My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Stalker present again!!! You going on an update frenzy today??? Wow!!!

I have a busy week... Don't know when I shall be coming back online. Also not in the mood to hangout... This story and emotions are taking a toll.

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

So rags found pakhi for kalpi.' And Palhi has realized kalpi is in love with rags. Beautifully written. And the way pakhi gives kalpi that Realuzation that rags is gets. My heart went out to pakhi. Beautiful epilogue. They all became a part of eachothers lives.

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Epilogue

Ragav holds his little angel in his arms... Places the crook of his little finger near her lips for her to suckle... Whispering... "Shhh sweetheart. Mummy is sleeping. She has had an exhausting day today... Bringing you into this world." He looks at Kalpi, his eyes shinning with love.

Impatient for her turn, Pakhi says, "give her to me. She is mine." Holding her outstretched hand in his, Ragav says, "thank you for stepping away... Thank you for telling me she loves me... Thank you." Pakhi caresses his cheek, takes the baby into her arms and whispers, "thank you for this."

Watching Pakhi and the baby bond, Ragav smiles and walks slowly towards the hospital bed. He sits next to Kalpi... Linking their hands as he slowly caresses her... Whispering, "thank you my love."

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Phew what a roller coaster ride this story has been.

THE END

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#475

So Angel will u finish when love comes calling next. Or another one.

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Angel, the updates were so heart warming, with so much unexpressed emotions & confessions. Loved it. Sometime I just think, you idiots do talk and clarify things but that doesn't gives you this much joy in the story. Where you started and where you have brought the story for the readers wish. You play good in any given ground. You have a nice talent. I have an obligation, give updates frequently. I do want you to continue your other ff ' s.

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: redpetal
Angel, the updates were so heart warming, with so much unexpressed emotions & confessions. Loved it. Sometime I just think, you idiots do talk and clarify things but that doesn't gives you this much joy in the story. Where you started and where you have brought the story for the readers wish. You play good in any given ground. You have a nice talent. I have an obligation, give updates frequently. I do want you to continue your other ff ' s.

Ouch... You r calling me an idiot in the midst of all this praise 😆

Thanks

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Will do a poll... Readers can decide which one i should work on next.

Decision time click here

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SUGANDHII

@suggii

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#479

Hello I was waiting for the ending I mean positively haan.. bcz d moment u write phew cmplete i was lyk now my turn to tell my fvrt writer about her another brilliant work 😳⭐️ but yaa I read last 6 parts in a go.. 😉 bcz I started reading this n i left it wen they left 4 london so I need to tell u I read it 😆 n wo be end tak..😉😛

n what a story 👏⭐️ gosh.. u started with Rakhi n as per readers demand u twisted d story beautifully without paakhi.. though paakhi always play vry imp role in ur ff.. n its always about ragna in ur ff/ss.. but girl this one is also counted in one of ur masterpiece... their unspoken love, care, loved it.. Brilliant👏👏⭐️

what I lyk d most... hmm raghav lol I lyk him in ur every ff😳

brilliant story fuzz... Loved it😛😛

P.S. Now update wen loves calling😳

Lots of luv..

mwaah🤗❤️❤️