My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03

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angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi
plez dear, i dont want ur story like "CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE"

Salman Khan - Raghav
Preity Zinta - Kalpi
Rani Mukherji - Pakhi...

Please please please please please... CCC with a twist... Pretty please.

Edited by angelpureness - 11 years ago

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Anjinie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

just curious what happened to Raghav that he married Paakhi, and to top it all she had miscarriage, was it Raghav's in the firsy place, I find it quite hard to digest Paakhi and Raghav together, and how did Raghav come love Kalpi, and where is kamala

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angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: chahat4u
😭Fuzz...did Pakhi have to be a Singhania; and Raghav's wife? 😭 I mean any other fictional character also would have done.n he calls her hon, when he loves Kalpi! Double standards and empty words.Though the story idea is different.

Lol next I shall make Maya his wife...😆

He has affection and love for her... It is just not intense or that of a lover.

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sweet1308

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Please please please please please... CCC with a twist... Pretty please.

Plz I also don't want this plz angel if u want then choose another lady for surrogacy not not my kalpi

Sry if I hurt u but plz

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angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Anjinie
just curious what happened to Raghav that he married Paakhi, and to top it all she had miscarriage, was it Raghav's in the firsy place, I find it quite hard to digest Paakhi and Raghav together, and how did Raghav come love Kalpi, and where is kamala

Ragav and Pakhi's marriage is an arranged marriage. Kalpi has grown up around him and I guess he took her for granted and did not realise that he feelings for her were deep. He assumed that whatever affection he felt for Kalpi was because of his affection for Kamla maa.

In chapter one Kamla maa was sleeping and in chapter two Kalpi and Kamla were not at the dinning area...😆

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angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Plz I also don't want this plz angel if u want then choose another lady for surrogacy not not my kalpi
Sry if I hurt u but plz

Please it is the only way to create Ragna moments and make Pakhi realise that Ragav is in love with Kalpi. Please.

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sweet1308

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Please it is the only way to create Ragna moments and make Pakhi realise that Ragav is in love with Kalpi. Please.

But u promise kalpi would not be left alone

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: angelpureness

He love Pakhi... Just that he now realises that it is not passionate love. He did not realise the depth for his feelings for Kalpi until a year ago.

Pls don't mind dear but i m loosing interest in this story after reading ur replies to various readers.😭

pls do something so that i can have make my interest in the story stand still. Don't wanna loose my interest.😭

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angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

So you guys have realised that it is heading for surrogacy... Ooh did I hear groaning...😆

I don't know know how successful I shall be... But I want to show a journey of a woman who has it all... Then goes through insecurities... And loses everything... And then rebuilds her life...

I want to show another journey... Of a woman... Who makes an ultimate sacrifice for the happiness for the one she loves... Realises she has been played... How she fills the void she creates in her life and moves on.

I want to show a journey of a man... Who watches the woman he loves walk away from his life... Who becomes her guardian angel as patiently waits for her to come back... To find him worthy of her... Assisting her in the background to achieve her aspirations.

There might be small changes... I just hope I am able to do justice to this vision that I have. I apologise in advance should the story not turn out well.

Oh bless I am nervous now...

Chapter 3

Leaning back on his seat, Ragav sips his wine, watching his best friends Sammy and Maya banter across the dining table. Chuckling to himself he accepts that love is an emotion that one has no control or say over. Glancing over to his wife, he gulps down the remainder of his drink wishing that he would have realised this before marrying Pakhi.

Pakhi and Maya head for the kitchen, leaving the boys watching football. Once the kitchen is spik and span, Maya says, "now tell me what is bothering you." Surprised for having been caught out, Pakhi says, "nothing is bothering me." Maya raises an eyebrow in gesture. Pakhi gives a weak smile and says, "I feel like I am losing Ragav." Surprised, Maya asks, "why do you think that?"

"I don't know. It is just a feeling I have. It is just..." Pakhi says. Wiping the tear that escapes her eyes, she continues, "I feel like an incomplete woman. Not being able to be a mother is tearing me inside."

Maya looks on sadly, watching Pakhi pace in front of her. "Once upon a time life was perfect... Perfect husband... Perfect marriage... And now... An imperfect wife... Once I felt like a desired woman... Surrounded by envy... Today I am a shell of a woman... An incomplete woman," Pakhi yells.

"Maya, Ragav's heart is no longer in this relationship," Pakhi whispers softly. Unable to resist, Maya says, "why do you say that?"

"I can count the number of times we have had sex this past year in one hand," Pakhi whispers, "he no longer finds me attractive... Desirable. In fact we spend very little time together... He is always working."

Maya smiles and says comfortingly, "it must be work pressure. He probably has taken on more than he can chew." Shaking her head, Pakhi says sadly, "I know him. The only reason he has taken up so much... Is to be away from me. I am going to lose him... If I have not already lost him." Taking a deep sigh, she asks, "how do I bring him back?"

"Have you considered surrogacy or adoption?" Maya asks. Shaking her head, Pakhi says, "no. Ragav's mum will never agree." "Have you asked her or are you assuming to know her mind," Maya states.

Edited by angelpureness - 11 years ago

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angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Pls don't mind dear but i m loosing interest in this story after reading ur replies to various readers.😭
pls do something so that i can have make my interest in the story stand still. Don't wanna loose my interest.😭

Oh bless... Now I am stressed for taking on such a concept... It is about Ragna... With little bits of Pakhi here and there.