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The first few lines threw me into a fix and was trying to see if I missed any updates in the middle 😊. I am glad that Lavvu's joy bundles got enhanced. It was interesting conversation and your points were spot on about Lavanya's valid hesitancy and Khushi's indifference to the constant banter she is hearing.
It was just breeze after that for the rest of the chapter. Starting from the guys teasing Anjali, to Arnav's kid like excitement, Khushis in the face innocence, it was just a mesmerizing read.
Maybe it's the phase of the story or maybe it's your brilliance at work, but its very hard to miss the playfulness of this chapter. It has to be your brilliance that in a matter of a few chapters we moved from a gloom and grief story to a happy and charming story and that too with us noticing the transition. This is writing at its best!!!
The discussion of the three doctor friends made it so clear that they are there for each other for every situation. Anjali's cautious tone, Arjun's reassuring support and Arnav's clarity of thought. All the emotions and final assurances of true good friends were exemplified in their small talk.
The hugging scene was so endearing, such a great ice breaker. The contrasts of feelings for Arnav/Khushi/Payal from those hug(s) could not have been put any better. The best one liner for me from all that "
He is too dangerous for any woman!" 😉.
And the innocence and sincerity of Khushi. What a simple question and her persistence of "
why did you hug me"? It just shows us the purity of her nature and thoughts and makes me cringe thinking that this is the same person, who some people turned into a boy making machine, for their own selfishness.
I will try not to remind myself of those characters again especially at these moments of the story. Moments, which make me so happy because I can finally see the brilliant colors of the butterfly wings that are emanating from so called cocooned caterpillar. And finally, it may be just smiles for Khushi but it is all heart filling laughs for me 😃.
Edited by bhavali4RR - 11 years ago
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