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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Romantic update...😊 congrtz fr new thread..👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome & Hot update.
Thanks For pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: everestlove

Romantic update...😊 congrtz fr new thread..👏

thanks...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishra123

awesome & Hot update.
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thank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
1st of all a big congratulations 4 dis 2nd thread 2 al d super wonderful nd creatiive writers...

really a gr8 work done by all...
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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1st updt by shavi d... thnx d 4 pm.. 😊

d i love the title nd song too.. 😆😉 especially after watchng lohri scene of ishra nd in bg music dis sng was plyng... awww..
Vanity table... 😆 hehehhe ankita d aise prop k ideas kahan se aate h yar aapko..? 😉😆
nd shavi d hats off u d... iss prop k sath b aapne itne ache se romantic OS likh dia...
it was romantic plus awsme also.. 👍🏼 i lyk it.. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

1st of all a big congratulations 4 dis 2nd thread 2 al d super wonderful nd creatiive writers...


really a gr8 work done by all...
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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1st updt by shavi d... thnx d 4 pm.. 😊

d i love the title nd song too.. 😆😉 especially after watchng lohri scene of ishra nd in bg music dis sng was plyng... awww..
Vanity table... 😆 hehehhe ankita d aise prop k ideas kahan se aate h yar aapko..? 😉😆
nd shavi d hats off u d... iss prop k sath b aapne itne ache se romantic OS likh dia...
it was romantic plus awsme also.. 👍🏼 i lyk it.. 😉


thank u yar...

ankita se puchna aise prop kahase aata hain...

i changed updte nd title fr trice...to match this thread level...

glad u liked it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Hey.. So cute... Shaving... Stry yaara... Was busy...
Just read it was very good... I liked it very much...
Resd fr my detailed comment..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: shravsss

Hey.. So cute... Shaving... Stry yaara... Was busy...

Just read it was very good... I liked it very much...
Resd fr my detailed comment..


i knw you will be bsy...

thts the reason im nt disturbed you...

any ways happy valentine's day and a congratulations for ur big day...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
And Finally my turn comes.. Its 14th Feb 2015...

"Happy Valentines Day to all my lovely people"😳

Happy IshRa Anniversary all...Time is over, but celebration can go on forever!😉

My props are shower and bathtub challenged by Ankita. Anki, baadiya props dedi tune😆 but I am happy!😃

Im dedicating this OS to my Besharam Gang in Twitter handle as well as at DIVAN AT! 😳 Chalo, I think I did a fair job with these props, but still not satisfied,esp with the prop bathtub. Please, I need honest feed-backs from all. Thank you so much in advance.

PS: Really Long update. Sorry about that 😉😆

Pardon me if any spelling/grammatical errors found!

Here goes my special edit on this special day.
Credit me if anyone is planning to use!😳



Ok, I am done with my rant...
Enjoy the update!😳

IshRa OS : Memories

Raman and Ishita, The most beautiful and loved couple by all were dressed to kill. Raman, as always looked handsome and dashing in is favorite black tuxedo and Ishita in her blue silk saree with black border making her look more ravishing. The divine couple was walking hand-in-hand at the Goa International Airport. They were here for their honeymoon.

"Driver, this is the address. Please take us here." Requests Raman

Ishita as always thought Raman had an important meeting and to avoid his boredom post-meeting, he took her or rather you can say she was forced to say yes for this trip.

Raman had made simple arrangements at "The Leela" for their night, unknown to Ishita.

"Raman, Is this the place you are going to have your scheduled meeting?" Asked Ishita with curiosity

"Yeah" Said Raman with a smirk which went unnoticed by Ishita.

"Par, this doesn't look like one. This is so cozy and has got a very romantic atmosphere" Said Ishita as highly confused

"Oye Jhansi Ki Rani, chup karo yaar. Room mei jaake batata hun." Said Raman

"Okay Ravan Kumar" with a pout

Raman smirked and did a victory dance in his head.

***********

"Sir, your luggage has been kept in the room and here are your keys. 4th Floor, room number 402" Said Room service attender

"Thank you so much. I will call if anything is required." Said Raman

Raman forwarded his arm to her "Chale"?

Ishita: "Haan chaliye"

Their room did not look like any honeymoon suite, but was filled with exquisite interiors and had a fresh feel. He purposely didn't decorate the room or make it obvious about their honeymoon as he believed in simplicity ever since his madrassan entered his life. Without further delay, he took her inside, putting the card "Do Not Disturb" around the door handle outside and locking the door behind.

"Raman, this is beautiful. The view from here is so peaceful " and she goes straight to the balcony.

Raman thinks of breaking his surprise.

Raman: "Ishita, gharwaalo ko phone karke ata hun"

Ishita: "Alright. Can I make the call? I want to talk to Ruhi."

Raman: Nahi Ishita, I will make the call. Ruhi will be at Amma's place. She will be alright. You don't worry. Everyone is there to takecare of her.

She didn't reply anything, but simply nodded and went ahead enjoying the sunset breeze from the balcony.

Raman: *whispering* : Haan Maa, paunch gaye hum theek thak se.

Toshiji: Chalo chenga. Ishita ko bata dena ab (giggling)

Raman: Ok Maa. Bakki sabko batana, Theek hai!

Toshiji: Jai Mata Di!

With that Raman ends the call and kept the phone on the stand after switching it off and walks straight to the balcony and hugs her from behind tightly and heard Ishita gasping.

She felt a cold shiver run through her spine and her cheeks already flushed. Raman placed a feather kiss on her shoulder.

Ishita: "R.A..man... what are u doing"?

Raman: "Dekh nahi sakti kya, pyaar kar raha hu apni biwi se."

Ishita: "Raman, apko kaam nahi hai kya? Yeh humare honeymoon thodi na hai."

Raman: "Oh acha, toh honeymoon pe hi romance kar skta hun kya"?

Ishita just got trapped in her own words and couldn't reply and all she did was blush more and more.

Raman turned her around . Lifted her chin , caressed her reddened cheeks and placed a soft kiss on her right cheek.

Ishita couldn't handle the sweet torture being thrown, her breaths were getting heavier and harder. Raman moved back a bit holding, sensing her discomfort.

Raman:*smirking* "I want to tell you something. Actually we are on our honeymoon itself."

Ishita:*shocked* "Kyaaa??? Are you serious? Huh.. mummyji , papaji, everyone knows it then"?

Raman: "Yeah"

Ishita was not in a state to understand anything. Everything was a mixture. She was feeling happy, love, passion, nervousness, desire , desperation to be in his arms and all sorts of emotions a newly-wed has!

Raman held her more tightly around her waist and pulled her closer with her hands being around his neck.

Raman: "Aaj Subah sab log tujhe bhuddu banaya tha. You remember that day where I had booked a honeymoon suite for us and that day went awful, only good thing was Adi. Mummyji, Papaji felt bad and so they told Romi to get the tickets booked for us and put up a meeting plan forward or else Shagun would use her dirty tricks to spoil this also. Waise, even Amma, Appa also knows this. So you don't have to worry about calling them. Mummyji will inform them".

Ishita hugged him tightly and placed a soft kiss on his throat.

Ishita: "You are the best husband that anyone could get. Thank you for coming into my life and making it worth-living".

Raman: "And I have to equally thank you for coming into my life and making it colorful and beautiful. Chalo honeymoon pe aake no emotional talks aur dekho tu kya kar rahi hai. Its already past evening. We will spend the rest time here itself, kal subah we will go out. Tere liye surprise hai. What say"?

Ishita: "No Issues patidev ji".

Raman: "You go and check the menu card for dinner, by then I will freshen up and come.

They freed themselves from the hug and parted ways.

*************

She opened her suitcase to change her saree and found only sleeveless tops and short skirts till her knees and two fancy silk sarees. She chuckled remembering that she wasn't allowed to pack her bag. It was all Rinki and Simmi's plans.

Ishita: "Itni bewakoof hun mei, How come I didn't take that as a clue"! *Blushing more*

After changing, she sat there on their cozy bed lazily and swapping channels and stopped when "Teri Galliyan" was played in MTV. She was completely immersed and felt some strange relief and peace when there were no tensions burdened or any clinic appointments . The only thought of she and Raman being alone gave her goose bumps all over and her thought process was disturbed by Raman.

"Ishita...Yahan towel nahi hai, Can u please get it."

Ishita: "Ya, coming..."

************

Raman was all wet and was standing partially out. Ishita lowered her eyes on seeing him and extended her hand indicating to take the towel from her hand and all Raman could do was to pull her inside the bathroom.

Shock would be an understatement. She didn't know how to react. She was stammering, couldn't frame proper words and was going redder minute by minute. Raman was enjoying her state and he made it even worse.

Raman checked her out from head to toe and was pretty impressed by her dress. Her clothes were body hugging types accentuating her feminine curves that could turn any guy ON, let alone her husband.

Raman: "woah Ishita, you are looking hot",

Ishita: "Kuch bhi Raman..."

Raman: "Nahi yaar, Sach keh raha hun. Sleeveless top and skirts do suit u a lot. Wear them quite often."

Raman pulled her by her waist and a gasp escaped from her mouth.

Ishita: "Ap kya kar rahe ho, pure gile ho, sardi lag jayenge apko, pls poch lo"!

Raman: "Fikar tujhe ho rahi hai na, toh khud hi pochlo" and started moving backwards to the shower.

Accidently he touched the shower button and fortunately they both landed up being wet under the shower.

Ishita shivered and was feeling heavy with all these new emotions arising inside her. She felt it difficult as well as she was enjoying this new phase. She felt her knees weakening, body trembling because of the cold water , lips trembling, shyness clouding her. His masculine scent was driving her crazy too.

Raman kept pulling her more closer and closer till their nose touched.

Raman brushed his nose with hers and says " Ishita, why are you getting scared? I am your husband and I have full rights on you"

Ishita:*her breath going on and off* Ra..ma.n, Raman.. No, I have no issues, but everything is so new for me and I really don't know how to..."

She could not complete what she was saying but felt his lips on hers moving softly without hurting her. He looked at her flushed face. " Ishita, if you are not comfortable, then I will not force you. You can take your time and he loosened the grip on her waist when he felt she pulled him more closer.

Ishita: "Raman, I was just scared at first, new experience,but now no, I'm not scared. Instead I would love to be in your arms."

Raman was highly impressed with her bold statement.

Raman: "So u mean, I can go forward and do anything, you will not object"

She replies shyly with a "NO" nod.

With that he fiercely held her by her waist and started dropping wet kisses and love bits starting from her cheeks to jawline to neck to shoulder and to collarbone. He stopped and took a turn to look at his beloved's face and she had her eyes closed , a dreamy state and her natural blush colored on her cheeks. She sensed he was looking at her and she opens her eyes to see his handsome face all wet, glowing and his slight subtle. She caressed his cheeks and placed a tight kiss on his cheeks and then neck.

He pulled her more closer leaving no space between them and spoke, "U remember we had shower encounters three times...The first one, your drunken state.That was the first time you slapped me."

Ishita: "I am sorry" and raises her level to his and places a kiss on his cheek where she had slapped him. "Remember the second one, she replies chucking, you mistook me as Romi and opened the bathroom door to pass the bucket "

Raman: Yeah I remember, that day I had a terrible fall and a horrible backache. Remember the third one, while grinning, when Amma had planned to off the main pipe for that kutte".

Both dropped their heads back and started laughing aloud remembering their awkwardness. Their laughs were little louder. All thanks to the echo in the bathroom.

Ishita: "Kithna awkward tha. Those days we didn't even realize that we loved each other. "

Raman: " I had realized but I was not ready to accept it. I was getting scared each day with my growing feelings towards you. Phir dheere dheere, things turned out perfectly between us and see , we are here, our fourth one in the shower"!

Ishita: "But a beautiful and memorable experience"

Raman: "I don't mind having such experiences daily."

With that Ishita slapped his chest and hugged him more tightly. She lifted her head up to see him and he placed a soft peck on her lips. That was supposed to be a peck, but it turned out to be passionate, wild, teasing each other biting, nibbling and sucking. His hands roaming all around her back and her bare waist beneath her top and her hands travelling on his nape and ruffling his hair in between. They parted to catch their breath, panting heavily.

"I love you Ishu..."!

"I love you tooo Raman..."!

A simple confession in the most unique way..In the bathroom, under shower...!

With that both hugged each other, completely forgetting they were in shower for hours.

Raman was in no position to let this go off and swirled Ishita in his arms and carried her to the bed and made her lay down.

He jumped to his side laying on his back and looking at the ceiling . He wiped his hair and hers too.

Ishita: "God, how much you used to hate me"

Raman: *chuckling*: "Now also I hate..."

Ishita: "What? You still hate me? Then what happened between us in the shower" and hits him on his chest

Raman: "Puri baat sunne se pehle, react mat karo yaar, I hate your lectures Madrassan, par ab nahi kyunki I have my own ways of shutting you up" *Winking*

Ishita: " Acha ji, Toh I will make sure I will lecture you in front of everyone, tab ap kya karoge"

Raman: "Tab bhi mei yeh karunga. "

Ishita: "Besharam"!

Raman: "But you know what, I am experiencing peace for the first time. I never thought that I would get married again and live happily. I had lost hope on everything. How time flies! Look how we are now."

Ishita: "Things wouldn't be the same if you were not there in my life."

Raman: "Come here"

Raman pulled her to his side protectively wrapping his arms around her and her head pillowed on his chest and her hands wrapped around his stomach.

Silence engulfed them for few minutes.

Raman: " Waise Ishita, mei sooch raha hun ki humare bathroom mei ek bathtub hona chahiye."

Ishita: "Kyun"? She cocked her eyebrow. "Faltu ki karcha..."!

Raman: *naughty glint in his eyes and with mischievous voice*: "Nahi, Dekho, if there was a bathtub, we could bath together, you see, you can save water, time, and spend some nice time without any haaddis!

Ishita: "Acha ji... Besharam sooch! What I know is people usually bath in the tub unlike some people who sleep in there at night! *Giggling aloud*

Raman: "Oh hoo ,baadi hasi aa rahi hai. Madam is improving mere saath rehke (laughs) How funny that was... Mera pet khrb tha aur raat bar bathtub ki ander ghuzarna pada...A memorable honeymoon"!

Ishita laughed her heart out . Apko yaad hai woh condom confusion... Apka behavior dekhke I was too shocked.

With that he rolled her down pinning her beneath him ..." Acha, ab dar nahi hai kya? " *Seducing voice*

Ishita: "Nahi..bilkul bhi nahi" and casts her eyes downwards and blushing profusely

Their nok-jhoks halted when they heard a sensuous song being played on MTV... "Sawaan aaya hai"!

The perfect romantic atmosphere...

With that he nudged her nose with his and kissed her nose tip. He then slowly made his way to her neck to drop wet kisses and she let out a moan and arched her back causing her chest rise upwards and collide with his. She titled her head sideways to give him more access. She was breathing heavily. He moved his hands to her waist and was drawing patterns on her feminine curves. With her moans and sighs, he was getting heavily aroused and tore apart her top and pulled down her skirt. She brought her hands lower to pull his towel and then placed her hands on his chest . It made things easier for Ishita. He went down to her breasts to nibble , bite and lick and placed love bites on her waist and navel and went deeper down only to hear a heavy moan from Ishita. Soon her inner garments were thrown in different corners of the room. She rolled on top of him and did the same, played and sucked his manhood to hear a groan from him. After turns of rolling, their desires, desperation, attraction, longing , love ended with one swift enter by Raman. Finally he made her complete and their relation as a true husband-wife. People say it as "Do Jism, Ek Jaan".

Their dinner was long-lost forgotten. Only moonlight being the witness to their love and to hide behind the clouds at later night.

*************

Hours later...

Raman woke up to see his beautiful glowing wife spread in his arms with white sheet on her looking extremely gorgeous. He pecked her lips. She opened her eyes to this and snuggled more into him and hugging him like a teddy bear.

Each other whispered..

Raman: "Happy Valentines Day sweetheart..."

Ishita: "Happy Valentines Day my love..."

They locked their lips once again, snuggled more closer and dozed off peacefully to welcome a new morning.

**************

Bhalla House, after 1 week

All the young couples were chit-chatting, gossiping about many things when Mihika chirped in "Let's play truth or dare".

Vandu: Tum logo khelo, mein nahi hun"

Mihika: "Nahi Akka, what is this, plsss.. I love you na"

Bala: " Leh, behno drama..."

Mihika: "Stop it Bala jiju" and earned a smack from Vandu too.

IshRa: "We are In"

Simmi, Rinki , Mihir and Romi also voiced.. " hum bhi hai"!

************

Mihika: "Mihir, ghumado bottle ko"

Everyone had their own set of truth and dares and the final one comes to Ishita and Rinki had to question her.

Rinki: "Bhabhi... Truth or Dare"

Ishita: "Truth"

Rinki: "How and from where did Raman bhai proposed you" *chuckling*

Ishita was growing scarlet and looked at Raman. He nodded silently. She wanted that to be a private moment but since Raman didn't have any problem, she chose to say.

"Err... Bathroom mei"

WHATTT?? All in Unison and landed up laughing aloud

Rinki: "Ohhoo Bhai, not bad huh. Bathroom Romance"

Raman: "chup kar"

The next turn was Raman's and Simmi had to question him.

"Chalo, ab proposing bathroom mei huya hai, toh hume bhi dikhado kaise kiya hai"

Raman pulled Ishita forward . He didn't want to embarrass her by kissing her on lips in front of everyone hence he changed it.

Ishita was getting uncomfortable with each passing second, unknown with Raman's intentions.

Raman: "Ishita, ajao, everyone wants to see how we proposed"

Ishita: "Raman, its ok, what is there to show"

Raman pulled Ishita forward, kissed her forehead and went down on his knees

Raman: "Will you be mine forever"?

Ishita nods happily and tears making their way on her cheeks.

Raman: "I love you Ishu"

Ishita: "I love you too Raman"

Everyone was in Awe and clapped.

He pulled her to a tight hug and says aloud.. "Our unique confession in the most beautiful manner without luxuries and a memorable one" remembering his confession.

*******THE END *******

Edited by avni_19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Avni!!!
That was aweaome !
Loved it!!

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