My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03 - Page 50

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Stalker present again!!! You going on an update frenzy today??? Wow!!!

Oh fuzzz! I cried!!! How do you manage your emotions when you write your ff's? I would have been a total mess!!!!

Phew!! It surely has been a roller coaster ride this one!!! Wow Kalpi must be so madly in love to be ready to give her baby to Pakhi and Raghav too!!!!

Epitome of love I must say!!!! The women in this ss have come out really strong fuzz!!!

Pakhi showed her strength in giving up the man she loves to Kalpi! She too must have loved him truly to let him free!!! But what pain she must have gone through!

For the first time ever I felt for Pakhi and empathised with her character because she is the one who lost out on everything! She had it all but now she was empty handed. The man she loved, fell in love with another woman. She will never bear any child is another loss for her. It is truly heartbreaking journey!!!!

As for Kalpi, what can I say? This woman is great!!!! Even after realising that its her child and with Raghav she chose not to be selfish and realised Pakhi's pain as a woman! How goos and unselfish can one be!

No comments on Majboor Singhania! Though his love for Kalpi was special and remained strong throughout you have decharacterised him from the original RS mode!!! The one with that I give a damn, I want what I want attitude! The strong fella! Here he is more vulnerable more human, more realistic!

But the true heroes of this story are surely the ladies!!!! Wow fuzzz! Congrats on women empowerment!

I am glad you did not write her journey in this ss else I would have gone crazy crying, trust you to make it all the more emotional!!! Phew!

You are too good girl! You make us connect to the characters that we feel their pain, anxiety, worries and their happiness too!

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Wow!! What an emotional update!! Love is so powerful!! What one will do for love?! Well Pureness, you showed us exactly the meaning of love!! Paaki has real guts to accept and do what she did just to make Raghav happy!! That is love!! Losing the one you love is not a very easy thing to deal with, since Raghsv have never showed any disrespect to their relationship while they were married!! But, seeing the love one has for another and sacrificing love for happiness takes real emotional strength!! Paaki knew what was needed to be done and she did it with immense strength!! Proud of her actions!! She is one hell of a person!!
Kalpi however, showed her love for Raghav by carrying their child and was still willing to give the child up!! Another example of love!! Damn you're good!! You managed to give all the expressions and meaning of what love really is in this ff!! In the end, we see the results of sacrifice and love!! True love!! What is meant to be no one can prevent!!
Neetu's actions we know she did for her own selfish reasons!! It ended up being so ironic!! Her actions for her own selfish reasons lead to the truth about two heartbeat becoming one 😉!! One heart beats for another😉 You're awesome Pureness!! I always enjoy reading your ffs!! And there is always a message embedded in it!! Hats off!! 😉

lovely, just curious did Paakhi move in with Raghav and Kalpi, and is Raghav and Kalpi still married to each other

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive

Angel you are an extremely gifted writer . Only a master craftsman of your calibre could have taken such an amazing turn around on an already decided story !! HATS OFF to you 👏 And what an emotional roller coaster of an ending truly remarkable sensitively showcasing Pakhis angst along with both raghav n kalpi . I have totally fallen in love with your epilogue how Raghav gives his little finger to his daughter to suck on - BRILLIANT 👏 Angel do not feel detached with this story as it's only a great writer who respects the wishes of his/ her readers becoz the bottom line is that every true writer writes for the readers !!!! This is purely my POV . More power to you dear . Stay blessed always .😳

Originally posted by: Anjinie

lovely, just curious did Paakhi move in with Raghav and Kalpi, and is Raghav and Kalpi still married to each other

superb last chappy and epilogue .

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Than you. Your opinion and feedback means a lot. Women are the strongest when it comes to emotional strength... They can bear anything for their loved ones.

Mwah.

Yup they are!! Proven fact!!

Beautiful story, I guess writing intense, emotional and many times heart-touching pain-laden scenes is not only your passion but you are a master of it. Loved all the updates, u do a damn good job in describing intense emotions. your stories mostly maybe, touch spheres of a message, realism and an intense love story. the way you change story track just for readers is commendable. not everyone can do that, because as a write you'll always feel connected with your original idea if story,But since it is a RagNa forum, and hurt people always like to see Ragna with each other, it is not possible to write much variations storywise here. Even I myself, stay away from writing realistic stories, because for me it is a peaceful, soothing change from tensions of daily life, an escape. It's my own fantasy world where I snatch a few moments of happiness for myself. Too much pain is not something I look forward to writing and reading in stories, especially if its a RagNa story. if I have to experiment, I have other places where I can be myself in a realistic way of fiction, focus on issues.

Nice Story. I felt bad for Pakhi for the first time 😆

It ended ethne jaldi i was not expecting it at all,i was expecting some emotionally update of how RagNa are gonna realize their love...