'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zoya_09

M luvin it even more...don't stop, plz keep updatin' thanks !!!

p.s. U can call her Chudail or Sara or even Psycho, since u hate that name 😆

😆😆😆Thanq...

i ll continue...i ll update next part tmrw
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update as always and the conv btwn nandini and chudail was so funny lool hhh loved it
continue soon
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MaNan' Fear --Part 10

Recap:

Chudail calls Nandini n tells her that Manik is hurt.

Nandini pleads Abhi to take her to Manik.

Manik:Ye sab jo bhi horaha hai...these attacks on u ...woh sab that psycho is doing...that Chudail...

Nandini gets a shock...:What...

Manik:Yes...Cabir spotted her talking to someone abt this yesterdays attack...

Nandini feels bad:But she was very good towards me...

Manik :Sshhh...dont think too much...i ll handle this

Nandini:But Manik...

Manik holds her hands :I said na...I ll handle this...u don't take stress...n I promise I ll not b impulsive this time...

Nandini:But Manik u have to be carefull

Manik:I will...but u ll have to stand by me ...n promise me u will not listen to anyone except me...if anyone calls u or gives u any false information u ll not react...

Nandini nods her head in yes...

Manik:I m sorry for what I did in morning...

Nandini:Its k...i understand u

Manik kisses her on forehead...n eyelock

Some one knocks the door

Nandini:Darwaza khula hai...

Cabir comes in singing:"Andar se koi bahar na aasake ,bahar se koi bahar na jaasake..."

Manik:Shut up Cabir...

Nandini:Hi Cabir...how cum u r here...

Cabir:I came to meet a fighter...

Nandini:What...

Cabir :Haa...u r a fighter na...pehle Fab 5 specially with Manik,Harshad n nows goons also...Waah I m impressed...u r a fighter for me

Nandini gets embarrassed :Cabir...

Manik smiles...:I agree...Arre tu Chudail ka naam bhulgaya

Cabir:Matlab tune batadiya ...

Manik:Haa batana pada warna...madam toh college bhaagne wali thi uske ek call se

Cabir:Haa Abhimanyu was saying...how he handled this "Yoddha" I mean Nandini

Waise main batane aaya tha ki Chachi aayi hai...n she asked us to join for dinner

Manik gets shocked n looks at Nandini:Nahi...bilkul nahi...plz save us

Cabir:Kyu kya hua...

Manik:Tujhe Album cut karna hai na...

Cabir:Haa...n realizes...ohh itna bhayankar hota hai kya...

Manik n Nandini nods head in yes with puppy faces...

Cabir:Then I was right...c here also u r a fighter Nandini...

All starts laughing

Cabir:Manik I ll wait for u aur Nandini will u mind to join us downstairs...if its possible for u to walk

Manik:Tu chal main leke aata hun

Cabir:Manik...godh me uthake matlana haa...warna Chachi ko hospital lejana padega

Nandini goes all shy

Manik:Shut up Cabir...

Cabir leaves the room singing ..."hum bane tum bane ek duje keliye"

Manik helps her n both comes downstairs...

Somehow they escape from Chachi's food...

Abhi,Cabir n Manik leaves from there...

Manik asks Navya to stay with Nandini n call him if any problem is there

Next morning

Fab5 records the songs n hands over to Chudail...Where as Chudail was finding ways to harm Nandini...or to keep her away from Manik

Chudail looks at the CD of the songs n thinks how to separate Nandini n Manik

Chudail:Ab toh Album bhi record hogayi...now Dad has to release this as per the promise...but I cudnt get what I wanted ...that is Manik...

She goes all mad...thinking what to do...

Then in afternoon...

Chudail calls Nandini...

Nandini:Hi...

Chudail:How r u Nans...Y dint u cum yesterday...I wanted to meet u but u dint cum

Nandini:U lied me right

Chudail:That was just a small prank dear...

Nandini:Ohh...k I ll talk to u later have some work

Chudail:K...hope u dint mind Nandini...

Nandini:No...

Chudail:K let me give u a good news...Fab5 recorded their songs n they r free now n they ll soon become famous

Nandini replies slowly:Hmm...after knowing the truth Nandini was not at all interested in talking to talk to her

Chudail:K looking at ur answers ...i think u know me now...then I ll straightly come to the point

Nandini:What...

Chudail:Leave Manik...or else

Nandini:Or else...What

Chudail:...u r verymuch smart my dear friend Nans...

Nandini gets worried:No don't tell to anyone...

Chudail gets her first weapon...where she was finding ways to blackmail n Nandini herself gave the solution to her

Chudail:So u don't want me to disclose ur relationship with Manik right ...

Nandini starts crying...:Yes...plz don't ...or else they ll break

Chudail:K then u know what u have to do right...n cuts the call

Nandini gets all confused n starts crying badly...suddenly Navya comes in from college n gets shocked...

Navya:Nandini ab kya hua...kyu rorahi ho...pair me dard horaha hai kya...doctor ke paas chale...Plz rona band karo...plz...Main abhi Manik ko phone lagati hun...

Navya starts dialing Manik's num n it connects also...

Nandini stops Navya from Calling:Nahi Navya...usse call mat karo main theek hun...

Manik hears that line n Navya disconnects the call...

Navya:Theeke hai batao kya hua...

Nandini: Woh Chudail ka call aaya tha...woh mujhe blackmail kar rahi hai ki sabko batadegi mere aur Manik ke baare me...agar aisa hua toh Fab5 tootjayega Navya...

Navya:Mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha tum kya kerahi ho...

Nandini:Mere saath jo bhi attacks hue woh sab usne hi karwaaye...kal Manik yahi batane aaya tha

Navya gets a shock...:kya...fir toh Tumhe Manik ko batana chahiye Nandini...

Nandini:Nahi Navya...uske paas fab5 ki album recording hai...toh woh kuch bhi karsakti hai...

Navya:Ab kya kare...

After a while Manik barge into Nandini's room...

He hears the convo before Navya cuts the call...

Manik worriedly:Tum theek ho...

Nandini hides her face n cleans her tears ...:Manik tum yaha...

Manik:Haa woh Navya ka call aaya tha...aur maine suna that u said not to call ...

Nandini:Offo Manik...nothing see I m fine...

Navya excuses herself n leaves them alone

Manik:U scared me Nandini...

Nandini:Its just a sprain Manik...i m not dieing ...

Manik shouts furiously:Nandini...don't u dare say that...

Nandini:K k...calm down I m sorry...

Manik hugs her tighly...:Nandini don't u dare say that again

Nandini...utters slowly:Manik I m fine

Nandini decides to stay away from Manik...:Manik I think we should not meet till the album is released ...just to make chudail feel that we r not together...

Manik:What...r u out of ur mind...ab toh album ki recoding bhi hogayi...what she ll do now

Nandini:Haa but...its not released yet...n its first n big launch for Fab5...plz

Manik makes a sad face...but was angry too.

Nandini holds his face n says:Manik please...for my sake...i don't want any of Fab5 to know abt us

Manik looks at her shockingly...:But who ll tell them...n pata chalgaya toh bhi whats the big deal...

Nandini:Manik please...let the album get released ...u know how Mukti reacted on that day when u saved me...

Manik agrees to Nandini...

Precap:

Mr.Khurana decides to launch album

Chudail comes to know from Manik's anger that Nandini has distanced from him.


Part 11 ---will update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
loved it
urghh this chudail really need to do something about her
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm update

loved it
urghh this chudail really need to do something about her
continue soon



Will b out soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome story! please update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: seven_stars

awesome story! please update soon!

Thanq...will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome update...loved it...
.this chudail..hhh😡
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

awsome update...loved it...
.this chudail..hhh😡
pls continue soon...

Thanq
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!!
I wanna kill this chudail 😡😡

Pls update next part soon..


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