My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03 - Page 49

Originally posted by: sugandhii

LOL sorry 4 interuppting

but she's calling them idiot raghav n kalpi u see😆

read it again u😆😉

Originally posted by: sugandhii

Hello I was waiting for the ending I mean positively haan.. bcz d moment u write phew cmplete i was lyk now my turn to tell my fvrt writer about her another brilliant work 😳⭐️ but yaa I read last 6 parts in a go.. 😉 bcz I started reading this n i left it wen they left 4 london so I need to tell u I read it 😆 n wo be end tak..😉😛

n what a story 👏⭐️ gosh.. u started with Rakhi n as per readers demand u twisted d story beautifully without paakhi.. though paakhi always play vry imp role in ur ff.. n its always about ragna in ur ff/ss.. but girl this one is also counted in one of ur masterpiece... their unspoken love, care, loved it.. Brilliant👏👏⭐️

what I lyk d most... hmm raghav lol I lyk him in ur every ff😳

brilliant story fuzz... Loved it😛😛

P.S. Now update wen loves calling😳

Lots of luv..

mwaah🤗❤️❤️

Wow it was an awesome ff. Thanks a lot.

...oh..why did u finish it in such a great hurry...such lovely story...u r such an imaginative writer...ur description of emotions is out of the world👏...hope to read more...very.. very soon...

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Thank you for the kind words... But must say this story has left me dissatisfied... I did not get to explore in depth the emotions and fears that I wanted to. Mwah

Wow!! What an emotional update!! Love is so powerful!! What one will do for love?! Well Pureness, you showed us exactly the meaning of love!! Paaki has real guts to accept and do what she did just to make Raghav happy!! That is love!! Losing the one you love is not a very easy thing to deal with, since Raghsv have never showed any disrespect to their relationship while they were married!! But, seeing the love one has for another and sacrificing love for happiness takes real emotional strength!! Paaki knew what was needed to be done and she did it with immense strength!! Proud of her actions!! She is one hell of a person!!
Kalpi however, showed her love for Raghav by carrying their child and was still willing to give the child up!! Another example of love!! Damn you're good!! You managed to give all the expressions and meaning of what love really is in this ff!! In the end, we see the results of sacrifice and love!! True love!! What is meant to be no one can prevent!!
Neetu's actions we know she did for her own selfish reasons!! It ended up being so ironic!! Her actions for her own selfish reasons lead to the truth about two heartbeat becoming one 😉!! One heart beats for another😉 You're awesome Pureness!! I always enjoy reading your ffs!! And there is always a message embedded in it!! Hats off!! 😉

Angel you are an extremely gifted writer . Only a master craftsman of your calibre could have taken such an amazing turn around on an already decided story !! HATS OFF to you 👏 And what an emotional roller coaster of an ending truly remarkable sensitively showcasing Pakhis angst along with both raghav n kalpi . I have totally fallen in love with your epilogue how Raghav gives his little finger to his daughter to suck on - BRILLIANT 👏 Angel do not feel detached with this story as it's only a great writer who respects the wishes of his/ her readers becoz the bottom line is that every true writer writes for the readers !!!! This is purely my POV . More power to you dear . Stay blessed always .😳

Lovely story Angl.. Aaww baby girl.. So sweet... Wish this story never comes to end.. I loved this one.. Ok.. Plzz write more sweet sweet stories but before that complt ur other stories forst

Awwie, very emotional and sweet.

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