NEEDS! - Page 4

Originally posted by: aairahahmad

unres..

yipee...first one to reply...

i dont know what to write..

so wrote a poetry on them...

i hope you like it, coz i am not good with writing and all...

still i tried...

Your need in my life takes my mind,

As I always see you like a morning light,

My heart beats like a drum,

Whenever I see you,

Though I don't know why it is like that.

Is it the happiness,

Or the relief,

The shine which you bring along with yourself,

Or just the sheer
beauty of your presence.

The joy of living the life,

Or the hope to live it with you,

The feeling of being complete,

Or the dampness you bring in my drought soul.

You made me offer my spirit,

Gladly to you for one embrace,

All day thoughts of you tease me,

For when I see you,

Touch you,

I LIVE AGAIN.

So long as a fool,

I never searched for love,

Never waited for it,

Alas, thought I, that it was for brainless one,

And of course I was not one.

But yet you come,

With your presence,

And made me think,

The emptiness of my existence,

And The things I missed,

Or never at once pondered upon

And you made me LIVE AGAIN.

Warmness from your aura,

Seeped in my soul,

Care from your deeds,

Made me feel significant, eloquent and meaningful,

Love from you,

Surfeited my heart.

bye..

take care...

This is just absolutely, perfectly brilliant! Poetry is such a setene way of expressing the words of the heart and you've managed to collaborate and put forward all the emotions out babies feel towards each other. Eceryday they manage to rediscover themselves in the presence of each other and that enables their love to grow, their understanding to deepen and this relationship's roots to strengthen. Their touch...it reestablishes their trust in each other. Their eyes always manage to reignite rays oh hope repeatedly. They simply make each other feel alive; just like you said.

Babe... You have a real talent of expressing with words. Seriously... This is was amazing! Really look forward to reading more of your responses! You must never stop writing!

Love
Twinkle <3

as my vaccations r over now😊

Originally posted by: acaia

as my vaccations r over now😊

so from now onwards i'll comment late only

needs...😊

I m worried that tumhe diabetes hogayi to itne sweet comments read karke haan?😆

before going to sleep i read ur posts only

againthank u so much

luv u again❤️

Man I swear I seem to be running out of words to thank you guys. Need to make a special post for it I reckon.
Hahah I know I feel I'm getting diabetes from all the sweetness but it's all so warm and heartfelt!
Take care babe :)

Originally posted by: twinkle10

This is just absolutely, perfectly brilliant! Poetry is such a setene way of expressing the words of the heart and you've managed to collaborate and put forward all the emotions out babies feel towards each other. Eceryday they manage to rediscover themselves in the presence of each other and that enables their love to grow, their understanding to deepen and this relationship's roots to strengthen. Their touch...it reestablishes their trust in each other. Their eyes always manage to reignite rays oh hope repeatedly. They simply make each other feel alive; just like you said.

Babe... You have a real talent of expressing with words. Seriously... This is was amazing! Really look forward to reading more of your responses! You must never stop writing!

Love
Twinkle <3

@ Reya.. My sunny, Preesha, Sara, Pri and in case I've missed replying to any other lengthy responses... Sorry guys got no chance to sit on the computer yesterday and I just hate typing up lengthy posts as responses because I can't highlight and the spelling mistakes escalate on a new level. Have an early start to uni tomorrow so can't finish it off tonight either but will definitely reply to them in my breaks tomorrow. Love you all! <3