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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely touchy superb update..te way geet missed my maan and searching him and other side my maan too searching his geet was lovely..opps geet was crying missing my maan like a child missed her mom and te aya her fear making her realize wat my maan meant for her,with in tat few mins mathaji gave answer to all her questions was lovely emotional..te way geet announcing in speaker msk was in auction he he he..te way my maaneet ki relief seeing each other and they love for them was lovely touchy..te way geet saying she wont fight with him and my maan teasing her and came to know abt her feelings was touchy..te way geet ki pride as gmsk and te way she saying abt my maan making others feel jealous was lovely...opps geet want to show my maan how she ride i felt like a small kid who was so excited to show her fav toy to her mom was lovely.i love te update so much yar
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
Geet feels protected with maan
When she missed him she felt he has been her everything now
Geet going for ride
Indirectly she conveyed the message to maan
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 60

Geet keeps looking in...Maan hasn't moved from his place...

He pretends not to be interested...

Geet waits for him...

Geet: Nandini pehle teri bari

Nandini: kyu n Didi? Aap Delhi mein scooty nahi chalathe? Aap ko dar lagtha hai kya?

Geet: nahi toh, tum choti ho, issiliye, mein intrezaar karthi hoon

Nandini: achcha didi aap intrezaar karo, woh aathe hi honge

Geet: chup tum jao

Nandini comes back and Maan has come out now...

Maan: Nandini tum toh bahut achche chalathe ho

Geet wants to show that she can ride better than her sister...

Nanadini: didi, ye lo, teri bari

Geet doesn't turn back or looks at Maan...

She acts as if she is not bothered about his comments...

She takes off and picks up speed and manages pretty well...

Geet comes back and she eagerly looks for Maan...

Maan hides behind the door to fool her...

Geet is disappointed and she keeps looking at the gate for Maan...

She loses her concentration and off she goes and hits the tree...

She falls on the floor with the bike over her...

Maan rushes to help her...

He takes the bike off and helps her get on her feet...

Geet looks ather torn kurti, a twig from the branches had done the damage...

Maan notices that too...he is worried that she must have badly hurt herself...

Geet is ashamed and she runs inside...

Maan: Geeet rukho Geet

Maan discards the bike and runs after her...

Nandini: didi didi, kya hua didi?

Nandidni is scared...her papaji will scold her only...

Papaji is not here and Rajjo too is busy inside the kitchen...

Geet's friends are also scared and they also escape...

Maan runs after her...

Geet goes and locks herself in the room...

Maan: Geet, darwaza kholo

Geet won't open...

Maan is also scared...what's the matter with this girl?

She needs first aid and she has locked herself in...

Maan: Geet, abhi darwaza kholthe ho ya mein issko thodoon?

Geet opens the door for she knows MSK can do anything...

Poor papaji will have to replace the door then...

Maan enters and Geet turns her back to hide her torn cloth...

Maan: Geet, kya hua? Mujhe dikhao

Geet shakes her head...nahi, kuch nahi

Maan turns her towards him and Geet holds the torn part and hides her tummy ...

Maan: Geet, haath hatao

Geet: nahi

She is in pain...Maan knows that from her eyes...

Maan stares and Geet takes off her hands...

Maan lifts her kurti and finds that it's just a touch and go and still it had bruised her soft skin...

Luckily Geet's kurti has saved her from trouble...

Maan looks at the deep red line on her fair tummy ,it must be burning hard for her, he blows gently to sooth her burning skin, Geet freezes and she loses her senses...

Maan: Geet, first aid box kahan hai?

Geet is lost in his touch and she is mersmerised...

Maan: Geet

Maan knows what's wrong with her...and he has been thru it many times...

Geet: hmmm

Maan: koi antiseptic cream toh hoga?

Geet: woh...nahi

Maan: tum rokho, mein aatha hoon, aur darwaza khula hi rakhna

Geet just keeps staring him as he vanishes from her sight...

She keeps staring till he comes back with his after shave lotion...

He takes his rumal for there is no cotton, he puts some lotion and rubs over her bruised skin gently blowing air to minimize the burning effect...

Geet's didn't feel any pain at all...

After all she has lost her senses...

Maan: tum change karke aao Geet

Maan leaves closing the door behind...

Geet stands still for a while till she gets out of the trance and then she felt the pain...

She quickly changes and meanwhile Maan has another job to do...

Maan had seen Geet showing her mobile to her friends often and they looked at it in awe...

Last night too Geet was busy looking into her mobile and Maan is curious to know what it is...

Geet was hiding her mobile from him, Maan is worried...

What is that that she is hiding from Maan...what's the secret?

Maan should get to know the truth...

But is it not wrong to invade her privacy?

Everything is fair in love and war...

And Geet has declared their friendship this morning and Maan has the right to know her secrets, haina?

Maan thinks that it must be Geet's pictures taken at her college and Delhi...

How he wishes he could save it for himself?

Girls love to change their looks often and try something new, but Geet doesn't seem like a typical girl, she never cared about her looks and often Maan would wonder if that's b'coz of her pride, for she doesn't need any artificial make-up as she is a natural beauty...

Man has not seen her spending time looking at herself in the mirror, Maan knows Geet's 24 hour routine, it's been his job to keep track of her routine for the past few days when there was this cold war and this unannounced no talk no see curfew imposed between them...

Still she might have participated in some culturals at her college...

Maan has never got the opportunity to go to the college functions...it's always dadi who takes part in them, and Maan had heard Dadi praising Geet for a while week but then he was annoyed and thought this dadi is trying to woo him...

Now he realizes that he should have paid more attention to dadi's words of praise...

it's OK...he could see for himself now, it's better late than never...

May be he can use this to woo Geet...Maan is not good at praising...he is known for his criticism which Geet nows better than anyone...

Now he should start appreciating her too...he has been admiring her for long but he had kept it for himself...

It's time to reveal some of the secrets to her...

He can't wait to see what's in store for him, he looks for the right time and when Geet goes to send off her friends leaving her mobile behind, Maan runs and grabs it...

He takes it to safety and looks into her secrets...

Maan is shocked...it doesn't look like her mobile at all...

There's not even a single picture of Geet stored in it...

It's loaded with pics of KM, Dadi and Maan, full of Maan's pics...

She had captured every moment of his daily routine...

From his morning black coffee, tai-chi to his cooking pasta...

Well Maan, Geet is also doing the same what Maan was doing, stalking and admiring each other secretly...

Even Maan had not noticed himself so much...

Maan is on cloud nine...so that's the reason behind the new friendship deal...

Geet has taken the first step and it's Maan's turn to take the next step forward...

They say the first step is always difficult to make and the rest just follows it, Geet has managed to take the difficult first step and it's now easier for Maan to follow her...

Maan was only hesitating b'coz of his doubts whether Geet would be meantally prepared for their relationship? Now he has got the green signal from Geet itself...

MSK knows what he should do now...haina?


Part61

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely Update

Geet hurts herself with the scooter and Maan is worried
Maan wants to know Geet's secrets and checks her mobile but is totally surprised by seeing all his pics

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Posted: 10 years ago
Poor geet
She wants maan to look after her
But maan too played with her
This hide n seek resulted geet hurting herself
N maan has to give first aid to her
She is too lost in maan
Maan got the chance yo see her mobile
It had his daily chores pictures
Which clearly said she is sailing in same noat as him
Now maan ki baari hai
Hiw he will t as ke next step
Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
great part dear...now maan come to know geet secrets through her mobile..and he truly gets green signal...omg...am already imagining...coming updates full of maaneet romance...plz update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Maaneet ke pyaar ki gaadi line pe aaraha hai😉
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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely superb update..my naughty devil singh khurana how geet was so excited to show how she is riding but u poured water and made her to fall bechari got hurt was lovely cute..but geet baby my buddhu maan was drooling u chupke chupke..opps my maan ki worry for her hurt and trying to sooth without knowing both are getting affected with his touched was lovely cute..te way my maan ki curious to see his geet ki mobile but wen he saw opps his shocking face to see his face and then light on in his mind tat his geet too fallen for him, now its in my maan ki hands to take next step..i love te update so much yar
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part..
Geet hurt and Maan worried about her..
ohh thats surprise for me Geet having Maan's pics on her phone..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 61

That night Maan waits for Geet in the room...

Geet is waiting for Maan to fall asleep and so she is chatting with Nandini who is half asleep...

Mamaji is giving them company...

Nandini: didi aapko neendh nahi aathi?

Nandhini couldn't ask Geet to go b'coz Geet has come home after a long time and wants to spend some time with her family...

Mamaji: Geet puthar, tum bathao, tum Delhi mein kya karthi ho?

Mamaji always forgets about Geet's marriage...

Geet: mamaji, aap bhool gaye? Mein college mein padthi hoon

Mamaji: aur woh 007 types ka munda jo tere saath aaya haina, woh bhi tummare saath padtha?

Mamaji apne jasoosi shuru karthe...

Maan is wating upstairs and staring Geet...

Mamaji had noticed Maan looking at Geet, Geet too knows it...

Lucky: oye mamaji, ye kya ho gaya hai aapko? Woh toh hummare dear jijaji hai

Mamaji: mujhe toh shak hai ki woh hummari Geet ko chahtha hai, issiliye Geet ke peecha pada hai

Nandhni: mamaji, mein so rahi hoon aur sapne toh aap dekhthe ho, aap jijaji ko hi shak karthe ho

Geet: sshhh Nandhini, tum chup raho, mamaji aap bolo, aap ke shatir dimag kya kehtha hai?

Geet ko ye bahut achcha time pass lagtha...

Mamaji: puthar aap ko bahut sabdhaan rehna padega, ek minute

Mamaji takes a shot and gets ready to think...

Geet: mamaji, aap teek kehthe ho, mujhe bhi yahi shak hai

Mamaji: usske aankhon ko dekha tumne? Din mein bhi nashe mein rehtha

Geet had to appreciate mamaji's detective skill, Maan is actually acting as if he intoxicated...

Geet: haan mamaji, mein ne bhi dekha hai

How could Geet miss Maan's hungry looks overflowing with the unchecked passion...

Mamaji: ye to daru ke nashe se bhi zyada katharnak hai

Geet: aaise kya katra hai mamaji?

Mamaji: tum toh bachi ho, tumme ye sab samaj mein nahi aayega

Nandhini laughs...mamaji didi ab bachi nahi, badi ho gayi hai

Mamaji looks at Maan doubtfully...

Mamaji: sshhh koi hai

Geet: kahan?

Mamaji: wahan, upar, woh tumme hi gurke dekhtha hai Geet

Geet: haan mamaji

Lucky: haan mamu, dear jijaji hai, jijaji, jijaji

Lucky calls Maan...

Geet tries to stop him...: lucky veerji

Maan: saale sab tummare ghar mein aaj shivrathri hai kya?

Lucky understands what Maan means?

Lucky: Nandhini, tu beitke hi sorahi ho, andar jaake sojao, mamu, chalo bhai hum bhi jaathe hai, gud night didi, gud night jijaji

Maan: Geeet, tumne suna nahi, gud night Lucky

Geet looks at Maan and stares...

Nandhini leaves and mamaji is still standing there staring Maan...

Maan shouts...: mamaji gud night

Mamaji is happy...: gud night gud night

Geet: mamaji, aap bhi sone jaa rahe ho?

Mamaji looks at Geet...hmmm

Geet is disappointed...

Mamaji : puthar mujhe ek chota sa madat karogi?

Geet: kya hai mamaji? Bathayiye

Geet anxiously asks him...may be he is ready for his next mission...

Mamaji: tum uss bande se pooch ki woh kya peetha, desi ya videsi? Ye desi item toh utna strong nahi hai

Geet: kya?

Mamaji: zaroor videsi hi hogi, mujhe bhi milega kya?

Geet: mamajiii

Lucky: mame tummara time katam ho gaya, chalo

Lucky forcefully takes mamaji in...

Geet has no other go but to face her DD now...

Aaj toh Geet bach nahi sakthi...haina?

The MSK is waiting...chalo Geet, tum bhi achche bache ki tarah tayaar ho jao...

Geet slowly makes her way up the ladder...

Maan comes and lends a hand...

Geet hesitates...

Maan: Geet, haath pakdo, itne raat ko tum teek se dkeh nahi payegi aur ghir jayegi

Geet ko bhi lagtha hai ki usko Maan ki madat lena chahiye...

She holds his hands for support and Maan pulls her up in one go...

Kitna strong hai Maan ke arms?

Geet jumps and Maan catches her...

Geet steps back...

She looks at Maan...there is no sign of him going to sleep...

Geet: aapko neendh nahi aayi?

Maan: nahi

Geet: toh raat bar ye chandamama ke saat beitke batein karo

So saying Geet tries to go...

Maan stops her and pulls her closer...

Maan: jab tum saath ho toh mujhe chandamama dikhayi kaise dega?

Maan looks into her beautiful eyes...

Geet tries to look away...

Maan lifts her chin and makes eye contact...

Maan: mujhse nazar kyun churathi ho Geet?

Geet is getting nervous...

She tries hard to control her emotions...

She has been battling hard to resist her temptations since morning and after Maan's fitst aid Geet has completlely turned crazy...

She has been thinking of his touch and that morning kiss...

The thought of it makes her swoon and gives her the same pleasure...

She is confused whether her feelings are right...

Does she even have the right to dream about Maan like this?

She knows that she is still not big enough to understand the complexities of relationships and also she has not yet realized what's her relationship with Maan is?

Yes, they have become friends, but friends don't feel anything like this for each other...haina?

This is something different, she knows it happens between husband and a wife...haina?

Good, she knows to differentiate between friendship and ishqwala love...

She knows that she is madly in love with MSK...isse hi pyaar kehthe haina?

Geet ne kitne Salman ke films mein dekha hai...she knows what love is...

Geet looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...mahi...

Maan: aaj hummare dosti ka pehla din hai, haina?

Geet remembers their friendship deal...

She nods her head...

Maan: mein aaj bahut kush hoon Geet

Geet looks puzzled...

Maan: ye dosti hummare beech ke rishte ki ek achchi shuruwad hogi, haina?

Geet: hmmm

It's cold outside and Geet is already started to shiver...

Maan takes off his shirt and covers Geet...

Geet needed the warmth and she makes hersef comfortable in his shirt...

The fragrance of his shirt makes her loose her senses and she is not contended with the shirt, she wants the owner too...

This is getting out of her control and she longs for his proximity...

He holds her by her waist and takes her in...

Maan: chalo Geet, andar chalthe hai

Maan makes her sit and Geet gives his shirt back as it's warm inside...

Moreover the mere touch of his body has warmed her blood...and she is burning now...

Maan gets the shirt and keeps holdng her hand...

Geet tries to pull her hand back...

But Maan wouldn't leave her hand...

Maan throws his shirt off and sits beside Geet...

Geet looks into his eyes and Maan could see that Geet is ready to take their relationship forward...

Maan gets closer and closer and Geet leans backward and lies on the bed...

Her duppatta flies in the air and flutters over her face blocking their eyelock...

Maan takes it off and throws it away...

Geet doesn't complain...Maan's proximity and his bare torso have aroused her and she is ready for complete submission...she is ready for everything...

Geet closes her eyes and is anxiously waiting for his next move...


Part62

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago

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