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Aweee okie.. Waiting desperately deeps

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update jaldi karonaa...
i m waiting since...?????????????
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IT'S THURSDAY! 😃
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Looks like everyone is super excited to witness confrontation between ?????? 😆
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wt an emotional update ...overwhelmed with mixture of emotions...and as every emotion is born from the heart...so heart is feeling tired after giving birth to so many emotions right now ...

starting from abhey gayatri and arnav visit to alibaug hospital...each one of them there with own set of memories...arnav reliving his memories with his grandfather,that stethoscope around neck of 8 year old arnav ...seems to me gave the same courage and impact in his life ,like a pen do in a student life...

how beautifully abhey took support of arnav shoulder here while providing one to gaytri and same time back to arnav ...how beautifully u have knitted these three together in emotions here...excellent

The way u have shown once again arnav the source of happiness in abhey and gaytari life ,though in this painful moment ...sharing past with arnav once again brought smiles back to them..so really arnav the happy knot between them ...looking towards that window..which was literally opened up for them not any where but in memorable past ...where they make arnav see through along with them to beauty of their love story...

"this is where i fell in love with ur dad"..."this is where u dawned in my womb"..."and this is where we all three had begun" ...wt a poetry hidden in these lines...i can feel a whole life journey in these three lines ...hats off baby

abhey true sense strong pillar of raizada's ...the man of discipline ,the man of principle...the man who took this step cause he man of his words..the promise he gave to his grandfather...i need to salute such respectable guy here...through out the story it felt like gayatri the linking bond but now i am feeling ...true sense both r wheels of car and both responsible in smooth drive of life...they must had faced ups and down but nothing stops them from moving on...hats off girl for creating such amazing worth impressing characters..

arnav commitment to set all right and bring back the hospital to its glory again...gave me glimpse of abhey back in arnav again...his anger towards that deshmukh ...who the real culprit in destroying many souls including his lady love...that whole drive scene ...the way he missed her ...and took anjali help...and anjali all stressed out while talking to shashi...hehe...awee...and that bewakoof larki...never bewakoof sounds that romantic to me before ...lol...excellent friends arnav and anjali no question about..i am thinking deeps kitni beauty hay iss type keh restricted surrounding mien pyar kernay ki ...iss ka apna maza hay...with fear and stress of being caught...lol...loved it

khushi thought process while kneading the dough...and side by side keeping her finger wrapped and saved from other eyes...her thoughts about how she took the advantage of calling garima friends ,that missed called deletion ..and then an obident girl back...hehe...thats such a cute and fun side of her...and her thinking that wt she is doing in his friendship ...thats amazing the smile she wore throughout the scene...loved it

but wt the ...the line got disconnected on the climax...wt is arnav going through right now...poor guy...already he was worried for her..his fuc* fuc* fuc* shows his frustration there...deeps is he suffering ...i am worried for him now

last scene karan and khushi face to face ...i think this girl is having guts to raise her voice...though she damn innocent soul...but the way she stands for her babies...that wounded mother in her who seems to kill even a lion right there ...i loved her...the way she stopped karan from entering but then as shashi let him in ...her complaining sad eyes ...uff...she proved it today ...that its her own fight and she going to fight it no matter wt...amazing amazing attitude...

although shashi poor father of our society ...for me he is weak mentally ...his fears about society is killing his personality...the way before going out he was not trusting karan there ...and his words i ll be outside if u need me...i felt bad...its sad to see ur pillars going weak only and only due to society pressures otherwise who wanted to be helpless in life :(

so that pathetic ugly guy is after amicable settlement...but the reply khushi gave him ...for me its more strong in impact than a slap on his face...cause if such a young innocent girl standing today even ,shocking karan there...knowing very well wt rights or justice she has to bring for her babies...i mean like its seriously ,wow for me...so he thinks girls r expensive...in a way true cause they not cheap like such bast**** man...loved her reply ...so true he can have sex ...having mother and wife for his own satisfaction but daughters unaffordable for him...hell pathetic approach..

i felt like my heart going to burst when she told him...u took away my every thing...home,family blessings and all...jab dreams tottay hain tou kiya hota hay ...jab dil toota hay tou kiya hota...jab umeedain tootti hain tou kiya hota...her pain can never ever express in words :(


hell he tried his best to break her down ...spitting venom ...saying her burden on parents and all ...her painful chuckled,making fun of her own naivety ,...killed something inside me...her swear on her tortured babies..:(..UFF

his "we will see"
and her "in the court"...speechless...hats off deeps...u simple way par excellence👏...i am in tears



Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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UnRes- so as per everyone's first prediction this is the confrontation of khushi to that jerk. How does it feel whenever a loved and cared snatched from anyone..it hurts so much.. beautifully described the emotions of Dr.Abhay singh raizada and Dr.Gayatri singh raizada along with their son Dr.Arnav..this hospital is their first baby, their own hospital in which their love blossomed and it rosed to this height..and closing it without their fault only for others bad deeds it hell pains a lot..beautifully penned down the memories from the couple..i loved it where you wrote arnav took a step back only to make a way for his father towards his wife to be there on her side..that scene was a best scene for me deepthi..loved how arnav remembered khushi..yes its almost two weeks from talking to her..so how he used anjali to talk with his lady love..amazing sense of humour..and anjali teasing arnav and following all his instructions without fail..i was smiling throught that paragraph..so khushi was remembering arnav..like a love struck teenager..am i dreaming here? hmmm thats a positive sign atleast for arnav..loved how she remembered the missed call she gave..kya kya karna padega for this dr.r's friendship? Wow outstanding deepthi..and finally the confrontation time came..each and every word khushi uttered to that jerk is coming from a mother who is badly, deeply hurt..a mother can go to any extent when it comes to her children..and once again its proved here..the questions khushi asked to that kameena shook me to the core..and see the audisity of that jerk even after doing all this saying no proof of what he did..someone should grab his color and beat him to the death..so khushi will not pay any heed to her family when comes to the jerk hearing in the court..thats sure for now..she will not listen anyone except arnav in this regard..and bang on khushi..yes see you in the court what a reply to him..its just like slapping him for his deeds..loved reading the update..love you a lot deepthi.
Edited by GuruDeep246 - 10 years ago
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OH MY GOD, My prediction came true. Awesome.

The whole Raizada's scene and Arnav remembering about this grandfather shows me that how much they care about their family profession and their legacy. I think there would be some problem with Raizada's with Khushi because of her infertility. They would like a heir or heiress to continue their family legacy.

Arnav is using Anjali to call Khushi. I loved that whole scene. Khushi has been answering questions thru her father...Poor Arnav. Finally she comes to the phone and talks with her pagla Deewana. 😆, Only the moment was ruined by that Jerk...😡

🤬...That f**king guy has the audacity to come to Khushi's house to withdraw the case. I just wanted to smash his head with a frying pan and hit him with a broom and with sharpest high heels I can find. How can Shashi let him enter his house. He is bluffing when he says that they have no proof against him. If they had no proof, That Jerk...😡 will not come down his high horse and come to Khushi to withdraw the case, So Gupta's don't freak out. Khushi should get help from woman's organizations. I liked Khushi fight back that Jerk...😡 with her answers, I so wished she slapped him hard.

Awesome Chappy akka. Now Arnav knows that Karan was there, he will be more restless and probably turned his car to go to Khushi's house.

Can't wait for next one,
Take care,
Hugs and Kisses,
Pinky.
Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago
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TSuper Awesome part
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Sorry for the late unres Deepthi, yesterday was a bit chaotic at home.
Another nice update from you, as usual.

The Raizadas going to the hospital at Alibaug before they close it down and their walk through the hospital taking them down through memory lanes was very emotional and it also shows their strength as a family. The significance of the window scene was indeed sweet. So thats where the senior Raizadas love story began and coincidently its where Arnav's love story began too.

Pity that some criminally selfish people like Deshmukh tarnished the image of the hospital to the extent of its closure. I hope one day Arnav can restore its glory back.

Hard to believe that Arnav stayed without talking to Khushi for two whole weeks, and Khushi thinking about him and the pinky promise was also cute. Married at such a young age and subsequently hardly getting any real love from her husband, all this is as new to her as it would be to an unmarried girl.

Love makes you do all weird stuff, isn't it. Arnav making Anjali call pretending to be a call from the hospital and the sign language of coughing, I was thoroughly enjoying their small adventure until that Kameena showed up.

Nerve of him to show up like that. Shameless asshole to the core, how could he even face Khushi and talk about a settlement.

Murderers should not get out of court settlements but they should just be hanged.


"You cannot afford a girl as child? Then why the hell were you born to a woman and married a woman?" Khushi screamed, outraged with his double standards. "You need a woman to have sex every night and yet you say..." Her words got lost in her throat, choking back her tears.

The above sentences said everything . Hate that Karan for ruining someone's life, for thinking that women should be used and disposed, for having a mentality that women are only fit for either working like a slave or satisfying man's lust in bed.

I loved how Khushi said that she will fight for her children's justice even if she has to sell every organ in her body. Khushi is in such a stage where she has lost everything, her married life was a sham, her babies are dead, she cannot even conceive again, what else can she lose any more?
Now she is just a wounded tigress waiting for her revenge, for her justice.

For me Shashi was a disappointment today. I agree he lived in a lower middle class life in a rigid society all this life. But this was an opportunity for him to raise above the so called pseudo norms of the society, do something for his devastated daughter and yet he chose the easy way out again.

Deepthi, yesterday I was watching the news on the ongoing controversy about the documentary "India's daughter" about the Delhi rape victim.
The interviews of not only the rapist but of the so many other normal people like you and me, shocked me.

A politician says in a speech in front of thousands of people, that boys will be boys, no matter what. If a girl goes in front of them alone in the night then they will be tempted to rape her. This was the exact statement the leader of the country made.

For some moments I was so shocked. Another lawyer says women are like sweets, if you keep it open on the streets then dogs will eat them. So he is questioning why are women going out alone on the streets. They are inviting to be raped.

After listening to all those talks, my immediate thoughts came back to this story. We, our societies are giving birth to men like Karan, who have the least regard for women and who think women are there only to satisfy a man's penis.


Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago

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