Hamaari Prem Kahaaani......#6 Season 1 (complete)

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chiki143

@chiki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Wah wa... geet is too gud in teasing maan... ummmah... and maan is sooo sweet. He has come for geet... how long can geet hold against maan...she will melt...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

nice part

mrs.gharewal..she filled wrong stuffs in all girls mind

n the unknown womens entry added ghee to the situation

geet asked the babies also to support her n they did

poor maan..shocked to know geet left to mayka

anie showed them what they did

all boys in trouble

specially maan..

how he is going to manofy his angels..

awesome part

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Nice teaser dear update soon

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Part 70

KHURANA MANSION [Maan's POV] Dejected and lost I entered our room ... Our room which till yesterday held presence n warmth of my angels now felt so empty and unfamiliar. In my madness to settle all matters as soon as possible I never realized what I was putting on stake! Annie was right I had been taking Geet for granted assuming she would understand. Even yesterday I left abruptly not even bothering to meet Geet for a few moments nor wishing NT ... How could I be so careless!! I dialled Geet's number only to hear some sad song being played as a caller tune. [YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tHnYzexLrv4[/YOUTUBE]

Dailymotion link I know she has purposely changed the tune to mock me! I called repeatedly but she wouldn't pick up and that god damn song kept echoing in my ears! I threw my phone on the bed and slumped down regretting my indifferent behavior when something caught my attention. I picked up the object and was appalled at the information I got my hands on! I started pacing in the room restlessly. "Yeh ladki pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti hain ... Dimaag ulta hi chalta hain iska ... kuch din ... sirf kuch din mera dhyaan uss par se hatt gaya aur yeh sab ..." I was alarmed by her notions. She wasn't picking my calls nor was she replying to my messages and had warned everybody at Handa House that if they force her to compromise she would instantly leave from there. She was hell bent on making me suffer! Not giving up I tried again to get through her but ... "Aaah!! ... yeh gaana! Sabse pehle main isse change karunga mera sar ghoom ne laga hain isse sun sun kar!" My nth call was rejected ... again! "Maan yahan sar patak ne se kuch nahi hoga... kuch toh karna hoga!" Determining I walked up to my wardrobe and noticed piles of clothes were thrown into the laundry bag. Morning I was in a rush so didn't quite realize but now seeing this mess I called out for Nakul. I blasted him for their inefficiency when Bela (Nakul's wife) too walked in and slowly notified me that these clothes weren't for laundry. Yesterday Geet had dumped them here and told her to throw them all away. Sensing her temperament then Bela had obediently heard her out but had thought of gathering all the clothes and move them to the store room for time being. As it was quite late last night and even Geet seemed tired Bela had thought to clear up the mess today. I moved to the heap and picked up the clothes, checking them out ... They were all her favourite clothes but then why had she discarded them? Like reading my mind Bela enlightened me that they didn't fit her anymore and she was annoyed, upset and in a very vulnerable state of in yesterday. Flustered with this piece of information and realizing the amount of emotional turmoil Geet was facing currently I felt like kicking myself! I apologized for mindlessly shouting at them while they gaped at me incredulously. It was rare for Maan Singh Khurana to apologize but I had to admit today I was at fault and in my frustration I was blasting out on others. Before both requested to bring Geet back home. I nodded in affirmation. Still holding a bunch of clothes in my hands as I bent to put them aside when I felt something hard amidst the soft fabric scrutinizing through I was in for another surprize! A smile graced my lips as now I knew what exactly I needed to do ... But before that I had to make amends ... that too fast!! I dialled a few numbers and made the necessary arrangements. "Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana taiyaar ho jao tumhare liye ek surprise hain!" I smirked as I chalked out my plan! [Geet's POV] I groggily opened my eyes to notice faint lighting in my room, not being able to bear the lights and still wanting to sleep more I closed my eyes again. A strange feeling of fatigue enveloped me something like one has travellled a long distance. I scoffed at my weird imagination well aware of the fact that I was at my Maa-Papa's home.

Just few hours back Maa had coaxed me to gulp down a mug full of milk inspite of knowing how much I hated drinking milk plus it makes me drowsy n I doze off but she wouldn't give up!
Only Maan was responsible for my plight, his behaviour had forced me to come here otherwise I would be at our home calling the shots there! Though Dadimaa n Mom were hell bent on making me eat healthy food yet once in a while they would give up n let me have it my way but my Maa was a tough nut to crack and would not relent to any of my shenanigans! She really seemed adamant that I gulp down the warm milk for a moment a doubt crossed my mind but then I didn't ponder much thinking maybe she is extra cautious about my n babies health as this is the first time I've come here to stay after conceiving! But I was so right!! She was hell bent on making me have the milk so that they could help their extra smart son-in-law in his plan! I snuggled more into the cover but could sense Maan around. His strong scent was cocooning me I could feel the warmth!I mentally smacked myself to be dreaming of him after all that he has put me through in the past few days ... But wait I wasn't dreaming!

I jolted out of my sleep when his stubble grazed my stomach and babies inside immediately started reacting to his touch. He was actually here!
"MAAN..." I screamed. But guess his presence wasn't the only shock I was to brace ... One look around I felt I would swoon in astonishment!
I was left dumbstruck as realization dawned in that ... He hadn't come home ... He had without a hitch brought me here to ... Our Ashiana!!
We were in our main hall! ... I closed my eyes breathing slowly taking a couple of moments to calm down my erratic heart beats. Gathering myself my gaze settled on his face that flaunted a winning smirk as he boasted proudly.

"SURPRISE... Welcome to Our Ashiana Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana!" This man was unbelievable! I kept gaping at him ... my mouth agape! "You're just too much!!" I bit out.
"No Meeshti ... I'm only your Maan!" He countered
"Kaisa laga mera surprise? ... Haina na ek dum out of the world!"
"Aap ko sharam nahi aati apni pregnant biwi ko iss tarah se pareshan karte hue ... Aap ki himmat kaise hue mujhe aise kidnap kar ke yahan le aane ki?"

"Kidnap!! ... Na na Meeshti main toh apne saas-sasur ka aashirwaad le kar tumhe yahan laya hoon!" He innocently notified thats when I realized all were involved in this plan. "Mujhe abhi ke abhi wapas jaana hain!" Crossing my arms over my chest I declared. "Pata hain Meeshti jab tum aise pout karti ho na tab tum bahot yummy lagti ho ... Mera mann karta hain tumhe kha jaon!" I scowled and he burst out laughing. Not wanting to give him any more chance to enjoy on my plight, keeping a serious face I spoke out. "MAAN... Aap ko pata hain jab aap aise haste hain toh bilkul das sarwale raavan lagte hain ... Aur mujhe bahot darr lagta hain!" "GEET..." Colour drained off his face as he sneered and now it was my chance to burst out laughing. My laughter died down as he towered over me dangerously trapping me between his hands which rested on the side of the couch. Not finding any other way to escape I rested my hands on my tummy like shielding it and spoke out meekly. "Maan... babies darr jaayenge" Instant was his reaction as he withdrew and I sighed in relief. "Maan mujhe abhi wapas jaana hain ... samjhe aap" I assrted sternly. "Sorry Meeshti ...par yeh toh nahi ho sakta ... Woh kya hain na meri biwi ne mujh par ilzaam lagaya hain ke main usse ignore karta hoon ... taken for granted leta hoon ... Bilkul time nahi deta usse ..." "Issiliye maine yeh exclusive holiday plan kiya hain ... Jahan sirf hum aur hamaare babies ek saath time spend karenge!" He divulged his plan. "Yeh kya baat hui Maan ek toh aap galti karte ho ... phir usse maante bhi nahi ... aur ab aap mujhe yahan aise hi le aaye ... Hum yahan kaise rahenge ... mere toh kapde bhi nahi hain yahan ..." I burst out on him.
"Geet tum kyun pareshan ho rahi ho ... Hamaare zaroorat ki saari cheezein already yahan hain!" He tried to distract me but ...
"Maan aap ko samajh nahi aa raha ke ... aap jaan kar mera mazaak uda rahe! ... Aaap ko dikhta nahi hain ke main kitni badsurat (ugly) aur moti (fat) ho gayi hoon! ... Pehle ke koi bhi kapde ab mujhe fit nahi hote! ... Main yahan nahi rehna chahti mujhe abhi wapas jaana hain ... Bas!!" I lashed out on him at once getting up from the couch and I rushed to the washroom. Sliding down against the door I cried my heart out! ... Nobody understood what I was going through!
"Geet ... jaan please darwaaza kholo ... dekho main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta tha ... maine toh yeh sab tumhe cheer up karne ke liye kiya tha ... sacchi!!" "Go away ... mujhe aap se koi baat nahi karni..." "Jaan please bahar aa jao ... tumhara aise rona babies ke liye accha nahi hain" "Haan ... aap ko sirf babies se pyaar hain meri koi parwaah nahi aap ko" "Kaise samjhaon main tumhe aisa nahi hain ... Geet tumhe hamaare pyaar ki kasam ... jaan please bahar aa jao ... ek baar meri baat sun lo phir tum jo kahogi main wohi karunga ... I promise!" His earnest plead prompted me to open the door. I could see him sigh in relief! He held my hand and walked towards the mirror. Looking towards our reflection he spoke. "Geet sach sach batao ke tumhaare liye zyaada maayne kya rakhta hain? ... Tumhara weight ya hamaare baccho ki health? Tum moti nahi ho rahi ho Geet ... Hamaare babies healthy aur bade ho rahe hain! ... Ab batao kya tumhe zyaada khushi dega?" "Meri nazar se dekhogi toh tumhe ehsaas hoga ke iss roop mein tum kitni khoobsurat lagti ho!" He affirmed proudly. "Geet tum hamaare rishtey ko unn cheap, downmarket magazines ke survey's se comapare kar rahi thi ... Hamaara rishta inn baaton se bahot upar hain! ... Boore se boore haalat bhi hamaare ristey ko tod nahi paaye ... aur ab toh hamaara rishtey ko hamaare babies ne aur bhi mazboot kar diya hain!" Turning me around cupping my face with his palms he added. "Aap mujhe ignore kar rahe the toh main kya karti?" I complained. "Geet ... main maanta hoon ke galti meri bhi hain ke main tumhe zyaada waqt nahi de paaya lekin woh sirf issliye kyunki main tumhaari delivery se pehle apna backlog clear karna chahta tha ... taake delivery ke waqt se main har pal tum logon ke saath reh saku ... Koi apni zindagi ko kaise ignore kar sakta hain Geet!" He ruefully confessed! "Main kitni boori hoon! ... Main sab galat sochti thi ... sab galat karti hoon ... Babies ko bhi kitna bura laga hoga yeh sab sun kar ... Ab woh bhi mujhse nafrat karenge ke main sirf apne baare mein sochti thi !" I sobbed feeling miserable.
"Geet agar babies tumse naaraaz hote toh woh tumhara saath kyun dete!" He consoled me hugging me. Remembering the Drs words I broke the hug and questioned him.
"Lekin phir bhi aap mujhe avoid kar rahe the ... ab aap mujhse pehle ki tarah pyaar nahi karte ... Ab main aap ke liye sirf babies ki mummy hoon ... You don't long for me anymore!"
"Geet sirf main hi jaanta hoon ke main itne waqt kaise tumse door reh paaya! Dr ne jab mujhe permission di intimacy ki tab I was on top of the world! I had thought to make our union memorable but by the time we reached you were so exhausted that I couldn't even dream of tiring you anymore. Then it continued, babies constant movements made it difficult for you to get a sound sleep and most of the time when I was back you were already asleep then How could I initiate any intimacy?" He honestly divulged his reasons. Tears rolled down my eyes but he kissed them away! Drashti Dhami & Gurmeet Choudhary

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Edited by heytal - 11 years ago

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O73kWd_tH5I[/YOUTUBE]

Gurmeet Chaudary as Maan and Drashti Dhami as Geet

Lifting me up he walked towards the guest room settling me near the dresser he started undressing me. I froze at his sudden act but he had something planned for me. He moved away for a few moments and was back with a parcel. Unwrapping the cover he removed a dull antique gold net saree with cut-work border and a dark antique gold brocade sleeveless blouse.
Tu hai ab jo baahon mein, Qarar haiRab Ka ShukranaSaanson mein hai nasha, Khumar haiRab Ka ShukranaTu hi ab mera deen hai, imaan haiRab Ka ShukranaMera kalma hai tu, Azaan haiRab Ka ShukranaRab Ka... ...Shukrana
I started getting nervous and restless as wearing this sheer material saree I will look more fat plus what if the blouse doesn't fit me. Like sensing my turmoil he blinked his eyes assuring me. He slowly removed my kurti and slipped in the blouse, it was stretch satin material so it comfortably fitted me. I gleefully looked at him but his eyes darkened in passion heated up my skin. He purposely let his hands linger over my torso pretending to adjust the fit but was teasing my senses.
Tu mila toh sab milaAb kisi se kya gilaTujhme simtu, aa main bikhruTeri baahon mein...Tu mila toh sab milaAb kisi se kya gila...Tujhme simtu, aa main bikhruTeri baahon mein fanaa ho jaaun main I bit my lips to stop a moan as he pulled the strings of my salwar, grazing his fingers over my curves then circling around my navel. He bent down pulling up the skirt and tying up the strings. He squatted leaning in and kissed my belly where our angels were resting giving us the much needed privacy! Slowly he started wrapping the saree around me his head rested against my valley and he nuzzled my midriff while tucking in the pleats. His touches set me on fire!

I grabbed his head pulling him up and turned around feeling nervous to see my reflection in the mirror. But he held the end of my pallu halted my steps. I started hyperventilating in anxiety but he stood behind me and settled my pallu on my shoulder, lifting my chin with his finger he made me look in the mirror, whispering in my ears.
"Meri aankhone se dekho Geet ke tum kitni khoobsurat ho My Yummy Mummy!!"
Burying his head in my tresses leaving feathery kisses everywhere. He lifted me again n this time we entered our bedroom. Tu hi ab duniya meri, Jahaan haiRab Ka ShukranaKhabon ki khayalon ki udaan haiRab Ka ShukranaTu hi ab mera deen hai, imaan haiRab Ka ShukranaMera kalma hai tu, Azaan haiRab Ka Shukrana

I was astonished to see it all decorated with flowers and candles. My eyes brimmed with joy and guilt. He settled me on my feet and I moved around grazing my hands over the flowers. When I trembled feeling a delicate sensation. Maan was caressing my skin with a flower. This delicate touch igniting a blaze within me. He moved close to me plastering his body to mine making me aware of his want! Sab se ho jaaun pare jo ishara tu kareAbb toh rehna hai tujhi meinGumshuda hoon mainSab se ho jaaun pare jo ishara tu kareAbb toh rehna hai tujhi meinGumshuda hoon mainHo teri baahon mein...

I gasped at the contact! I leaned in to close the distance between our lips but he rested the flower on my lips teasing me further on. His warm breath on my lips was awakening something deep within. With my pregnancy hormones kicking in I was loosing myself. A tingling sensation below drugging me. When he placed my hand on his heart silently voicing out his love I felt boneless! Jazbo ka toh naya bayaan haiRab Ka ShukranaNaya rutba nayi shaan haiRab Ka Shukrana

Not able to take this torture anymore I just rested myself on him. My back plastered to his chest. He moved my hair to a side, discarding my pallu he started placing wet kisses on my bare back n shoulder. Finally even his control broke and he captured my lips pulling out my saree completely lifting me up in his arms and placed me gently on the bed . Laying just beside me and in few moments our clothes were thrown away, he continued worshipping my body with his hands n mouth. Tu hi ab mera deen hai, imaan haiRab Ka ShukranaMera kalma hai tu, Azaan hai tuRab Ka Shukrana

Kissing, nipping, sucking, licking every expanse of my skin. I lay there wet in his love when his mouth was again glued to mine. I was on fire and dug my nails in him making him aware of my state and not disappointing me he supported himself on his arms and very carefully slipped in me making sure that his body doesn't press my stomach. He was tender and very careful yet pleasuring, his eyes fixed on me like vouching my expressions incase I'm in pain but I was lost in another world ... the world of his love ... his passion! Rab Ka...Rab Ka...Rab Ka...Shukrana We held each other as the waves of pleasure ... of ecstacy hit us together! I whispered in his ears. "Maan ... I love you!" He fell beside me burying his head in my neck panting. "Geet ... I love you lots!" He murmurred in my neck kissing me there. I turned a little hugging him close to me and kissed him on his nose while his hand automatically encircled my belly after he covered both our bare bodies with the quilt. He had unknowingly fulfilled one of my most dear wish!!!

A/N : I'm really terrible at writing these scenes n I really don't know how this part has come out Please overlook the errors! 🤢
But here is an out n out Maaneet part for u all and specially for Tanvi Nangia finally her katti will end ... I guess 😳

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Edited by heytal - 11 years ago

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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

lovely update😊
lovely maaneet moment
waiting for next update

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

totally loved the surprise!! Maan is such a cutie!

it was superb heytu :)

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

awsemm update maan manofied geet and there romance fab

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

So finally Maan singh khurana made up with his wife n their babies... He made Geet understand how much she is important in his life.. n thier relation is beyond paper assumptions.. so true.. Love this part.. indeed b4 brij storm knock on their door... this was so nice part.. :)