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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

so geet is J...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel
kaha hain ji update?part 4 ka pm mila that 5 update ho gaya kya?mujhe to pm mila hi nehi?blog link check kru kya?

sorry dear...

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SANJH

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

awesome update. hmm maan-madhu trying to help RK but geet thinking maan-madhu are dating and she is super J about it.where is RK?I missed him in this update. and why maan ready to sacrifice his love for vikram?not done maan ji.fight for ur love aise had thori na haar maante haan.coming to Dev what kind of character he is?little gray ,little positive, little wired.all in all very unique and fantastic story.thanks for adding me in ur pm list.enjoying reading this story very much.update next part soon😊

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fmaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

RK is not bad dear...his past has made him like this...I have shown RK scary , but the main fact is that sometimes a person acts scary when he is scared...He thinks that by scaring someone , I can be protected...It's a defensive mechanism , very common for every human & even animals...RK's past made him scared , insecure , rude...Maan too has painful past , less than RK , but still he has his own pain...Maan has learnt to hide his feelings whereas RK's pain comes out through anger- a medium to release his pent up frustration... Ananya has thrown herself on RK...& RK can never tolerate such girls because of a certain reason...

but it made maan in trouble naa and the girl also may be girl is wrong but using ur powers in wrong way is not good maan also bad past naa sorry if am wrong but i think rk is wrong may be in anger he did this but he just forget about girl did not realize what he did only maan was only one who care not for girl but only for RK he think if some thing happen to girl RK will get in trouble what about the girl if she will die will RK remorse or shame may be not the way he forget evry thing and get in new trouble of detention

me criticizes only RK behavior not ur story please dont think me wrong 😊

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: fmaaneet

but it made maan in trouble naa and the girl also may be girl is wrong but using ur powers in wrong way is not good maan also bad past naa sorry if am wrong but i think rk is wrong may be in anger he did this but he just forget about girl did not realize what he did only maan was only one who care not for girl but only for RK he think if some thing happen to girl RK will get in trouble what about the girl if she will die will RK remorse or shame may be not the way he forget evry thing and get in new trouble of detention

me criticizes only RK behavior not ur story please dont think me wrong 😊

U are free to criticize dear...😆...U will understand RK more in the coming updates...Until his past is revealed , his character will be shady for u...😊

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel
awesome update. hmm maan-madhu trying to help RK but geet thinking maan-madhu are dating and she is super J about it.where is RK?I missed him in this update. and why maan ready to sacrifice his love for vikram?not done maan ji.fight for ur love aise had thori na haar maante haan.coming to Dev what kind of character he is?little gray ,little positive, little wired.all in all very unique and fantastic story.thanks for adding me in ur pm list.enjoying reading this story very much.update next part soon😊

I have always read Vikram's character very evil ...So I thought to make it hatke in this story...Vikram is a likeable character(played by one of my favt Ashish Kapoor 😳)...His friendship with Maan is unique , very different & rare...His character will be clear in next few updates...Maan loves him as he never judged Maan...He knows Maan has some dark secrets , but never asked or interfered as he knows to give people his privacy & freedom to express his feelings only when he is willing... He is a very important character like Maan , RK & Rajveer...Dev is mysterious...I have thought about him...let's see how to make him interesting...

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K1k1k1

@k1k1k1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Nice concept wow quite lot character to remember

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Congrats about new story dear ! And thanx for pm...intresting concept...willing forward to read this story...nice charecter sketch...well description of them..!!
Plz pm me this story updates :)