehman had no clue ...till he walked at the middle of night to see if Zains fever had come down

As he walked past the guest room he saw Aaliya changing the towels of his forehead and caressing his face and hand as he slept on the bed ...

Their love was pure yet it was hurting ...Rehman smiled ...she still cared ...but her hatred had more control still...but things were improving she was analyzing her actions ..Zain would be happy to know that ...a small win ...Rehmaan walked back ...

As the fever went down ...she heard him blabbering ...Da..huggie do na ...ek baar ...

She hugged him tight ...crying her hearts out ...why was he making it difficult for him as well her ...she didn't want to see him hurt or broken ...yet she couldn't control her urges ...the anger and hatred would gush in ...as though someone had acidently opened a dam ...flooding her mind with visions ...she felt trapped in her own body now ...

Gaining her composure she asked Kashif to take him back...he shouldn't realize he was ever with her ...

That morning when he woke up ...he saw her door closed ...and his heart felt cold...she didn't care for him even when he had such a high fever ...she had killed a part of his love ...the coldness was imbibing his soul now...it was all futile...all futile...maybe Rehmaan was right ...he could never cure her

SIM

Pyaar ka rang aise chadta hai ...

...teri galo se meri hoton par utarta hai...

Teri ummed par yeh dil roz dhadkta hai ...

...shayad bepanna yeh tujhse pyaar joh karta hai ...

Pre-cap: A losing battle ...as Zains resolve gets dwindled by events ...will he resort to his last option ...

superb chapter...beautifully penned down...aww...zain he had fever still he played n won ...aaliya loves him so much ...she cares for him ...bt as u say her hatered is more than her love nw ...bt one day zain will stamped out her hate n get her love back :)
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Amzing update
Aliya taking care of zain..wow..this story is really amazing...you are a good writer...aliya hugged zain 😊
Beautifully written...i love this story very much...really loved it...
Take care
Cont soon



Mariya

Hi Sim

Roz doob jata hein suraj...

What to say to you Sim ? Because you see i don't have Words , everytime i read i try to say how much your Words touched me but this Time i am not able to these last three chapters just made me saw What is really BI Ishq , it's about inconditionnal love ! It's about Zan and Aaliya , our Zaya , your Zaya . Your characters are unique you know why ? Because they are like everyone , they all have a dark past , but they try to seek light , they are each other light , you know what touched me the most , you will find this a bit surprising yet it's Aaliya's love , because even in illness deep down she still loves him but she is afraid , she held him responsiblefor her state but the she will realize he is light than nobody will be able to separate them and talking about ourZain just a salute to him and a I love you he will understand . Those people who hurt you like this they are not even worth the attention , they really have got some problem but don't worry Main Hoon Naa( us readers ;D ) and sorry again for the late review you know when you don't update and I come to the forum and I realize that I have not a pm I feel ghali ghali please Sim never stop writing never ever ! Je t'aime Sim Sahiba The Great !

I loved the basket ball match ! That was a true slap on Altaf's face ! My poor Zain , fever is such a pain :( , I am afraid he is breaking down , because all his efforts are going vain , but this chapter added beauty to Aaliya's love her love masked by the hatred it reminded me the mammarziya scene , beautiful indeed I am waiting for her to melt to give her heart away to open her arms and tell him "Lag ja Gale" and that day will come I am sure it will Umeed par dounya kayam hai ! 15 chapters ? Nooo I want this to continue coz I love this but at the same time restless to know the new beginning that will bring the end of this story ! It has been days talking to you missing you !

Awesome update...
Aww.. poor zain had fever bt still played n won just for her aaliya.
aaliya still cares for him..
hope zain will knw it soon ..
bt dis is a sweet update...
Pls cont soon..
curious to know abt next.. :)

Sim , it was sooo sweet chapter😊

Sim...you yet again made me comment. You describe zain's selfless love for his aliya , his pain, his jealousy...everything so beautifully that i feel that i am actually watching it. Aliya maight be stubborn but she definitely has feelings for her kitkit. Your story is so gripping and unpredictable at times. I can only wish that the story ends on a happy note.