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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: akshara82

Ohhh.. My Kalpi is afraid dat she hv to leave her baby vit raghav n khi
She still thinks dat Rags stil in love vit khi n khi vil come bk once d baby is born...
she cant think about it.. shes damned scared.. wat will happen aftr her baby born
Rags dont know wats in kalpis mind..
he s thinkin dat she wants to leave him aftr d baby born
Both are hurt..
dont want d other to know their heart break..
There should b a confrontation between both..
Both need to let out wats in their heart..
Is it to much if i ask u to update nxt chapter sooon.. 😉


Lol working on next chappy... Gathering my thoughts first 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lolor

Both love eachother but thinks other dont love him/her...

Kalpi wants to bring back pakhi...😡...pls no...dont bring back her...or if she returns only to make realize ragna their love...


lol if Pakhi doesn't come back who will bang it into their thick skull that they love each other 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
You know Pureness!! I'm taking into consideration kalpi and raghav's characters from the initial stage!! Here we see kalpi not wanting to come between a husband and wife, kalpi being the person she is will think the way she's thinking!! But, then again she has feelings!! Feelings for raghav that she never once said out loud because of her character!! And feelings, now as a mother to be!! What a dilemma!! She still doesn't know that raghav loves her and has sacrificed his feelings for her from the initial stages in his marriage!! Well not sacrificed, but never was open to kalpi about it!!
But, paaaki being his wife, knew what he has and will always feel for kalpi! Also she (paaki) has taken into consideration, that she cannot give Raghav what he needs!! She has taken a step that I think was very difficult for any woman to do!! To leave the love of her life is not very easy thing to do?! But, yet she did!! Why, because she understand how much raghav loves kalpi!! And she knew she couldn't give raghav a child!! This is unbearable pain!! Emotionally!!
Marriage is not always a bed of roses, when it comes to situation like these!! To me she had belly and everything else that comes with leaving her love!!
Now, I hope paaki comes back!! Why because she will be the one to tell kalpi hi much raghav really loves her and set everything right!!
Pureness!! I don't know what to tell you!! This is remarkable!! Really!! I don't even want to know what you go through writing these ff!! Hats off!! You're one hell of a writer!!

Another thing!! We have to take into consideration it's not only mature ppl here but some have much to learn also in life!! Life is not always love and everything is always happily ever after!! Being married there is always ups and downs and we all have to take this into consideration!! Life is not always a bed of roses!! I should say married life, that is!! These are the kind of stories I love reading!! Why?! Because they're more realistic!! Full of challenges and that's what life is about!! We just have to have an opened mind when it come to these types of relationships!!
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg just noticed now u wrote chapter 16. So the misunderstanding continues. The poor girl thinks pakhi is coming back. When will this misunderstanding clear. Rags needs to finally speak up.
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very emotional update. Wish Kalpi will clarify her doubts with Rags, to put an end to their pain ! Great update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

You know Pureness!! I'm taking into consideration kalpi and raghav's characters from the initial stage!! Here we see kalpi not wanting to come between a husband and wife, kalpi being the person she is will think the way she's thinking!! But, then again she has feelings!! Feelings for raghav that she never once said out loud because of her character!! And feelings, now as a mother to be!! What a dilemma!! She still doesn't know that raghav loves her and has sacrificed his feelings for her from the initial stages in his marriage!! Well not sacrificed, but never was open to kalpi about it!!
But, paaaki being his wife, knew what he has and will always feel for kalpi! Also she (paaki) has taken into consideration, that she cannot give Raghav what he needs!! She has taken a step that I think was very difficult for any woman to do!! To leave the love of her life is not very easy thing to do?! But, yet she did!! Why, because she understand how much raghav loves kalpi!! And she knew she couldn't give raghav a child!! This is unbearable pain!! Emotionally!!
Marriage is not always a bed of roses, when it comes to situation like these!! To me she had belly and everything else that comes with leaving her love!!
Now, I hope paaki comes back!! Why because she will be the one to tell kalpi hi much raghav really loves her and set everything right!!
Pureness!! I don't know what to tell you!! This is remarkable!! Really!! I don't even want to know what you go through writing these ff!! Hats off!! You're one hell of a writer!!

Another thing!! We have to take into consideration it's not only mature ppl here but some have much to learn also in life!! Life is not always love and everything is always happily ever after!! Being married there is always ups and downs and we all have to take this into consideration!! Life is not always a bed of roses!! I should say married life, that is!! These are the kind of stories I love reading!! Why?! Because they're more realistic!! Full of challenges and that's what life is about!! We just have to have an opened mind when it come to these types of relationships!!



Thank you.

I know it just two words... But trust me I say them with a lot of emotion. I am so glad that one of my readers has understood and is able to see what I am trying to portray... More so that it is you, Di. Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpureness




Thank you.

I know it just two words... But trust me I say them with a lot of emotion. I am so glad that one of my readers has understood and is able to see what I am trying to portray... More so that it is you, Di. Thank you.


You know I always get the feeling from your writing!! its because of the way you write that I am able to feel what you are really trying to portray!! And I appreciate every ounce of it!! what can I say you're a #BOSS 😉 #Professional 😉
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Readers I have respected your wishes and not written or described the battle Pakhi has gone through. I only bring her in now because she will unite RagNa.

Chapter 17

Ragav looks at Maya with frustration, "please maya. I know you are in touch with Pakhi." Shaking her head in negation, Maya says, "sorry Ragav. I am not helping you... There is no way I will help you." Pacing to and fro in Maya's living room, Ragav runs his fingers through his hair, stops, glares at Maya and says, "damn it. You don't understand. Kalpi wants..." Interrupting him, Maya says protectively, "I don't care what Kalpi wants. I care what my friend needs!"


Forcing herself to keep calm, Maya continues, "Ragav you don't know the emotional upheaval Pakhi went through when she realised she would never become a mother... When she realised her husband loves another. She has just picked up the pieces... Just yesterday she smiled through her eyes. Do you know how difficult it is to see your best friend feign that all is well and yet when you take a closer look her eyes are lifeless. I can't have you ruin all her hard work.


Ragav looks at Maya guiltily, says, "I never meant for any of this to happen. I never realised that I had fallen in love with Kalpi until it was too late." Taking a deep breath, Ragav continues, "Maya, I need to speak to Pakhi... The child Kalpi carries is Kalpi's and mine. I need to explain..." Hearing a shark intake of air... Ragav stops... Turns and calls out, "Pakhi are you here... Please pakhi I need..."


Pakhi steps into the room, her gaze drinking him in... She had not seen him since the night she had walked away. Seeing the vulnerability in her eyes, Maya walks towards her concerned. Pakhi gives her a weak smiles and says, "I am fine. Please give us a moment."


Ragav stares at Pakhi... Feels awkward... Helpless and guilty over the pain he caused. He says softly, "I am sorry." Pakhi grins and says, "relax. I am not made out of china... I won't break easily. We have always been friends first." Relieved he tells her everything... The role Neetu had played and the plan she had hatched to become a grandmother. Smiling Pakhi says, "look at the irony of the situation. Had she known you were in love with Kalpi she would have not needed to do all this. You must give her the credit for speeding up the pace to bring you two together. Knowing you... You would have waited until we eventually broke up." Feeling guilty, Ragav says, "Pakhi, I..." "I am fine Ragav," Pakhi says, "I can handle the truth. When do you want me to meet Kalpi?"



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Kalpi waits nervously for Pakhi... She looks about Maya's living room anxiously... She was both happy and sad... Deep down she knew Ragav would know where Pakhi is... She needed to get this over with before she changed her mind. Seeing Pakhi walk in, Kalpi gets up and rushes towards her... Giving her a tight hug. Surprised by the gesture Pakhi hugs her back.


Breaking their hug... They sit side by side... Kalpi leans forward... Takes Pakhi's hands into hers and says with tears eyes, "come back home. Nothing has changed." Placing pakhi's hand on her womb, Kalpi adds with a heavy heart, "This baby is yours... Ragav is yours."


Pakhi stares at Kalpi in disbelief... Pulls her hands... Realising them and exclaims, "oh my God! You are in love with him." Hearing the words aloud, Kalpi denies them, "no I am not. Why would you think that? I only agreed to become a surrogate for both of you. I want you both to be happy." "The baby is yours Kalpi," Pakhi says. Wanting to reassure her, Kalpi says, "my intentions have not changed." "Wow. I never saw this. You love Ragav so much... No don't interrupt... Kalpi you love Ragav and want his happiness. I love Ragav and want his happiness. Do you know where Ragav's happiness lies?" Kalpi nods her head affirmatively, Pakhi smiles sadly and says, "no you don't. Ragav's happiness lies with you. I left because Ragav loves you very much."


Kalpi stares at Pakhi for several seconds than bursts out crying. Pakhi comforts her and says, "don't worry it is pregnancy hormones." Moments later Pakhi asks, "can I be a part of your lives?" Her gaze rests on Kalpi's womb with yearning and says, "this baby is the closest to a child I shall ever have." Nodding Kalpi hugs her, whispering, "yes of course." Pakhi whispers back, "thank you." Breaking the hug, Pakhi says with forced cheerfulness, "better rush off to that husband of yours. He ,just be sick with worry wondering what we are concocting." Smiling Kalpi leaves.


Once Kalpi leaves, Pakhi turns... Sees Maya by the entrance... Runs and hugs her tight... Seeking comfort as she weeps away.
Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
its so beautifully written wow rag searching pakhi n maya not wanting pain for her friend n pakhi n kalpi meeting was well written amist of it pakhi at once felt how much kalpi love rag
aww pakhi said it to her n want t be part of their life
update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Stalker present again!!! You going on an update frenzy today??? Wow!!!

Oh fuzzz! I cried!!! How do you manage your emotions when you write your ff's? I would have been a total mess!!!!

Phew!! It surely has been a roller coaster ride this one!!! Wow Kalpi must be so madly in love to be ready to give her baby to Pakhi and Raghav too!!!!

Epitome of love I must say!!!! The women in this ss have come out really strong fuzz!!!

Pakhi showed her strength in giving up the man she loves to Kalpi! She too must have loved him truly to let him free!!! But what pain she must have gone through!

For the first time ever I felt for Pakhi and empathised with her character because she is the one who lost out on everything! She had it all but now she was empty handed. The man she loved, fell in love with another woman. She will never bear any child is another loss for her. It is truly heartbreaking journey!!!!

As for Kalpi, what can I say? This woman is great!!!! Even after realising that its her child and with Raghav she chose not to be selfish and realised Pakhi's pain as a woman! How goos and unselfish can one be!

No comments on Majboor Singhania! Though his love for Kalpi was special and remained strong throughout you have decharacterised him from the original RS mode!!! The one with that I give a damn, I want what I want attitude! The strong fella! Here he is more vulnerable more human, more realistic!

But the true heroes of this story are surely the ladies!!!! Wow fuzzz! Congrats on women empowerment!

I am glad you did not write her journey in this ss else I would have gone crazy crying, trust you to make it all the more emotional!!! Phew!

You are too good girl! You make us connect to the characters that we feel their pain, anxiety, worries and their happiness too!


Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago

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