manan ss Happy Diwali My Monster (completed) - Page 3

hey dea... it was very touchy update.. love the way you kept the flow of ur story... :) keep writing such amzing story..

such a beautifull updtd...
loved it .

Thank you so much for all your comments..it means a lot me ...be frank enugh to give me suggestions,negative points and it will truly improve my writing..

wow...its really awesome...really amazing..u penned it so beautifully...pls continue asap...take care..

one personal question...r u from kerala ...????

Part 4

(I reached dining table where he was ready with the breakfast...bread toast with butter for me ,and omlete for him,we started having it)

Manik:hws it...

Me:so sweet as my husband..

Manik: achaa...

Me:mein shopping ki list banake tumhe deti...ok

Manik:ok...pehle tum pura brkfast finish karo ..uske baad...

(I finished mine...i was about to pull my chair ...)

Manik: nandini kal tum kahan gayi thi..

Me:kyun mein...toh kahi nayi gayi thi...(aiyappa lagta hai pakkadi gayi)

Manik:kal tumne half day lev kyun liya tha?

Me:voh to bas aise...(hw did he come to knw..shit ab kya bolo)

Manik: jyaada jhoot mat socho..meine kal Poonam ko call kiya tha tab usne bataayaa. Tumhara phn nahi mil raha tha so I called her..tab pata chala ki tum nikal chuki ho dopahar ko hi.. I didn't ask u bcoz I thot u wud tell me...but u r acting so normal..bolo kya chupa rahi ho..

Me: (oh poonam ki bachhi voh tum thi...she's my collegue more than that she is maanik's chamchi and a big fan..manik ne use mere piche jasoos banake rakha hai,its not bcz he has a doubt on me,,its bcz one day in office ,I fainted due stress and work pressure,aur meine yeh baat manik ko do din baad batayi ..kyunki mujhe pata tha agar mein yeh pehle batati toh vo show ke liye nahi jaata aur mere pass rehtaa..aur jis din meine bataya toh mujhe itni daant padi jitni puri zindagi mein nahi mili thi,yahan thak ki fab 5 bhi usko accompany kar rahe the...then very next day onwards manik ne poonam se meri nazar rakhne ko kaha aur voh hain ki manik ko har khabar sunati hai maine kya khaya ,kitana khaya ,kya piya, kitne baar pani piya kinte baar washroom gayi,..and all that...pehle toh I was damn pissed off par ab aadat ho chuki hai..jab manik se kaha toh kehne laga ki us din jhoot nahi bolthi toh yeh sab nahi hota...ab bhugtoo...aisa nahi hai ki yeh sab vo free mein karti thi..badleme monthly use manik ke saath 2 3 selfies,and auto graph chaiye hote hain apne social networking site mein flaunt karne keliyee...kabhi kabhi toh sochti hoon selfies toh ok...par yeh har mahine 2 3 autograph kyu leti hain..manik ka autograph badalta thodi na hain har mahine?kahin yeh bahaar jake bechti toh nahi...I dnt knw..yeh un dono ki deal thi..but to be very frank who bhohot achi hain,mere starting days,when I ws struggling between ghar ke kaam, manik,my research works ,studies she had really helped me... )

Manik kya soch rahi ho?answer me

Me:.no no..manik kuch nahi chupa rahi..woh to bass shopping keliye gayi thi ,aaj Diwali hain na

Manik:acha shopping keliye gayi thi,toh phir aaj mujhe kyun bhej rahi ho...

Me:vo pura saaman nahi mila na isliye...(I m sorry manik...ek bade khushi ke liye ek chutku sa jhoot to banta hain na)

Manik:are u sure?

Me: (with a fake smile)..yah..i got up from the seat and rushed to the kitchen bcoz two more seconds in front of him ...,mere muh se saara truth bahar aa jata

He came to kitchen with his plate

Manik:I knw u r leing ...I'll wait for 1 more day...uske baad I'll handle it my way ok..

(he was literally threatening...he didn't want any more lie's to brk our relation)

Me:mmm...ab tum jao ready oh jao ...aur apne use kiye huye kapade bahar rakh do...mein washing machine on karne jaa rahi hoon

Manik: ok...

(I started cleaning my kitchen and cooked lunch...saare kapade bhi wash karne ke liye dal diye so that I can now completely move on with my Diwali special safayii nd all by d tym meine manik ko dene keliye list bhi bana liya tha...)

Manik: nandu...i'm ready..come here..dekho meri belt nahi mil rahi

Me: ( from the kitchen) aayi baba

(I reached bedroom and searched for the belt it was hung on a stand just behind him I pulled his ears..and)

Me:manik...yeh kya hain?

Manik: yeh...yahan kaise aya meine toh yahan doondha tha...

Me: oh really...(pulled his ears more strongly.).

Manik: ouch...soory madam...tumhari aadat pad gayi hain na issliyee...

(I freed him)

Me: butter lagana band karo..and go...(we started walking to the hall.)

(I took the list form kitchen and handed over to him...he was busy checking his wallet for credit ,debit cards...)

Manik:ok all set..bye

Me:manik who subah meine tumhare wallet se 1000 rs liye the...vo kaka..

Before I cud complete

Manik:meine tumse kuch poocha? Nahi na?so y r u explaining me?tumahara hi toh hain...

Me: manik...

Manik:just shut up ok...mein jaa raha hoon(saying this he kissed my cheeks )

Me:bye...aur ek minute manik(he turned )now its almost 9:30am...nd I want u to be back by 12 ok...apne girl fans ke beech mein phase mat rahna...if ur late na...mein tumhare voh c nd d option cancel kardoongi...(I said this giving him an angry luk)

(he came running to me , pulled my cheeks )

Manik: Itni chotti chotti biwiyaan itni badi badi baathein nahi..kartii...mein jaldi aajaunga..

aur mere fans ko keh doonga "ki ghar time par nahi pahunche toh biwi muje dhaantegi...so plz muje jaane do"

Me: manik...(kuch aur bhi bolna tha ..par yaad nahi aa raha)

Manik: ok bye...

(He left with car keys...I got back into my work...I had done with all show pieces,sofa's chairs...then I entered music room actually this is a 2 bedroom apartment...but one of our bed room has been converted to music room...uss room ko humne differently set kiya huva hai..its sound proof so that we don't disturb our neighbrs ..iss room ke andar fab 5 ke hare k member ka instrument hai..guitars, piano, drums, mike,speakers.etc etc...manik always wanted everybody to practice together...aur iss room ko convert karne ka idea mera tha...har performance k eek din pehle sabi yahin practice karte hai..kabhi kabhi toh hum sab milkar terrace pe chale jaate...once fab 5 start with the performance na nobody can stop them...tab tak dusre flats,aparmants ke log apne apne terrace ya balcony se hume ghoor rahe hote hain...

I cleaned everything and got out from there...now only one more place is left ...our bed room

Our favourite..place..

Ceiling of our bedroom is decorated with fluroscent stars(stickers) that illuminate wen the lights are off,so that it feels lyk we are sleeping under sky...in one corner we had our fire flies...bechhare hamesha glow kar kar ke thakke huye hai..one side of the bed room had cupboards and the other side dressing table...I came to the bed...stood over the bed to clean that big big photo frame...A photo frame that coverd half of the wall behind the bed...this was gifted by monster on last yr diwali,and today also I wondered how did he manage to get this pic of ours after so long...that pic was our ishq wala moment at musicana opening night..where I was standing with my backside facing him and he was so close to me that his head was just few inches away fom my shoulders...wat an instensity we had in our eyes...that was truly our full ishq bara moment...we were truly lost somewhere,may b in each others presence ,fragrance,or may b LOVE...Shaayad pyaar hum dono ke andar tab se hi tha...par use muh tak aane mein thodi der lag gayii...

Suddenly I came back to reality...and wiped the photo frame with smile of joy ,satisfaction ,togetherness..and love... kissed him, I love you manik...

Then mujhe yaad aya ki I have to wrap my gift...i took the gift paper...wrapped it around an envelop...actually that was my gift...i wrote "HAPPY DIWALI MY MONSTER" on the name slip and pasted over it...

I said to myself:manik last time tum jeet gaye mujhe surprise karkee...but this time manik malhotra its my turn ...i promise isse achha gift aur kuch nahi ho sakta tumhare liyee...humare liyeee...I hid my gift under bed...so that he cudnt see it before our gift exchange ceremony...

I was done with all my works...I rested on my couch ..then suddenly mujhe yaad aya ki...meine kal ke fab 5 ka performance nahii...dekha ..i took out my phon searched for the video " FAB 5 PERFORMANCE AT MTV AWARD NIGHTS LONAVLA" ya I found the video...150000likes just in 2 -3 hrs...o my god..i played the video...

Fab 5 on the stage..manik druv and mukti with guitars alya at keyboard nd cabir as usual at drums,

Manik:before performance I wud like to thank mtv for inviting us,giving us the opportunity to perform,they had always been a grt support for the young talents..so thank u guyzz

So lonavla.. are you ready...guyzz

(Crowd was cheering them,,,,)

Guyzz ... much louder ...

This is our very own composition decdicated every one out there in lovee,and also to love of my life who was the only reason behind this song...so here it goes...

"Hum tere bin ab rah nahi sakte

Tere bina kya vajood mera

...

...

Tum hi ho... ...

Ab tum ho... "

part 4 was awesome..dear...
loved their conversation...
u penned it beautifully...especially...nandini's P.O.V...
pls continue as soon as possible...

take care...😊

beautifully written...
amezing...
loved it .
really excited to wtch further parts...

Lovely pov of nandu
Amazing update
Continue fast

it's soo cute..

Awesome... 👍🏼
Waiting fr nxt part... 😊