Something Wonderful - Ishra TS [Part 2 - Page 6] - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A day late but I still made it to the party.😳


Love this, If you've glanced at my posts you must know how much I am intrigued by the Subbu factor and ISHRA psychology.


And you ahev done an admitrable job of examining one of the most crucial aspects of this very well. Love the internal monologues, the hesistancy of the ouch, the second guessing, and the assurances.


Raman's retort to Toshi are the stuff of my dreams, a little OTT but just what the moment called for.


And the confession... beautifully done.


I love this, please tell me you are aready working on anothr one... and that You'll PM me when next you do.😆


PS: Guess what I thought of when I read Ishu's words that Raman is 'perfect' for her..😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Khsuhi_shankar - It's people's first opinions that Iam interested in...& Iam open for criticism...so thank you for your feedback... No issues at all...
Ishita was affected in the second part too...the night when they were sleeping...her hesitancy to talk to Raman throughout...I thought I conveyed that...but may be it didn't reach you...next time will try to be more careful...

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- Hey Anu...Thank you...🤗
Ofcourse , Incidentally 'Perfect' & 'Paradise' made to the final list of the titles for this story...both are my fav ... When it comes to naming my stories, I don't think I just go to my book list and pick up one from there...😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
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The story was just wooow ...Wonderful story ...brilliantly written ..loved it to the core ...the words raman said to his mother ..very emotional😭 well done👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww it was a wonderful, amazing part
loved it😃
beautiful TS👏
superb dear⭐️

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