ArHi FF: Revealed #2 | Link to Thread 3 Pg 1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thread two, already? This is all because of you, my amazing readers that have embraced this journey with open arms. Your trust and faith in me for a hard to read topic that involves our favorite jodi, inspires me every day when I write this emotional journey. But for me, just like you all, it's Arnav and Khushi, Hamesha!

For every comment, like, or whether you silently read... Thank you so much for being the best and kindest readers to this developing writer... I Love You, Damn It!


Please note this SS is now turning to a FF. Based on what I have planned, it won't fit into short story. I hope I can keep you interested to continue to hang around for the ride.


The story...

Marriage is built on love, trust, friendship, compromise and faith... but what happens to the relationship when a couple forgets these key fundamentals?

This journey is about a couple who has been married for over nine years and have reached a crossroad. Will they work on fixing their broken marriage? Or will they choose to go their separate ways?



Updates/Alerts:

Updates will be once a week depending on my hectic AD, but I will do my best! I will send out a PM's or follow me on twitter @Chokri_ASR

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Feel free to silently read, like or comment, everyone is welcomed!

The blog is also up for Revealed, if you refer reading there. CLICK HERE


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Index:


Thread 1:


Prologue


Chapter 1


Chapter 2


Chapter 3


Chapter 4


Thread 2:


Chapter 5


Chapter 6


Chapter 7


Chapter 8


Thread Three

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Teaser - Chapter 5

"Are you really happy, Arnav?" In a trance, drawn to his rare clean look, she raised her hand and caressed his cheek. But she quickly pulled her hand away as he nodded and then continued. "I should go now, so you can get back to your guests. Once again, congratulations."


She let go of his hand, taking a step back, then turned to walk away.

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That's a small excerpt from the upcoming Chapter, I hope this gets you through till I post the update on Tuesday. Happy speculating or just something to think about 😊

And I leave you with another quote...

"What lies behind you and what lies in front of you, pales in comparison to what lies inside of you." ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson

Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am so proud of you. For taking up this story about a topic that is so relevant to so many people- and that is so hard to talk about. Your writing has truly grown with this story, and I can see it with just four chapters. There's a nuance, a beauty in your writing.

It makes me so proud of you. I always am, but I am so damn proud.


Love always,
Choti.
Edited by chotidesi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My Darling Jigs, dil se congratulations on the new thread 👏
An emotive subject being very sensitively handled by you. I'm very happy you've decided to make this into a FF. Your writing and the subject matter, both deserve it 🤗


Lines from one of my favourite songs for both Arnav and Khushi -

Jindgi Kaisi Hai Paheli Haye
Kabhi Toh Hasaye, Kabhi Yeh Rulaye

Kabhi Dekho Mann Nahee Jage, Pichhe Pichhe Sapno Ke Bhage
Ek Din Sapno Kaa Rahi, Chala Jayey Sapno Ke Aage Kaha
Jindgi Kaisi Hai Paheli Haye
Kabhi Toh Hasaye, Kabhi Yeh Rulaye

Jinhone Sajaye Yaha Mele, Sukh Dukh Sang Sang Jhele
Wahi Chunkar Khamoshi, Yu Chali Jayey Akele Kaha
Jindgi Kaisi Hai Paheli Haye
Kabhi Toh Hasaye, Kabhi Yeh Rulaye

Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations Jigs.. Am so much into the teaser, I wrote congratulations Arn...haaa
I wish this wonderful story has many more threads..

Now coming to my dabba speculation..Kushi meant r u happy with Alisha and he thought she is asking about his success and said yes..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on thread 2!!! Way to go Jigs!!! 👏

May this story has more and more threads.

Coming to the teaser, so did Arnav notice her presence at the party??? I hope so!!!!

Waiting for the update now.
Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations Jigs 👏👏
Coming to teaser...Is Kushi talking to Arnav in inebriated state?

Who spotted Kushi first at party? Arnav / Lavanya / Alisha?




Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on new thread. Interesting teaser. Looking forward for the update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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my heart is breaking thinking that it might be khushi walking away...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you thank you :) I'm glad she met him though I'm sure there is long way to go before anything resolves. Insecurities coupled with self doubts can be like a disease that eats at you and nothing anyone says can make a difference. I only hope there is no one adding fuel to this fire. (I'm reading Alisha here ) I maybe wrong. I hope I am.
I'm so happy this is a FF. I'm hoping for at least 100 chapters :)

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