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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Isn't it update time yet??

Edited by mints23 - 10 years ago

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samsung04

@samsung04

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Was happy to see 2 pms but not frm Deepthi ;(
Waiting waiting.. Its passed midnight here..

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: canapoem
Green light is on!!!!!!!

It's 'bout time..my patience is wearing out & I cannot keep up my pinky promise to keep calm any longer

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PriyaUk

@PriyaUk

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Nice teaser !!!!
(Pinky )
promise !!!!!!
To take the relationship further...
Waiting for the update ...

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Ap kab update kro ge, hum sab kr rahe hain wait..

Hum hain intezar mein, dekho ziada kro na late..

Kya Arshi ne kiya PINKY PROMISE...

Hum se thora kro cooperate...

Kyunke hum rehna chahty hain uptodate...

Update post krne mein na kro hesitate...

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955548

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Have caught up with the Story.

Aaabbbsoooluuutlly Aaawwwsssooomm. ❤️❤️❤️

I am in awe of Your INK in Your PEN.

COULD NOT STOP READING.

Some of the comments are so intense & Full of Passion.

2 Days of Marathon Read.

Shall come back with My POV.

🤗👏

❤️S

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: ..RareGem..
Ap kab update kro ge, hum sab kr rahe hain wait..
Hum hain intezar mein, dekho ziada kro na late..

Kya Arshi ne kiya PINKY PROMISE...
Hum se thora kro cooperate...
Kyunke hum rehna chahty hain uptodate...
Update post krne mein na kro hesitate...
😆

Loved you Shayari 👏👏

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#508

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#509

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#510

who knew this that behind the pinky promise fun time dreams, there was hidden a huge reality storm in khushi's life which going to wash out even arnav emotionally here..deeps believe me the pain which i am bearing at heart is indescribable...u r an out standing excellent writer ...parising u here is like soraj ko diya dekhana...no words can justify wt my heart is crying out in ur appreciation ...

its the first time arnav and khushi stayed together that long talking, consoling, sharing pain and also the smiles...and behind those smiles which both tried to lit up on their faces for other one there..it seems there was hidden volcano of painful emotions ready to erupt at any time...i felt like if a drop of that lava going to drop out its going to melt not only the heart skin body but the soul going to vanished too with its heat :(...

i am thinking how u created this charisma...wts the magic in his palm ,baby??...when that palm is on her belly ...she felt life smiling inside her...when that palm touches her hand it appears that finally smile reaching her eyes...and when that palm touched her cheek the tears which she afraid of shedding in front of even nearest dearest , she shedding them openly now at her heart content in front of him...kabhi laga that her unshed tears r about to shed from his eyes...and kabhi laga the tears she shedding they as strong and as pure that they soaking his soul too along with sheer purity...

for me khushi is at that stage of life where "bin teray koi aas bhee na rahi itna terdpay keh pyas bhee na rahi :("..her tears r answers to my all questions :(

the poverty brings whole baggage along...wt a heart breaking insight view u have given here for such a family ...:(...wt to say ...i am all tears after reading khushi convo about their financial problems and how gracefully she was putting forward her point here in front of arnav thats amazing...jis per gouzarti hay wohi behtar janta hay...:(

i don't know y but deeps i am short of words here the impact of her pain and ur writing blended so beautifully that ...u deserves standing ovation from me nothing less than that...👏

Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago