My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Wow!! Now I see where you're going with this:))
The impression I got from paaki's character is that she's not a bad wife but is in pain because she can't have children because of her miscarriage!! Hmmm, will she allow her husband to father their child with Kalpi?!:)) it's a bit to early for me to be saying this but I couldn't resist:)) this is awesome

A positive comment... Yay... Have been stressed...

There will be a twist in wht you couldn't resist to mention...😉

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darkloveriam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: angelpureness

I will take it into consideration... The Kalpi I have visioned... I don't see her suffering. In fact she is a very strong and optimistic person.

This love story is going to be different... I want to explore a story where something that should have not happened happens...

i trust u

u do justice with this story also

but just don't want kalpi at loosing end

as i'm pissed with the sacrifises for love given by her

that love which didn't bother to think about her once

Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: ...neha
i trust u
u do justice with this story also
but just don't want kalpi at loosing end
as i'm pissed with the sacrifises for love given by her
that love which didn't bother to think about her once

She has not sacrificed as yet.

Today Ragav is 29 and Kalpi 21

Four years ago Ragav was 25 and Kalpi 17. So she was a teenager when Ragav married. Kalpi had a teenage crush on him, but he never knew. He always assumed what he felt for her was because of Kamla maa.

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Rupalpanchotiya
what can't understand...

What part can't you understand.

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premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

After reading your updates + your reply to comments , I have taken a liking to the concept of your story ! Though its heart breaking to see Kalpi is always a 'victim' of circumstances. Waiting for your updates.

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: premap
After reading your updates + your reply to comments , I have taken a liking to the concept of your story ! Though its heart breaking to see Kalpi is always a 'victim' of circumstances. Waiting for your updates.

Thank you. I just hope I am able to do justice to the concept. I don't want to treat the issue lightly because it is a real issue that people face.

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ssna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Ragav and Pakhi married... It was an arrange marriage. He was happy, content and loved his wife.
Then a year ago, Kalpi had an accident. She nearly died. It was then that he realised that he has always loved kalpi.that some how the woman ruling his heart is not Pakhi but Kalpi.

This past year he has been battling with his feelings for Kalpi and his integrity over his commitments and responsibilities. Because with all these emotions, he also has a wife who is unable to become a mother. How does he leave her.

Ragav does not know that Kalpi has feeling for him too. It is a little bit of a delicate situation.

Do u want 2 show dat pakhi is mahan by d story.

is it like rag will love kalpi n kalpi will accept it she will have his child for his happiness n den pakhi will understand der deep love n all d way round as a kind hearted person she will give his suhag 2 kalpi n become mahan .

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Nikita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

I have read all your FF's and love all of them..all are so diff...this one too seems very interesting...please update soon and please update others too

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Guys please don't apologise nor hesitate to ask what you don't understand... Because I am trying to create some suspense in the story... I am probably not giving out too much information at a go... I sort of want it to trickle down slowly... Through memories and situations. I understand the characters and their emotional state in my mind and it could be that I am not reflecting it in my writing. Please ask away and I will reply and give you answers to what I am thinking towards the characters and the plot.

I apologise for not having clarity in the previous chapters.

Chapter 4

Ragav smiles as he watches his three favourite women Molly coddle Pakhi, each crying away as they wipe the others tears. Shaking his head at the irony, he silently walks into the Kitchener have a drink of water.

Turning around he sees Kalpi by the entrance, watching him... Silently asking him if he okay. Smiling into her worried eyes, he says, "I am fine." She asks worriedly, "you won't leave her just because..." Leaving the sentence unfinished. He shakes his head, surprised that he felt no anger over her question. Relief pouring in, she says, "I am glad. For I could never admire someone who cannot stay true to their commitments." Smiling he says teasingly, "maybe it is because I know you will stop admiring me," winks and leaves.

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Pakhi nervously waits for Ragav, pacing across the bedroom. Hearing the door shut, she turns towards the entrance. Seeing ragav, she blurts out her fears, "have you stopped loving me? Are you going to leave me?" Frowning, Ragav steps into the room, stops in front of Pakhi, asking, "would you leave me if I were the one with the medical disadvantage?" "No. Never," Pakhi replies, continues, "I want us to consider surrogacy." Ragav nods and says, "why not. Let us look into it."

Watching him take his wallet and keys from the dresser, Pakhi asks, "where are you going?" Ragav answers as he heads out, "office. I have a conference call to attend to in half an hour." he stops at the entrance, turns, looks at her softly and says, "don't wait up."

Ragav drives towards the office, guilt eating him, still reeling from the impact of seeing the vulnerability in Pakhi's eyes when she asked him if he still loved her... If he would leave her.

He parks the car at the office, cursing himself for his neglect... For losing himself in a fantasy. His heart and mind battling it out.

Heart: you love Kalpi.

Mind: you are married. Your love should be reserved for your wife.

Heart: one does not choose who to love. It just happens.

Mind: have you done anything to fall back in love with your wife.

Heart: no

Mind: does Kalpi love you? Does she want to marry you?

Heart: she loves me because Kamla maa loves me.

Mind: why waste your time on dreams that will not realise?

Heart: I love her

Mind: yes you do. But it is too late.

Slamming his hand on the steering wheels, Ragav says angrily, "very late. Damn! God why did I have to fall in love with her after my marriage!"

Staring bleakly ahead, Ragav asks himself, "what would Kalpi want you to do?" He replies, "she would want me to keep Pakhi happy. She would be alarmed if she ever found out that I love her and not Pakhi. She will never accept it. I will lose her friendship." He panics, thinking, "I can never lose her."

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago