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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#951

Arnav is trying to give time to himself and khushi...he was trying to do those things which were a so normal way back...how he showed his love for her even when he was busy...by cooking a small meal...trying to be together...waiting to be together during the weekend...the effort he is putting now matters...we got a glimpse of their happy times...I understand what khushi was missing...she is feeling lonely in such a big house with him in it...it is not their sweet home any more...hope Arnav's efforts pays off...The sketch is so beautiful...it is the cheerful khushi we want back...Thanks for the PM

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#952

Awesome, amazing, wonderful etc. etc.. will definitely not be sufficient to describe the updates..

I just finished reading 7 and 8 chapters back to back..

I always keep your updates to read in the end very leisurely, when i come back after a long break on IF, as i dont like to rush on reading these updates. .i will loose the feel what i feel when i read your updates... i relish every letter and every word of it lol...

I'm glad that arnav is trying very hard to fix his relation even when kushi is not ready to give him a chance though she is giving into her feelings sometimes and enjoying it..

Loved arnav cursing about the traffic and thats what everyone does it on everyday and even i do lol

And kushi trying to stop arnav saying that everyone is around is one more thing which looked very natural...

the first few lines of the update is the proof that kushi has not lost her trust on arnav and i think that is enough for arnav to start his mission wooing kushi

In The 8th chapter i felt that he started realising the damage he had done and is on the right track to get her back

The sketch part was very beautiful and he indeed put it on paper how he wants his kushi to be.. happy hamesha

He is trying to get back the old domestic environment in the house which missed all these years and which made kushi very happy after entering the house..

aman is a sweet heart .. he made his exit on the right time..

arnav and kushi both are in so much pain and whenever i read these updates, i always doubt that can something happen like this to someone even in real life..

You have awesome writing skills jigs.. i was wondering when i first started reading this story that how on earth you are going to write a story on an ending relationship but you proved me wrong making this story a memorable one and very close to my heart... take a bow..

I'm at work and typing this from my phone dear as i couldn't wait till night.. lol

waiting to know about their kids part

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#953

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frustrated12233

@frustrated12233

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#954

Here you go i brought Tuesday on ur feet 🤣

Now updt plzz!!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#955

Chapter Five

"Mat jao, Khushi!"

😭

I thought this chapter is going to break my already broken heart. Aman saved the night. I owe him a lot, not you😛

So, I was wondering why this Raizada is so smoking hot and Khushi is hotter? This is one of the best characterizations of ArHi I have ever come across. Too good to be true. Thats why this is a sapnon ki duniya and Revealed is a fiction. As much as I want to convince myself, this is a fiction and I should control my frigging emotions, it gets out of my hands. Sorry could not help, again blame on you for writing so beautifully!

After 4 chapters of despair, you give me this. I love you!! Even if its for the night or until the party is over, they are being civil with each other, and need I say so in LOVE!!

Stubborn asses.😕

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Chapter Six

WOW! This outing was much needed for them. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter as much as ArHi enjoyed their togetherness. It was a very well written chapter, my favorite so far.

Same question as Raizada, why is she giving up on their relation? But, I am glad that Arnav's determined to set everything back to normal. OMG! I am so excited for the upcoming chapters. Imagine the anxiety attacks I might have got if I was following this story from the day you started 😆

Am I glad or what that I am quite late?

I seriously adore you. Okay!

I am your fangirl pliss accept me, Bellisima?

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Chapter Seven

My fried instinct says, that she had a miscarriage or something? And like always Arnav was not there for her. She dealt with it all alone? I am sorry about my f**ked up mind comnig up with lame assumptions. I will wait for it to unfold... very impatiently lol

I loved the shopping part and that mind numbing K.I.S.S. which they shared. Sigh its been a while since I read something so very beautiful... Thanks Partner...for initiating the kiss between them. You made it look beauiful and sound precious.😳

Can I have a picture of Arnav's grey-blue eyes? 😭

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Chapter Eight

When Arnav took an off that day I was like, yes work it baby. They needed this break. Finally, I am at ease, it took me eight chapters to settle down. This is getting super good, and I want Khushi to give in a little bit of course!! Rest Raizada haina 😳

Those little moments at the dinner table and what followed was too beautiful to read. My my.. I am in awe. Damn... why are they so perfect? 😳

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Done with thread two.

Bye.

BRB.

I love you!

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#956

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-
Chapter Five

"Mat jao, Khushi!"

😭

I thought this chapter is going to break my already broken heart. Aman saved the night. I owe him a lot, not you😛
So, I was wondering why this Raizada is so smoking hot and Khushi is hotter? This is one of the best characterizations of ArHi I have ever come across. Too good to be true. Thats why this is a sapnon ki duniya and Revealed is a fiction. As much as I want to convince myself, this is a fiction and I should control my frigging emotions, it gets out of my hands. Sorry could not help, again blame on you for writing so beautifully!

After 4 chapters of despair, you give me this. I love you!! Even if its for the night or until the party is over, they are being civil with each other, and need I say so in LOVE!!
Stubborn asses.😕

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Chapter Six

WOW! This outing was much needed for them. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter as much as ArHi enjoyed their togetherness. It was a very well written chapter, my favorite so far.

Same question as Raizada, why is she giving up on their relation? But, I am glad that Arnav's determined to set everything back to normal. OMG! I am so excited for the upcoming chapters. Imagine the anxiety attacks I might have got if I was following this story from the day you started 😆
Am I glad or what that I am quite late?
I seriously adore you. Okay!

I am your fangirl pliss accept me, Bellisima?

----

Chapter Seven

My fried instinct says, that she had a miscarriage or something? And like always Arnav was not there for her. She dealt with it all alone? I am sorry about my f**ked up mind comnig up with lame assumptions. I will wait for it to unfold... very impatiently lol

I loved the shopping part and that mind numbing K.I.S.S. which they shared. Sigh its been a while since I read something so very beautiful... Thanks Partner...for initiating the kiss between them. You made it look beauiful and sound precious.😳

Can I have a picture of Arnav's grey-blue eyes? 😭

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Chapter Eight

When Arnav took an off that day I was like, yes work it baby. They needed this break. Finally, I am at ease, it took me eight chapters to settle down. This is getting super good, and I want Khushi to give in a little bit of course!! Rest Raizada haina 😳

Those little moments at the dinner table and what followed was too beautiful to read. My my.. I am in awe. Damn... why are they so perfect? 😳

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Done with thread two.

Bye.
BRB.

I love you!

OMFG you... you... damn you Partner... I love you so so so much!!! What a way to start my day reading your comments... and I can't believe you are giving me chapter by chapter Friedji wala thoughts... think my face my break from all the smiling I am doing at the moment. Your feedback is just awesome and so are you

Thank you baby, I am so excited to have you join this journey! 🤗

Oh and here's a pic of the blue eyed Arnav 😉 Also there are pictures on the blog of the cast as well.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#957

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

OMFG you... you... damn you Partner... I love you so so so much!!! What a way to start my day reading your comments... and I can't believe you are giving me chapter by chapter Friedji wala thoughts... think my face my break from all the smiling I am doing at the moment. Your feedback is just awesome and so are you

Thank you baby, I am so excited to have you join this journey! 🤗

Oh and here's a pic of the blue eyed Arnav 😉 Also there are pictures on the blog of the cast as well.

I am shaking after that hug 🤣

And now I am officially dead.. After staring at Mr. Blue eyed Raizada.

Unf**kingbelievable

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#958

Beautiful chapter 5 n 6...

R u an architect? The way you describe it with detsil is amazing ..

La n khushi's conversation n la encouraged her to come for the party very nice .true friend. ..

Arnav wished she should come n the happiness she saw in face was due to the news that she is coming not because of aisha. .

4 of them simply adorable. ..

Loved the way khushi spoke to la...

Oh how I wish Khushi should have heard when Arnav broke the deal with aisha n told his wife will eat her out 👏

Arnav understood her vulnerability when she hugged him..

Wow drunk ladies too good..

Khushi's version. For 7 steps what I thought of.

Arnav by now decide to fix it ...

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#959

Awesome chapter 7 n 8th..

Friday night showedArnav, khushi's hurt n pain n how alone she was feeling...

Finally Raizada resolved to bring them back..

Loved their morning ..how easily Arnav spoke to her Mil despite not in good term with them

Wow so many shocks for khushi first 8 days off then ready to extend the trip then groceries shopping ..

Wow beautiful sketch. ..

Aman n Arnav bromance too good..

Khushi is rememberingtheir golden days.. n the way she let her guard down slowly was nice..

Great she saw the sketch. ..👏

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#960

I'm Literally falling in love with this story.

Just finished reading chapter-7.

It's intriguing how you penned down their emotions so beautifully! Khushi was really complex. Whereas I found arnav more understanding. He actually was trying hard to work out their relationship unlike khushi. I think Khushi was too tenacious and her sarcastic taunt and banters were a bit too much.

Alisha was simply annoying. In arnav's success party though she was trying her best to get cozy with arnav and create MU between arnav and khushi, but arnav's demeanor was plausible. He handled her well and I'm glad that he refuted her and rebuked her for insinuating khushi. but she became successful to hurt khushi deeply. I just wanted to slap her hard on her face when she tried to create MU between them.

I'm Enjoying their fervent romance beide the tiffs. Both are extremely atracted to each other and love each other as well. Really don't know how could they decide to dissipate their ways.

Can't wait to read more.

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