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Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: canapoem
Deepthi, atleast res soon...

Yes Please, My hubby is waiting for me.. He is getting very impatient these days, Laad Governor...😆

Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago

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Kiran

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

Yes Please, My hubby is waiting for me.. He is getting very impatient these days, Laad Governor...😆

Sankadevi Chup...

She told right.. She will update at 11 am IST.. Wait still 3 and hours hours left.

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kaprasin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: lovedrops

Sankadevi Chup...

She told right.. She will update at 11 am IST.. Wait still 3 and hours hours left.

😆😆

3 hrs more😭.. it will be midnight for us. It's going to be a long night.

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Deepthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

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Deepthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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lala rukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Beeeautiful update ...hug and friends...😊 wt an amazing start of arnav and khushi life ...

after reading lavuu and khushi convo ...i was feeling quite heavy at heart...cause its so true sometimes even ur shadow unable to decode the real of u...although lavuu didn't shared the news thinking that maybe khushi will be upset after seeing her current phase of life...but i guess this approach of lavuu shows that she not understanding the heart of khushi...kabhi kabhi ap kisi keh leay acha sochtay hoay bhee ghalat ker jatay ho...seeing the way khushi stopped the discussion with ..i know,i understand...she seems shaken from all fronts ...apnay strangers...no one is understanding the real khushi actually...her going inside the shell or cocooning herself makes perfect sense ...

arnav anjali and arjun...amazing friends😆...and their talks on sumo wrestler...u know my association with sumo wrestlers and u in japan...lol...awesome fun fantastic chit chat between these three...and its amazing to see the comfortable level of friendship they shared...like really malnourished d****...hehehe

deeps excellent writing...khushi thought process while sitting in last row of bus...:)...how beautifully u wrote it...she sick and tired of all the eyes on her...which r painfully of those who r close to her...i can say now that not even a single eye around her who is having reflection of khushi's inner...every attempt of people around throwing khushi more into miserable state...i so wish wt she wanted to say or share we can get that glimpse in arnav's eyes some day :)

wt payal wanted to convince khushi about...wt aayi baba r right about...will wait for the story to unfold..

loved the way nurse noted down the appearance of khushi which was given to her by dr r...:)...plastic bangles and all ...loved it :)...

its lovely to see anjali care and concerns here...and even more lovely to see arnav all up to date about khushi...:)...so he knew that she legally separated from karan...i loved this active mind ,arnav here :)...

"or ,mayb not"..."she has already taken her first step"...its awesome awesome and awesome...wow deeps kiya timing hay yaar...amazing ...😊

i guess arnav proved here as a man of action ...hehe...his love obvious from every move ...aweee the hug ...the desperate hug from arnav ...beautifully written...and i never thought he going to hug two ladies in one picture...lol...i mean almost half hug he gave to payal too...lol...but wow wt a hug...the way u have written it...it screaming arnav eagerness and love and affection..on other end from khushi side her shocked face worth smiling for :)...damn payal u wanted to change khushi's doctor like really...pain in a**...poor payal abh she have to go under cuss words infact any one who going to come in-between arnav and khushi now going to face the reck...lol...

RG ...hilarious arjun comment ...changing name to guptaaa...hahah deeps awesome sense of humour and amazing writing baby

aweee khushi u one strong girl ,i must say...asking about waiting room for payal...how much she stressed out and hurt from her surroundings...and then thinking about her phonic convo with dr r ..wts new about her health..she appeared super strong infact...she really needs peace now no more gossips...and arnav reaction worth laughing for ...he is shoo cutieee...hehe

LOL...ms latebloomer...😆...deeps hahaha...awesome...

coming back to hug discussion...loved her question...y did u hug me?...and even loved it more the way he reacted ...such a blunt question...smashing the bull eye...lol...this combo of khushi and arnav is deadly ...lol...with that hand shake...its a beautiful start...like the spring has started around...i can feel flowers blooming at heart too :)...and after long her smile reaches her eyes :)...thats a very pleasant start :)

how beautifully arnav took the first step...friendship...and how sweetly she accepted it...thats beautiful writing deeps...haastay haastay kaam hogaya...😊...fantastic chapter...enjoyed it loads...

mints beautiful banner...loved it :)

PS: i would say deeps the timing of hug and friendship goes so well with valentines day...its super cute :)

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Kiran

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Fantastic update. Finally the wait for the Hug is over.

When I read first line.. I was just shocked.. What pregnant... Then I breathed again after knowing its Lavanya. But what Lavanya did hurted Khushi. She should know about Khushi after many years of friendship. But seeing Khushi breaking down Lavanya couldn't take that risk. It is not because Khushi will cry that she is pregnant.. It is because she will think about babies and breakdown more. I couldn't say what Lavanya did is wrong or right. But Khushi handled the situation very well. When the circumstance doesn't favor us or it is beyond our hands it is better to cut the topic there or to escape from there. Khushi did both.. Brilliant girl.

Seeing Arnav all smiling again made me happy.. Really happy. I didn't feel good when he was lost. Both boys are using Anjali a lot for their teasing. I really loved their friendship. What Anjali is thinking is absolutely valid.. And what Arjun told is excellent. Arnav's answer for Anjali's confusion just blew me away.. She was married for many years... Not more than the number of women I slept with. Arnav 👏

He is keeping an eye on that jerk... Good.. Awesome. They are legally separated.. He knew it.. Wonderful.

Payal.. I am yet to understand this girl. Sometimes she says she is with Her sister and sometimes she supports her father. But the conversation in bus is good. Khushi is learning things. She will learn more with the friendship of Arnav.

There it goes.. The moment aagayi.. Arnav finally saw her. He just forgot what he is doing and hugged her. That hug came out of desperation, longingness, love, concern and affection. Until now he just evoked a feeling of warmth in her with his touch on her tummy. But this hug evoked unfamiliar tears in her eyes out of unfamiliar feelings. He was successful in his first step.. He evoked something in her. The road to their future started its layout.

Finally Payal got introduced.. Poor Payal .. She was in shock.. This is just starting Payal.. I am sure you will receive more shocks in future. She is damn right.. Arnav Sigh Raizada is too dangerous for any woman.. Of course yes..

Khushi did good thing by asking him to keep Payal out of the examining room. But she surprised me by asking him directly that ... Why did you hug me? Where she got that courage. For one minute I thought he was doomed. But he turned the tables to his side brilliantly in a snap. And what he offered is just brilliant.

Friendship... He gave himself to her as a friend.. And he got a precious gift as a friend. Their relation seeded as strangers.. Sprouted as doctor and patient.. Blooming as friendship... Waiting to be fruitful as emotion.

Excellent update D.. Whatever you want to say .. You will show it with so much clarity and brilliance. I thing The word Amazing and it's synonyms were born from you.

I simply loved it.

Edited by lovedrops - 10 years ago

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Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Yes, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada (which is me) just read the update and Khushi Khush hua.

Lav is pregnent and was scared that she will upset Khushi by sharing her happy news. I would agree with her, If I was in her situation I would probably do the same. Maybe Khushi should also recommend her Dr. R ji to her best friend so that Khushi has a excuse to meet him. Khushi acted all happy in front of Lav but she is really sad inside.

Khushi and Payal's bus ride was very interesting. First when Payal said "I support you but amma and babuji have a point too", My mind immediately went back to that Jerk.😡 I was like 'Are her parents and Payal are having second thoughts about their complaint on the jerk. Phew, that was not it. They asked her to change to a female doctor. I understand their point, but a patient should be comfortable with their doctor, especially when it involves their Gynecologists. When Khushi is comfortable with her Sexy doctor, why bother. I thought She will change the doctor. (more on that later)

The AAA friendship is going strong. Anjali and Arjun are happy to see their friend laughing and smiling again and they know the reason too. I think Arnav is very eager to change Mrs.Mehta to Miss.Gupta to Mrs.Raizada very soon. Even I don't like Khushi with that Jerk's name. Also very glad that Khushi is in the process of her divorce. In cases like Khushi divorce should be granted thru fast track process. Anjali is worried about her marital status, but Arnav pointed out of him being a man-s**t before he met Khushi.

Finally eyes of Arnav and Khushi meet. Arnav's feet are no longer on the ground, as he bullet speeds to Khushi and hugs his love very tightly. Ms. Goody two shoes Payal Gupta is very shocked at his behavior. I was more shocked at Arnav and Payal's hug than Arshi hug. It reminded of TV shows Friends, when Chandler Bing kisses all the girls because he kissed Monica by accident. Arnav had to hug Payal to make it seem like it was his thing to give everyone hugs. The two A's of AAA were teasing the other A about Dr. R ji. I like this running gag.

Now they are inside, Khushi who wanted to spend some time her Dr (Awww) asks Dr R to kick her sister out. I was dancing in joy that Khushi has got some rebel streak in her. I guess she was vexed with people telling her what to do. Arnav's teenage like joy when Khushi asked him that he has to do a exam on her, that was so hilarious. Khushi innocently asking about the hug and him telling that he hugs all his friends. I guess now they made their friendship official by shaking hands. Khushi gave him his first gift...Her Genuine Smile.

Overall, a light hearted update. I hope there is nothing wrong with Khushi with anything related to her reproductive system. That would cause all Toxic Lovers a major heartbreak. 💔 Our hearts are in your hands.

Hugs and Kisses

Tata. 🤗

Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

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The first few lines threw me into a fix and was trying to see if I missed any updates in the middle 😊. I am glad that Lavvu's joy bundles got enhanced. It was interesting conversation and your points were spot on about Lavanya's valid hesitancy and Khushi's indifference to the constant banter she is hearing.

It was just breeze after that for the rest of the chapter. Starting from the guys teasing Anjali, to Arnav's kid like excitement, Khushis in the face innocence, it was just a mesmerizing read.
Maybe it's the phase of the story or maybe it's your brilliance at work, but its very hard to miss the playfulness of this chapter. It has to be your brilliance that in a matter of a few chapters we moved from a gloom and grief story to a happy and charming story and that too with us noticing the transition. This is writing at its best!!!

The discussion of the three doctor friends made it so clear that they are there for each other for every situation. Anjali's cautious tone, Arjun's reassuring support and Arnav's clarity of thought. All the emotions and final assurances of true good friends were exemplified in their small talk.

The hugging scene was so endearing, such a great ice breaker. The contrasts of feelings for Arnav/Khushi/Payal from those hug(s) could not have been put any better. The best one liner for me from all that "He is too dangerous for any woman!" 😉.

And the innocence and sincerity of Khushi. What a simple question and her persistence of "why did you hug me"? It just shows us the purity of her nature and thoughts and makes me cringe thinking that this is the same person, who some people turned into a boy making machine, for their own selfishness.

I will try not to remind myself of those characters again especially at these moments of the story. Moments, which make me so happy because I can finally see the brilliant colors of the butterfly wings that are emanating from so called cocooned caterpillar. And finally, it may be just smiles for Khushi but it is all heart filling laughs for me 😃.

Edited by bhavali4RR - 10 years ago

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

Unres..

Wonderful update as always deepthi. Finally they hugged and it was so sweet. The hug showed his concern, desperation and affection for Khushi. Arnav acted so cute side hugging payal to make it even😉. I am liking this Dr.handsome R more and more by each update. The reply he gave to Anjali for the number of years she is married was just great👏. He is keeping an eye on that jerk. They are legally seperated. That feels so good to hear.😃

Coming back to Lavanya, even with all these years of friendship she didnt understand the inner turmoil of Khushi. But at one point i would say it is quite natural to think like lavanya, as she didnt want to hurt her friend, but sometimes it turns out to hurt them. Khushi is really hurt on hearing Lavanya. She is already on the difficult phase of life and in these situations anything we hear will hurt us and worse when it comes from friends and family.

That question 'why did you hug me' even startled me. There are so many faces to this khushi. She is a package of everything, innocent, shy, emotional, bold..She too wants only him to examine her and now her family wants to change to a female doctor. I dont know what is going to happen in future. Will wait for the story to unfold.

Friendship - What a beautiful start to their relationship. Like he mentioned she has already taken the first step.

Wanted to mention everything i read, so mixed up all.😆 You bring all the emotions wherever and whenever required of all characters and mix it up with sense of humour in your own way which is awesome.👏. If anyone finds out any new word for this work please let me know. Always short of words when mentioning how good you write😊

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