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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Can't wait for the revelation
Of gifts
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I had a feeling that Nandini is pregnant... :)
Sweet update
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Part 5

While watching video

(manik itna pyaarr...meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho ...kitna badal chukka hai manik..ek rich spoilt brat,jo sirf 5 star hotels mein khana khata tha,sirf apne luxurious cars mein travel karta tha,sirf clubs aur late night parties attend karta tha,jo brand conscious tha...abh voh manik exist nahi karta...hes a new manik today...usse street foods pasand aane lage hai,kabhi kabhi hum ghoomne ke liye train bus ,auto kisi mein bhi chale jaate hai its juz that ki hume ek saath life ka har ek corner dekhna hai, he is living as a simply MANIK today ..aur aaj manik ko koi bhi situation mein dalo..he has learned to adjust with it... ) I woke up from the couch..

Mein toh bhool hi gayi,aaj fab 5 ko yahan bulana hai,aaj hum sab saath mein Diwali manayenge...aakhir itni badi khushi ka din hain toh hume saath mein hona chaahiya...I made I conference call and invited everyone..and also warned them not to inform manik abt this now...

Door bell Rings..i kept the phn down nd went to the door

Itzz maanik

Me:wow sirjii aap itni jaaldi aagayee..??kya baath hein aapki girl fans nahi mili aaj?

Manik:pehle ye sab pakadoo...(handed over some of the packets to me)Dekho duniya ke har ek kone mein mere fans hain...bus aaj meine unse bol diya ki rock star manik malhotra is on leave today...aaj sirf ek loving husband apne duty par hain

Me:wow so smart manik

Manik: Manik Malhotra is already smart

Me:dekho...iss line ki copy right sirf mere pass hain

( he kept all the packets down nd pulled me by my waist.).and

Manik: aur tumahara copyright sirf mere pass...dekho I fulfilled my promise...ab mera... c and d?? ka kya??

Me: ( trying to escape from his hold) voh shaam ko

Manik: u r such a monster nandini ...(said this with frowned face)

Me: allee alle mela bachha gussa ho gaya...(I pulled his cheeks and kissed his nose)Ok now...??

Manik: something is better than nothing...then he took a packet and gave me

Me: kya hani manik

Manik:kholke dekho...

I opened it

Me: wow manik 😛...ice cream...butterscotch...manik sachhi mein jab tum jaa rahe the muje laga ki mein kuch bhool rahi hoon tumhe bataane ke liyaa...and it ws ice cream...muje yaad nahi tha par tume yaad tha...thnk u manik, I luv u...

I cudnt stop myself...I kissed him on lips it was quite unexpected from him he was in shock for a second...then responded back...after few minutes we moved back craving for oxygen

Manik: nandu..agar ek ice cream ke liye yeh mil raha hai toh I ma read to buy a ice cream shop for u😃

Me:shut up...(I opened the box and started having it using my fingers I loved eating ice crem like this...)

Manik was just staring at me

Manik:pura tum hi khaogi kya mujhe nahi khilaogi...

(He also loved having icreams from my fingers.i took icecream nd gave him for licking my fingers...)

Me:ab baas..rest mein kal khaalungii...(.i closed the icecream dabba and kept it in fridge)maanik tum na lunch kar lo.mein humare kapade terrace pe daalke aati hoon...

Manik:nahi tumhare saath hi khaaunga...

Me:don't act like a kid manik...mein upar jaa rahi hoon...(I took a bucket full of cloths to the terrace)

Meine bas ek kapada dala ki, tab tak a pair of hands tightened around my waist...

Manik:tum mujhe baghaa kyun rai ho.. 2 din baad mujhe tumhare saath rehne ko time mila hai,aur tum ho ki muje paas hi nahi rehne de rahi,pehle shopping ke liye bhej diya aur ab yeh.😭.

Me: its nothing lyk that...ok stop imagining things ..ok ab meri help karo

Manik:ok my lord ..

Hum ek saath kapade dalne lagee...mein kapade daalti gayi aur voh clip lagata gaya...

Me: manik tumhe kya lagta agar kisine yeh dekh liya ki the Rockstar of India apne biwi ke saath terrace pe kapade sukha raha hain... kahenge ki meine tume jhoru ka gulam bana diya...hain

Manik: wat bullshit..i dnt care.kapade sukhaane kya itna ganda kaam hai kya??aur mein apni biwi ke saath kapade sukha raha..kisi aur ki biwi ke sath thodi..na😊...nd waise bhi wife ko help karne se kisi ki image kharab nahi hoti ..ok..

Me:wow...wat a speech mera monster ab bada ho gaya hain...

Manik: (smiling )mein toh bada ho gaya hoon par tum toh abhi bhi choti ki choti reh gayi ho..agali baar shooping keliye jaaungaa toh tumhare liye complan leke aaungaa

(Hearing this I punched him)

Me:😡😡manik mujse baat mat karo..jao

Manik: aree tum gussa ho gayi..sorry baba...

(I didn't mind him)

(Now he started playing with my saari hung over there ,it was hung between us)

Manik: started singing Parde mein rehne do

Parda na utatoo...

.Agar parda gir gaya toh meri nandu maaregii

(voh meri saari ke piche se jhaanke dekhne laga as if in tom nd jerry ,jerry used to luk through his hole to check out toms presence...I controlled my laughter)I turned back and laughed ,and he saw me laughing, nd came to my side turned me around kissed my cheeks..we were lost in each others eyes..our eyelock was broken by a voice

Voice:Kya mein wahan aa sakti hoon,ya baad mein aaun, .. she had dabba in her one hand,and with the other hand she covered her eyes

(it was Neeru Anju auntys daughter,she is doing her+2,science isliye who meri tution student bhi hain,time milne par voh mere paas doubts clear karne aati..she is like a sister to me and manik..Manik ko pehli baar koi mila tha jo use apne bhaai ki tarah pyaar karti hai,neeru har saal manik ko raakhi band ti hain,manik use kuch na kuch spcl gift toh deta hai,neeru ke college mein jo bhi fuction ho uske liye manik hi use guitar sikhata hain perform karne keliye...i was really happy ki manik ko experience karne ke liye naye naye rishte mil rahe tha,and voh bhi ek responsible brothr ki tarah uski care karta tha aur pyaar bhi)

Manik:neeru tum!...dekho...aisa kuch nahi hain jaisa tum soch rahi ho..u can open ur eyes

Neeru: sure manik bhaiyyaa?

Manik:yaa sure

Neeru: voh kya hain na ...mujhe laga ki pichale baar ki tarah...

(last time she had almost caught us during our romance on terrace)

Me: tum bhi na...tum upar kya kar rahi ho

Neeru:voh mummy ne yeh rasgulle bheje hain aap dono ke liye..ghar ka darwaaja toh khulaa tha,par andar koi nahi tha,,tab mein samaj gayi ki tum dono idhar hi honge

Me:manik .tumne darwaja khulaa chod diya.😡

Manik: oh shit...mein toh tumhare pichee...

Me: ab bahaane banana band karo ,chalo niche..neeru tum bhi chalo...

(We started walking down)

Manik : (snatched that dabba from neeru and startd having rasgulle)neeru,tu bata school kaise chal raha

Neeru :kya bataaun bhaiyaa very boring,har roz test test test .bus yahi...i m tired of it

Manik: acha ab interesting baat batao tera vo boyfriend kaisaa hai?kya naam tha uska...yaar I forgot nandu kya tha...

Me: Shyaam...

Neeru: (angry mode on) voh mera boy friend nahi hai...he is my enemy..

Manik:hmmm...dekhte hai...enemies hi baad mein boyfrnd girlfrnd bante hain aur phir husband wife.. kyun nandu?

Me:haan Neeru, Manik is ryt enemies hi baad mein world best loving couples bante hain

Neeru :mujhe pata hain tum dono apni luv story se inspired ho ke yeh sab bol rahe ho..but yahaan aisa kuch nahi...hone wala ..i hate him from the bottom of my heart

(Me nd manik cudnt stop laughing after hearing this...)

Manik: achaaa ..lets wait nd watch..ab yeh ek rasgulla khaa...meri behen...(manik ne forcefully uske muh mein ek rasgulla dal diya) ab khush...?

Neeru: better...

Me:tum dono bhaai behen baatein karo mein jaa rahi hoon (we had alredy reached )

Neeru : nahi diii voh aj mumma ne mujhe swach bharat mission diya hain...jaati hoon byee...bhaiyaa...

Manik: oho...ab tumhare pass bhi time nahi hai ek laute bhaai ko dene ke liya..

Neeru:kya karoon bohot busy hoon..nxt time if u wanna meet me appointment leke ana...ok.. bye(saying this she went)

Manik: haan madam... nautanki...

(We entered our apartment)

Me: manik..chalo lunch karte...mujhe zor ki bhook lagi hain

Manik: mujhe bhi

(We both rushed to the dining table nd had our lunch...thn thodi der rest karn ke liye hum dono saath mein tv par movie dekhne lagee...an old movie "Vivah"...Its such a sweet movie... I was completely into the movie...I remember that we both started watching mvie together...movie got over ...I was about to stand up then realized that my monstu was sleeping like a chottu baby in my lap...chooo cuteee

Me: (I played with his hair and went near his ear and screamed.) manik...😆😆...

(He got up jerking his head from my lap)

Manik: nandini...😡😡...

Me:manik maharaj uttiyee,ghar mein mehamaan aane wale hain aur aap so rahe hain..

Manik: voh pata nahi dekthe dekhte kab so gaya...aur tumhare tharah pagal nahi jo shahid kapoor ko dekhne ke liye yeh film 50 baar dekhoon.

Me: so, Mr Malhotra is jealous of my Shahid

Manik: bullshit...

Me : really Manik,(I started tickling him...and he started laughing) aur ab kahan gaya "I don't feel ticklish" wala Manik Malhotra

Manik : ( he was trying to escape)..chodo mujhe varna once I start na...you knw better than me

(No no ..manik ne start kiya toh muje koi nahi bachha payega, iss dar se meine use chod diya,he side hugged me and said )

Manik: mujhe na jealous hone ki zaroorat nahi...kyunki mein jaanta hoon Nandini moorty ko sirf mein jhel sakta hoon...aur koi Shahid kapoor bhi nahi...aur pata hai koi tume kidnap bhi karke leke gaya na,tumhare lecture sunke 15 minutes voh tume mere pass hi pahuncha denge...aur kahenge "Bhaiyya apko to nobel prize milna chahiyee"

Me: manik... I will kill u😡😡😡...(i was punching him as if he was my private punching bag)

Manik: ok ok cool dwn mein mazak kar raha tha...

Me: achaaa... Abhi dikhati hoon tumhara C and D option

Manik: no nandu I m sorry sorry...dekho kaan pakad liyaa.. Tum na ab kuch jyaad damkiyan de rahi ho..ab ok?

Me:hmm😊😊...thoda ok hain ...

Manik:achaa voh sab chodo...voh kaun mehmaan anne wale hein

Me: fab 5 aur kaun?

Manik:kyun unhe kyun bulaya hain?

Me:Diwali ke liye.aur nahi toh kya...

Manik:par Diwali toh hum sab ek saath Mukti ke NGO ke bachho ke saath celebrate karte hain phir late night party ke liye jaate hain na..toh phir iss baar...aisa kyun

Me: just for a change Manik Malhotra

Manik: what?whts cooking in ur head nandu sach bolo...

Me:thnk u manik.. cooking se yaad aya.raat ka dinner banana hain sabke liyee.ok bye mein jaa rahi hoon

(I got up and ran to kitchen,and I cud hear manik mumbling to himself)

Manik:yeh ladki na mujhe na paagal kar degi

( I started cooking...and manik goes out...)

Manik:nandu ,mein na Neeru ke saath neeche jar aha hoon use kuch kaam hain.

Me: haan ,ok darwaaja band karke jaaooo...






I knw guyzz u r gona kill me..in this part also I didn't reach upto Diwali night... I promise ,in next ther will be, Diwali..celebration..the story is getting lengthier bcoz I juz wanna shw u the bond they share apart from being romatic I want to show them as a cute couple...

Edited by gaurimenon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
gauri...

awesome part ...loved it..u penned it so beautifully...

enikku orupadu ishattapettu...especially...terrace scene...pinnae vivah entayum favorite movie aanu...njanum above 30 times kandittundu,...

pattumenkil adutha pravashyam oru pm send cheyanam...enkil ennikku kurachu easy aayirunnu...

adutha update udan undakum ennu pratheekshikkunnu...ha ha ha...


take care...continue soon...
with love
aavani


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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
i jsut love it
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Plzzz update nxt part...waiting eagerly to read d nxt part 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i'm stuck with my xamzz dearzz...i ll try to update it by sunday..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: gaurimenon

i'm stuck with my xamzz dearzz...i ll try to update it by sunday..


ok dear..
all the best for your exams .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Amazing stry
Plzzz update nxt part soon...
Waiting eagerly to read d nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
the story is really nice... pls update asap

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