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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

ch1

wow wow...gr8 bonding of maan and RK..

give a beautiful background...of both past..

maan seems to be sensitive more...

RK rough and tough...

care for maan...and vice versa..

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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

ch2

MY..my..Geet...bold and brave...

madhu...sweet..and cute..like 2 explore...superb..

maan asking RK ..to join

just agree for maan alone...

RK is too scared of his anger spoiling maan's image...

but maan is strong is decision and want RK to socialize...

Nice to known maan thoughts...for RK...

getting super interesting...

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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

ch 3

Amazing Madhu 's entry...

dear geet's loves attention...

ooo Maan and RK entry..in middle of class...tht was diff.

Maan nice ..hmm...he likes geet... geet royally ignore

gets a snub from RK...tch..tch..

madhu putting some sense into geet's head ...

makes her think...

i'm loving it...

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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

ch 4

OMG...RK...

though the girl needed lesson...

that was scary...

Geet is too scared to react...may be that s Y Maan took madhu's help..

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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

ch 5

Geet on Big J...

dear God...

hope she dosen't do stupid...

thinking Y madhu ..did not clear ../say about maan asking help..

dev was cool...sensing

funny to ...getting irritated ...of both brothers..

hope maan finds the girl..b4 she gets killed...

waiting for nxt awesome update..

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

thank you so much for the link
supernatural wow.. I would definitely love to read it

will comment after reading cs

PS : don't mind if I will be late in commenting I m having some exams line up.. hope u will understand

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

sangeeta plzz one request
use a little dark color coding
with mobile its difficult to see with bright colors

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

All chapters read in one go...its really awsom story,...Plz do pm ur updates...loved ur story 👍🏼 !

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

I have always read Vikram's character very evil ...So I thought to make it hatke in this story...Vikram is a likeable character(played by one of my favt Ashish Kapoor 😳)...His friendship with Maan is unique , very different & rare...His character will be clear in next few updates...Maan loves him as he never judged Maan...He knows Maan has some dark secrets , but never asked or interfered as he knows to give people his privacy & freedom to express his feelings only when he is willing... He is a very important character like Maan , RK & Rajveer...Dev is mysterious...I have thought about him...let's see how to make him interesting...

ok interesting waiting to know more about vikram and Dev😊