manan ss Happy Diwali My Monster (completed)

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Happy Diwali My Monster

(I am a huge manan fan,i was a person who used to just read comics and stuffs like that,but this manan made me read almost all their ss,os ff etc etc...this is my first ever attempt of writing a story or rather I wud like to call it as my imagination..pls do forgive me if there are mistakes.pls let me know improvmnts that I cud make.and give me suggestions also)

(This story is one day of Diwali in manan's life after almost 6 years from now.further details I will disclose through the story)

(the story revolves around nadini's pov)

Part 1

Zehanaseeb Zehanaseeb..tuje chahoon mein...

my alarm started ringng..

I searched for it on the table beside the bed with one hand , my eyes were still closed and after a bit battle finally I stopped it.Since I selpt last night too late (I had to do paper works for the upcoming international science conference) I was actually feeling very lazy to get up...but phir bhi mein utne ka mann bana liya..while stretching my body I cud feel something very heavy around my body...that is a "dhai kilo ka haath "around my neck...and "das kilo ka leg" entangled around my legs I turned around , It was none other than my very own MONSTER..he had held me so tightly as if I wud elope with some one...slowly slowly I removed his hand and leg from my body.bcoz I didnt want to disturb his sleep..I know he also might have cum very late and slept beside me without disturbing(.he has the spare key of our apartment).i got up from the bed and tied my hair..i turned back to see him...hw cute he was ..sleeping like a baby..hw can sumone call him a monster after watching this..But I will...definitety..bcz he is my monster with whom I am deeply and madly in love...he is sleeping with his chest facing the bed and his legss ( o my god yeh khabhi nahi sudarega).. as if he wanted to write" 4" using his legss... he was wearing his ever favorite so called boxers and a vest..and this reminded me of the day when I was stuck in his house after our not so famous shower(bcoz only we both knew abt it)...today this looks like a joke ..but dat day it took hell out of me...meanwhile I saw a pink note on the table it was written"luv u darling,tum so rahi thi isliye I didn't wake u up") now .In this 20th century Manik Malhotra The Rockstar Of India still used to write pink notes ..ha ha ...then suddenly I heard door bell..and I ran towards the door..before it rings again and opned the door.I knew it wud be kaka

Me : Ram ram kaka..(he's our dhoodhwale kaka an old man with white dhaadi ,and a typical doodh wala looks)and I gave him a jaar

Kaka :Ram ram bitiya

Me: aaj aap jaldi aagye kaka

Kaka: wo bitiya aaj Diwali hein naa ..bus socha ki jaldi sabko dhood dekhe ghar jaaun..waha bohot kaam pada hain na.,aur tum to jaanti ho ki kaaki ki tabiyat bhi teek nahi hai.

Me:oh... haan kaka mein toh bhool hi gayi aaj toh Diwali hain..Happy Diwali kaka..meanwhile he had done with pouring the milk into jar which I gave him

Kaka: tumhe bhi..toh phir chalta hoon..

Me: ek minute rukiyee kaka mein abhi ayi

(I ran into our room and searched for monstuu's wallet and took out 1000rs from it and went to kaka.).

Me: yeh lijiye kaka I gave it to him

Kaka:par bitiya dhoodh ka paisa toh de diya tha..yehh..phir

Me: yeh dhoodh ka paisa nahi hai aaj Diwali hai na toh meri taraf se aap ke liya ek chota sa tofaa..

Kaka: nahi nahi bitiya...iski koyi zaroorat nahi hain..agar chahiye toh mein maang loonga

Me :nahi...aapko yeh lena padegaa..aap mujhe betiya bulathe ho ki nahi?

Kaka :haan

Me:toh appko yeh rakhna hi padegaa...agar beti ka darja diya hein toh use nibhane bhi dijiyee na..

Kaka: betiii voo...tumara yeh pyaar hi kaafi hai...

Me:agar aisa hain toh aap munni keliye kuch kharred lijiye meri taraf se..plzzz plzzz ab na mat boliyeee

Kaka: baatom me tumse kaun jeet sakta hain

Me: yeh huyi na baat

(I gave it to him and touched hs feet...and said ab badle me mujhe aashirvaad dijiyee..he touched my head and blessed me saying hamesha khush raho,sada suhagan raho and I saw a lone tear in his eyes as that was in my eyes too, he cupped my face and said iss duniya mein har kisi baap ko tumari jaise pyaari beti milee..)

Me: ab bas bhi kijiye itna upar math udaoo mujhee varna mein roo dungii...aur kaki ko mera Namaste kehnaa...

Kaka :toh phir mein chalta hoon..

Me: bye kaka..and he steps down..

(There was a huge smile on my face along with tears..i dnt knw y I was feeling damn happy ..may b isse kehte hai khushi ke ansoo)

(But my this huge smile didnt go unnoticed by Anju aunty...our padosan .she lives with her family. in d apartment just opposite to ours..standing by our door I cud see their living room there she was busy in cleaning the glass table and vase on it.)

Anju aunty: kyun aaj subh subha chaand nikal aya hai kyaa...itna kyun muskura rahi hoo..

Me: vooo kuch nahi aunty ..kaka se baat kar rahi thi naa isliyee...kitne sweet hai wohh..

Anju aunty: hain maine dekha tum dono ko baat karte huyee..tumaharii tayaari kaha tak hui Diwali ki.kya mittayi bana rahi hoo..aaj

Me: kaka ne jab yaad dilaya tab jaake mujhe yaad aya ki Diwali aaj hain..do din pehle tak yaad tha.. par kal hospital se aane ke baad bhool hi gayi..

Anju aunty: hospital ?kyun hospital kyun gayi thi?kya huva tume?

Me: ( aree yeh kya nikal gaya mere muh se..ayiappa save me) nahi voo aunty voo...tohh mein...poonam ke saath gayii thi(thank god perfect time pe apne save karliya)

Anju aunty ;ohh tumari friend..use kya hua?

Me: use usee..toh haa, bhukaar thaa..isliyee(ayappa pakadi toh nahi jaaungi na...agar poonam abhi idhar agayi toh...ayappa mujhe na jhoot bolna hi nai chahye tha...manik teek kehta hai agar bolna nahi aata toh mein bolti kyun hoon..par mein sach aunty ko bhi toh nahi bata sakti abhi..)

Anju aunty: achaa phir tik hai baatein khatam karthe hai..varna hum dono puri diwalii yahaa khade khade bhitaalengee..(she intends to go then again turns..)mene thode rasgullee banaye hainn..neeru ke haath mein bejh dungi..aur agar khana banana mein tume kuch madad chahiye toh puch lene...pichalee baar ki tarah mat karnaa(and she bursts out laughing)..tik haii...

Me: (with a fake smile)ok aunty bye...I waved at her...with embarrassment.( my mind was full of her words...pichhle baar ki tarah..kya yeh aaj yaad dilana zaroori thaa kyaa..i recollected wat exactly happened tab hamari nayi nayi shaadi huyi thi..aur muje khana banana bilkul nahi aata tha,Anju aunty ne mujhe chote mote dishes banana sikhye..the...par manik ko apna pyaar,talent dikaane ki bohot jaldi thi mujhe..aur jise tik se roti nahi banani aati thi vo chali hyderabadi biriyani banane...pura din meine manik ko wait karavaya..aur becharaa bhuk se mar raha thaa...mein usee pet bhar biriyani khilana chahti thi.. .par jab biriyani bani..voh kuch Arunachal Pradesh biriyani lag rahi thi...then we ended up in a restaurant . par aaj bhi jab bhi manik,aunty,aur mein ek saath hote tho mein yehi pray karti hoon ki cooking topic kabhi na aaye varna vo dono milke mera mazak udathe udathe mar denge ...but today im not that bad cook,sachi bolu toh kaafi achii cook hoon,cabir aur aliya ko mera chiken stew bohot pasand hain..though I am vegetarian...I cook non veg also..)

Cabir hamesha kahta hai ki nandini ke haaton mein jaadu hai aur tab maanik bolta hai.

Manik: ha ha..kyu nahi..ek baar uskaa punch bhi tu khake dek bohot tasty haii tujhe..teri nani nana dada dai sab yaad aa jayenge...)

Yeh sab sochte sochte mein kitchen pahunch gayii and I turned on the gas..aur dhoodh boil karneko rakha hi taa ki...

Manik: nanduuu nanduuu kaha ho tum

(mujhe pata tha ki vo kyun chila raha hain.uthe tym he always wanted me by his side,aur kahegahta hai ki jab tum utti mujhe kyun nahi utayaa..aur ek aur baath maanik malhotra pichale 2 saal se subha saath bhaje uttha hain aur tho aur rihaaz bhi karta hai..and that's called nandu effect or sangat ka asar) I went running to him sat beside the bed and held his hand

Manik :kahan thi tum,kitne der se bhula raha hoon, tumare ghappe shappe khatam ho toh fursat mile naa mere liye

Me:aree mere monster itni jaldi gussa ho gaya...

Manik: mein mazak nahi kar raha tha.aur mujhe utaya kyun nahi.

Me: aisa kuch nahi hai baba..bus vo ramu kaka aur anju aunty se baat kar rahi thi...

(Manik makes a angry face)

Me:acha sorry baba i'm really sorry..dekho kaan bhi pakad liyaa...

Manik doesn't respond

Me: tik phir...tum kuch bhi bolo mein vo karthi hoon..

(His face lightens up )

Manik:(He comes near to me..runs his fingers around my shoulders pulls me closer as he does always and asks huskily in my ears) tum sach me kuch bhi karne ko tayaarr hooo..bolo..

(Now I understood want he wanted... as he wasn't angry anymore I also thought to play with him)

I:( started caressing his neck, nd went so close to him..) haan bolo kya chahiye tume

Manik:( excitedly) vahii jo tumse achaa is duniyaa mein aur koi nahi jaanta

Me: achaa vooo,ya okk.( And my lips went so close to his lips that he closed his eyes,I caressed his eyes , forehead, cheeks ,lips with my fingers,and mr manik malhotra was all set ready for aa deep long kiss,I cud feel his breath growing faster and faster..the very next moment I bit on his cheeks and ranaway)

Manik :ouch...you...nandini I m not gonna lev you today...mein apna kiss leke rahoongaa

Me:oh really?? dekhte hai..pehle jaake brush karke aao phir sochungi...

Hearing this maanik rushes to washroom with a his famous smirk...

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wow
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awesome start
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why nandu went to hospital?????
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y you stopped yaar???
its freaking good..
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now i wish u wont delay to update the next and longer update...😊

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Part 2

(Maanik ke haatho se bachte bachte I reached kitchen...ayiappaa...ruko ruko ruko...o...thank god gas off karliya nahi toh vo dhoodh boil karte karte baahar aajata...acha hua aaj ek bhi drop bahar nahi gira..nahi tho hamesha thoda tho bahar aa hi jata hain aur kabhi kabhi toh pura ka puraa dhoodh...pata nahi hamesha bhool jati hoon ki dhoodh garam karne rakhke ayi hoon)

Then I soon started making coffee..

Meanwhile I got a call..it was from my navya

Me:happy Diwali Navya

Navya :happy Diwali nandu, tumhare manik maharaj ute ki nahi

Me:aa uth gaya hai..cabir aur chutki kahan hein

Navya: (cabir mera phn do vapas mujhe baat karne do na usese, cabir:nahi mujhe do..mujhe use do baatein karni hain)

Me:aree kya chal raha hain wahan mera kaan phat raha hain...tum dono ki ladayi khatam ho uske baad mujhe call karna

Cabir:ruko ruko nandu..

Me:haan bolo cabir ,happy Diwali

Cabir:happy ki aise ki taisi..woh toh khud pagal hain hi tumhare pyaar mein,dhere dhere hume bhi paagal kardega

Me:kya hua cabir,manik ne kya kiya

Cabir:yeh puchoo ki usne kya nahi kiya, tume pata hain na kal lonavla mein show thaa...performance khatam hote hi hum sabki almost phat chuki thi I juzt wanted to crash somewhere..par tumare uss monster ko pata nahi kya bhoot chada hua tha..use tabhi ke tabhi ghar lautna tha,use apne nandu ke saath Diwali manana tha..aur ke aur raat ke teen bhaje shop khulvake gift khareeda

Me : (I was really feeling proud of him, me and our love)toh phir usne kya khareeda

Cabira:kya khareeda...oh shit meine yeh kya bol diya yeh toh uska surprise tha na

Ab toh mein aaj iss Diwali ke shubh avasar par shaheed ho jaaungaa .plss nandu manik ko nahi batana..

Me: (laughing)ok baba nahi bataungi

Cabir:ok then...aur tumhare iss madhubala ko samjao itna late ghar aya tha aur upar se yeh sone nahi deh rahi india ke top drummer ko saaf safayi karne ko keh rahi hai

Me:acha tik hain navya ko phn do..

Navya:drummer hoga vo stage par ghar me drummer mein hoon aur vo mera drums..vo sab chodo..oh gayi tum dono ki ladayi

Me:almost oh gayi..actually tumne phn kyun kiya tha

Navya:acha voh..isliye ki..tumse poochna tha ki tum konsi mittayi bana rahi ho,socha ki hum dono alag alag banayenge

Me:voh navya meine kuch socha nahi hain,tum apne kaam khatam karke jaldi idhar aa jaana phir banayenge

Navya:haan yeh toh acha idea hai..toh phir aisa hi karenge..ok bye

I ended up the call

Me: maaanikk.(itni dher se who bahar nahi nikala).manik jaldi aao coffee ready hai( I took two cups of coffe in a tray and also held news paper under the tray to go through the hot news in the city)

I reached the hall ,manik wasn't there...again I shouted manik kaha ho tum..aao na coffee tandi ho rahi hain ..i got scared for a second...but but the very next second I found a pair of hands tightening around my waist from backside...he caught me firmly..and rested his chin on my shoulder and whispered:tume kya laga tum itni aasani se bach jaogi..Mrs Malhotra..

Ayiappa..now literally I'm caught manik malhotra ke haato se bachna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hain...

Me:manik manik...who toh mein bas aisi hi

Manik: (imitating my voice)kaise hi??

Me:dekho mere haat mein garam garam coffee hain ,If I try to escape yeh mere haatom me ghir jaayega..GARAM GARAM COFFEE(I stressed that garam garam..bcoz I knw mera monster aisa kuch bhi jisse mein hurt ho jaaun...and also this was a kind of emotional atyachaar)

His grip lossened around my waist..the very next moment I escaped to our favorite holiday destination in our apartment

The Balcony.

.It wasn't a simple balcony..it was very well decorated by mr &mrs malhotra..we had pots with small rose plant,fish bowl on one side ,our hope tree that he gifted during fusion concert on the other side ,small coffee table a pair of chair..and the next one is my most favorite..a two seated swing...kabhi kabhi toh hum dono baate karte karte,stars ,fireflies ko dekhte uspe hi so jaate the..cuddling each other.. and yahi vo jagah hain jahan we use to have almost all d discussions..

I kept the tray on the table took one cup ,and started going through news paper..meanwhile manik also reached and took his cup..and leaned towards the handrill of balcony watching the people on the roads..since we were on the 12th floor it gave us a pretty good view..

Manik:toh madam aaj ki taza khabar kya hain ?

Me:aaj ki taza khabar hain...the rockstar of india manik malhotra apni patni se milne aya hain ...vo bhi do dino baad..

Manik :really?

Me:kyun yeh ek badi news toh huyi na?varna use kab tym milta hain apni wife ko dene keliye

Maniks face looked saddened and he went to swing

Manik:nandu tume sachem bura lag raha hain?

Me:haan(meine toh bas use pareshaan karne ke liye bol diya)

Manik: nandu im really sorry muje pata hai ki mein tumhe teek se time nahi de paa raha hoon,tum jaanti ho na apne band.ko well established banana ke liye kya kya karna padtha hain.hume aajkal itne saare offers aate hain ...aur hum deny bhi nahi kar sakte,aur to aur office ka kaam bhi...aur jab mein free hota hoon toh tum apne studies aur research pe busy ho jaati ho..dekho im not trying to give an excuse ..but mein kya karoon...mein bhi yahi chahta ho pura time tumare saath spend..karoo..

(It was truly emotional and I cudnt take it anymore..i took the cup from him and kept it on the table.. went near him and sat in his lap..i cupped his face)

Me:manik mein toh bas aise hi mazak kar rahi thi...i understand manik..mujhe pata hain agar tumhe ek second bhi free mila toh tum dhodke mere pass aaoge..manik yeh sab hota hai it's a part of growing up naa..hum dono ko apne apne careers banane hai ,apni apni identities banani hain..ab hum thoda adjust karlenge once we hav reached sumwhwre phir hum relax karenge..aur phir hume apne voh saare sapna bhi toh pura karna hai na jo humne milke dekhe hai.

Manik:toh you are ok now..

Me:nahi...

Manik :kyu?

Me: (I moved closer to his face):kyunki aj subhah se mere patidev mere piche kisi chiz keliye pade huve hain aur mein vo nahi diya

Manik:ok..toh tum apne patidev ko manane kiliye ready ho..

Me:mein toh always ready rahti hoon par vo khadoos muje karne nahi deta

Manik:jhootiii...(he started tickling me)

Me:manik nahi plzz plzz...(.i cudnt stop my laughter)manik

He stopped it ..and crashed on my lips.,I too responded back eventually it ended up in a deep passionate kiss

I moved back..and started moving

Manik:ab kya hua,kahan ja rahi ho?

Me: I pulled his cheeks and said romance hum baadme karlenge..aaj Diwali hain itna sara kaam pada hain ghar mein

Manik:oh yaa aaj Diwali hai..mein toh bhool hi gaya

Me:oh to aap Diwali tak bhool gaye

Manik:voh itna busy tha na

Me: achaa...saying this I got up from his lap(In my thoughts..jhoote mujhe pata hain ki tum nahi bhule ho ..dont prentnd in front of ur nandu manik..iss baar tum jeet hi nahi sakte manik..kyunki mere pass tumhare liye worlds best gift hai) wait and watch..😊

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it's ammazing..
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IS NANDU PREGNENT.HOPE SO INTRESTING YAR.SUCH A NYC CHAPTER WELL DONE DEAR.I LIKED IT NEXT TYM WEN U WILL UPDATE PLZ PM ME

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