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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update dear...maaneet moments are awesome...can't wait for next part...update soon...
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Part 15
Awesome dear...
So Maan is taking Geet with him...
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Part - 58

Maneet take off on their bike...

It's now Maan's possession till they leave...

Geet is now confident and she happily goes with him...

But now she is little sceptic about their contact and tries hard not to get closer...

She sits in the corner of the seat and hold to the rod tight...

Maan doesn't like the division and he wants her to sit comfortably for she could hardly balance and might fall...

Maan makes space for her by moving in front almost sitting over the tank...

Geet loves the way he respects her feelings and how he is concerned about her safety...

Geet is quiet and Maan wouldn't let her so...

Maan: hmmm toh Geet, tum mathaji se aaj kya dua mangne wali ho?

Geet: aap jaanke kya karoge?

Maan: hare, tum kehke toh dekho Geet, mujhse kehna toh seedhe maathaji se kehne ke barabar hai

Geet: aap mathaji ke secretary ho kya?

Maan: aaise kya secret hai jo mein nahi jaan saktha?

Geet wonders whether he has read her mind...

Now her only wish is a happy life with the MSK...

Geet: haan aaise hi samjho, ye mere aur mathaji ke beech ke baat hai, kissi aur se nahi kehthe

Maan: mujhse toh keh sakthi ho, mein koi paraya toh nahi hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: tumne hi kaha na ki mein mathaji ke secretary hoon, mathaji toh aaj bahut busy honge, mujhse kehthi toh mein tumare dua ko maathaji tak pohunchadoonga, shayad tummari dua aaj hi pura ho jaye

Geet: mujhe koi postman ki zaroorat nahi hai

Maan: sambalke Geet, mere mazak udathi toh bahut mushkil ho jayega

Maan applies the breaks as he had not noticed a pit speaking with Geet...

Geet goes and hits him...

Geet thinks that he got angry...

Maan turns back immediately to looks at Geet...

Maan: tum teek toh haina?

Geet: kyun aap mujhe yahi girake jaana chahthe the?

Maan: what?

Geet: mujhe aapke saath nahi aana chahiye thi

Maan: ye dialogue toh meri hai Geet

Geet: aap kyun nahi manthe ki aapko gadhi chalana nahi aatha?

Maan: kya kaha tumne?

Geet: aaise koi break lagathe hai kya?

Maan: ye kaise rasthe pe mujhe lekhe aayi ho Geet? dekho kitna karab hai ye

Geet: galthi toh aapne kiya hai

Maan: tum saath hothi toh mujhse galthi ho jaathi hai

Geet: haan, mein hi aapko galthi karne ki majboor karthi hoona? Mera kaam hi aapse galthi karwana hai, haina babaji?

Maan: tum manthi ho ya nahi lekhin yahi sach hai Geet

Geet: warna MSK se kabhi koi galthi ho sakthi?

Maan: tum toh ab samajdar ban gayi ho Geet

Geet: galthi toh meri hai, mujhe pehle hi laga tha ki aap ke saath jaathi toh koi na koi gadbad ho hi jayegi

Maan: Geeet

Geet gets off the bike...

Geet: mujhe aapke saath nahi jaana, mein peithal hi jaathi

Maan follows her...

Maan: hare rukho Geet...

Geet tries to move fast...

Maan keeps calling her...: Geeet

Geet turns back to see him and she keeps taking bigger steps to avoid him...

She didn't look at the old man coming infront of him...

She almost hits him and the poor guy would have fallen on the ground...

Geet: maaf kijiye, meinne dekha nahi

Old man smiles...: koi baat nahi beti, iss umar mein budde log nazar nahi aathe

Geet: woh woh

Geet bahut pareshaan dikhthi...

She keeps looking back at Maan...

Oldman: tum akhele aayi ho beti:

Geet: hmmm

Oldman: tum jao beti

Geet stares Maan and leaves...

Maan follows her...

Old man looks at Maan...he stops Maan...

Old man: ye kay ho raha hai?

Maan: ji?

Old man: tum kaun ho? aur akhele jaathi ladhki ke peecha kyun kar rahe ho?

Maan is insulted...

Ye Geet hamesha Maan ke image spoil karthe rehthi...

Maan: woh ladhki meri biwi hai, mujhse jagdah karke jaa rahi hai

Old man smiles as if he is also sailing on the same baot...

Old man: biwi toh aaise hi hothi, lagtha hai tummare naya naya shadhi hui hai, fikar mat karo beta, dhere dheretumme bhi aadat padjayega isski

Maan gets angry and he goes after her...

He is afraid she will definitely fall and hurt herself...

Maan blocks her way and stops her...

Maan looks into her eyes and warns her ...

Geet is a little scared...ye toh naraz ho gaye hai...

Maan: gadhi mein beitjao Geet, abhi

Geet goes and sits...and she stops talking with him...

At the temple...

Geet gets off the bike as Maan stops and she goes inside without waiting for Maan...

Maan quickly follows her as it's crowded and it's chaotic...

Geet blinks where to go for she couldn't find the right que for mathaji's darshan...

There are many que, for darshan, for prahsad and many...

Maan: Geet, yahan aao

Geet follows Maan...

Maan lets her in the front and guards her fron the back...

He is very protective and nows that Geet couldn't manage alone in this crowd...

Maan tries to hold on to her hands but Geet feels ashamed for she is not a kid...

She relives his hold reluctantly...

Maan smiles and he lets her off, he knows that she is now big enough to handle this, moreover he is right behind her only...

Still he wanted to make sure she sticks with him as she needs someone to take care of her even now...

Her family has spoilt her with their love and over protectiveness...

Though her maasi wanted Geet to go with Maan to the temple her papaji still wanted to come with her...maasi stopped him that their daughter is not alone any more and she is goind with her hubby...

Then Maan thought that they are over reacting...but after watching Geet's scary and confused eyes seeing the crowd Maan understood why they were so concerned about her...

Geet keeps praying and is lost in her prayers...

She couldn't stop admiring the way he takes care of every small thing when it comes to Geet...

She is really lucky to have MSK as her companion...

Now she never fails to thank her babaji for sending Maan in her life in her daily prayers...

She only asks for his happiness as she thinks he has seen a lot of pain and loss in his life so far and he deserves to ba happy for the rest of his life...

And she would be more than happy if she could bring a smile on his face even if it's b'coz of her broken English...she tries to use a lot of English words as that would always be a comedy and Maan enjoys it a lot and also helps her get them right...

But now a days Geet has started feeling something different for him, something more than friendship, she wants more,...

Kehthe haina? Ye Dil Mange More...

Teek kehthe hai log, Dil deewana hai, kuch bhi mangtha hai, haina?

she is not just content watching his smiles and happiness from a distance, she wants to be a part of his happiness, she wants to share those beautiful moments with him, and whether she is happy, sad, worried or angry she wants to share it with him only...

They say true friends share their hearts, maybe she wants to be a friend, whom Maan could rely upon, that's all OK, then what about this possessiveness, she wants Maan to be with her only, she wants his full attention...

He has also changed a lot, nowadays he is very expressive and doesn't hold back any of his emotions, he wants her to know his feelings, he wants her to now he cares, he wants her to know she means a lot to him, he wants her to know that she is not alone and he is always there for her...

That's also a sign of true friendship...

All this she can understand, but the only problem is her evil desires to own him...

She has started liking him too much, she wants him to be with her and when he does stay with her she gets this crazy thoughts that he is her man, she owes him, she wants him to own her, she wants to gift herself to him, she wants to be his wife...

But she doesn't know whether it's right to have such feelings for Maan for she too knows this much that according to him their marriage was an act to save her and that means nothing to him...

He never looked at her as a life partner and also didn't want to acknowledge her as his wife...

For him she is just someone in need, someone who needs his support, someone who needs his shelter...and nothing more...

She has many questions in her mind, she wants an answer from her mathaji...

Does she deserve Maan?...knowing his family and fortunes Maan is the true rajkumar, the prince of the Khurana throne, yes, khurana's are like the royals of Hoshiarpur and Geet is a poor girl in trouble, likea cindrella, like a damshell in distress...waiting for her savior and mathaji had sent Maan as the rajkumar...

But will it be right for her to expect anything more than she needed, more than the moral and financial support...more than what Maan promised Teji...

She had come to him for help and now she wants to own him, she wants to be a part of his life, she wants the MSK...

Geet seeks mathaji's guidance...

"maa mujhe rastha dikhao, kya yahi meri manzil hai? kya yahi mere zindagi hai? aur yahi mere bavishya hai? mein toh soch soch ke pagal ho rahi hoon maa, mujhe nahi patha ki ye sahi hai ya galat, kya mere ehsaas galat hai? kya woh bhi yahi chahthe? Aap ne mere taqdeer mein inka naam hi likha hai? mujhe patha hai ki ye mera sapna hai, kya ye sapna sach ho saktha? Ya ye adhura hi rahega? Meri madat maro, mein kya karoon? Agar mein galat hoon toh tumne mere mann mein aaise qwaish kyun peitha kiya? agar ye galat hai toh tum hi meri madat karo sabko bhool jaane ki "

Geet is very confused and a lot of queries remain unanswered...

She is searching for the answers ad she believes her mathaji will definitey help her...so she sincerely seeks her help...


Part59

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
geet -maan accepted you as his life partner n trying say you

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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Update

Geet is getting more attracted to Maan and now she wants him with her all the time she feels that she owns hin and wants him to own her too
but Maan did tell that their marriage was just to safe her life yet she cannot do anything about her emotions .

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ud
both accepted each other as life partner
and praying fr that
but still didn't confesses to each other's

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 15
awesome dear...
lovely...
so Maan is gonna take charge of Geet's studies...
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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely cute superb update..omg my maaneet ki never ending nok jhoks which show they hiden love for each other..te way geet arguing, making him tease her and te way geet ki gussa my maan going back of her, yes maan babu tat old man is correct get use to it he he he..my maaneet in temple and my maan ki over protectiveness making geet to frown but she love his closeness was lovely touchy..wat ever she fights with my maan but she came for my maan ki happiness was lovely touchy..te way ki questions and seeking help form mathaji was lovely emotional..u will get all ur answers geet..i love te update
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

guys see this thread and share ur details...

GF's slam book...

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4319765&PID=119960642

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part

geet wants to stay with maan all the time

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