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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR
4 hours honey ko aaye.. Pr update abhi baki hai..
Readers sogaye bt... Update abhi baki hai...

Kitni Shidat se Hum Update Paaney ki Koshish Krtey hai..
Shayad isilye Har Qaayinaat Ka Har Zara Humey Jhagaaney ki Saazish kar rahey hai...

If you're sleepy sleep.

Atleast deepthi akka should res do that sair di can res and sleep

Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

If you're sleepy sleep.

Atleast deepthi akka should res do that sair di can res and sleep

oye it was js same Antakshri..
And Maa knows me.. If i want to sleep toh mai sogayi hoti.. Mjhey jaese hi neend aayegi mai sojawongi.. Maa knows my sleeping tym.. So chill balikey.. Abhi tym hai.. Focus

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

oye it was js same Antakshri..
And Maa knows me.. If i want to sleep toh mai sogayi hoti.. Mjhey jaese hi neend aayegi mai sojawongi.. Maa knows my sleeping tym.. So chill balikey.. Abhi tym hai.. Focus

Go, i am driving back home and switch to lappy.

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

This update is full of so many aweee moments for me...deeps its really aweee :),awesome awesome

gayatary wt a beautiful mother not just appearance wise but at heart too...she is sweet enough...soft enough inside out :)...loved the way u have shown her thought process seeing arnav sleeping ...how well she understands his internal emotions by his outer gestures ..thats beauty of ur writing how amazingly u wrote ...by the way loved gayatari's son sleeping style...hehehe...hayeee

how excellent u r with emotions deeps...i guess the line "i hate this feeling mom,it bloody hurts a lot"...i am sure every one must have thought after reading this line...its true yaaar it really hurts that bad...😊...uff yeh dard..

wt an amazing amazing bond u have shown here between arnav and his mom...heard behind every good kid is a strong mom..and i can see the kid is strong enough here to share his pain and feelings openly with his mom...fantastic 😊

awee so arnav having khushi's waist band...he was obsessed by it from day one..how can he let it go now when he knows that the owner of this waistband means world to his heart 😊

ok must appreciate arnav's father here ...its not just the gayatri but abhey too in nurturing arnav into fab human...he suspended arnav ,true sense man of principle and point which shows how good human arnav is ...he understands his father stance...thats brilliant writing deeps😊

ufff deeps how to express in words my pain after reading "deconstruct the imaginary castle once she built"...awee poor girl with such innocent heart and soul..wt must be she going through while breaking that castle of dreams with her own hands ...as u wrote brick by brick...ufff out standing writing👏...she under severe pain...not worst than the stabbing ache in her heart...my my baby kiya likha hay tum ney...wow...poor girl not getting wt r lies wt r truths ...was there really the light or her eyes having constant illusion in those ,now painful enough in her memory those 6 years of marriage...

so she tried many times to reach arnav...loved the convo on he or she doctor...lol...

bar scene all three friends ...time for heart to heart discussion :)...loved their friendship...arjun naughty and seeing that all anjali getting irritating/insecure time will tell :)...he is a flirt ...but acha hay :)...loved loved the way anjali and arjun make arnav speak up his heart ...although not declaring in words love in front but they trio mature and understanding enough to get other person point :)...arnav is in pain here...the flash back ufff how he tried his best to stopped her bleeding ...excellent..

and my heart goes silent on the line i can't keep on doing this to myself...bas jee me gone with the wind ...time stops for me here...:)...BEAUTIFUL👏

MY MY MY deeps standing ovation from myside for writing arnav's emotional "drive" though he "jogging" that excellent...wt a mature writer u r girl...i mean simply fantastic

khushi-happiness thats all the emotions his heart knows before meeting khushi...i mean just checkout how brilliant u were in emotions while writing...simply mind blowing

how beautifully u have shown the different stages...how bit by bit he gave his heart to her :)

her smile ...he has given a little parcel of his heart...awee

she fled away...he felt taking little more of him alone ...awee

he suffered her pain in his bones...gathered her grief in his eyes,treasured the burden of her tears n his fist,where she HELD on to him, TRUST him...snaching finally full of his heart...uff...i think pyaar hona hee tha...LOVE...

HOW BEAUTIFULLY U HAVE BROUGHT ARNAV TO THE POINT WHERE ITS LOVE LOVE AND ONLY LOVE SCREAMING LOUD AND CLEAR...

i am having tears right now...seeing and experiencing the brilliance of ur writing skills..👏

never ever imagined that bed and blood going to bring that much intensity ...wow...tussi great jee...amazing amazing...that whole scene between arnav,blood stain bed sheet,and khushi smell...very very intimate...very private feel attach to it...excellent deeps..

i am impressed the way RGH working...having excellent team of doctors...very professional ambiance...and arnav and his team efficiency ...all the best written...mr and mrs sehgal must be happy couple after meeting and experiencing such intellectual and professionally superb doctor :)

Good to know deshmukh and her helping staff in jail and that also without a bail...well served must say..:)

its great both tried to reach other in some way but both not lucky enough...but wow...arnav ...R JI..hehe

loved to see how excited arnav went after knowing khushi on call...hehe...u know its love...haha...

aweee dear...wt an amazing fun light hearted last scene...😆😆😆...ur sense of humour at its best...LOL...ROFL...😆😆

sure thing khushi is innocence personified...and even more sure thing arnav is going to have tough time handling this innocence ...lol...rofl...

his anger at first and then him softening down listening to her r ji...she lost the number...awee...she only trust him...and his melting totally...hehehe...jet plane...lol...and then the most interesting discussion on pads...hilarious excellent. excellent...imagining blushing arnav ...uff wt a treat to eyes...lol...rofl...u rock deeps...simply fantabulous fantastic update...😊

Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago

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beenish

@beenish248

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

My God this update was one of Awesome update ..Loved Gaytri Man she is so much like My Ami i am really lucky to have my Mom 😃 I am feeling really bad for arnav :/ What the My ASR were suspended from duty :O did i ever mension I love 3 A's Friendship ;) Loved Arshi conversation to the core i can't wanit for their meeting :/ Amazing update di.., Eagerly waiting ..

Edited by beenish248 - 10 years ago

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Sorry for the late unres.

Amala as Gayathri. Superb choice. Now who is going to Abhay??? Nagarjuna????😉

Gayathri really needs a lot of respect from all the women. Which mother would approve if her most eligible bachelor son would fall for a married girl who has had five miscarriages. Even after knowing the entire truth, she is quiet as she cannot see her son suffering more than he is due to her rejection. She respects his love. She is one great woman. 👏

The friendship between the three A's - what can I say, its envy worthy. Latha is indeed correct when she said that "Friends are chosen family." They are really lucky to have each other.

Now Deepthi, its been one month since all this happened right. What happened to Karan and family? Did they get arrested too? Did the family come and blame or fight with Khushi and her parents???

Glad that Deshmukh and her entire team are behind bars now. Good riddance of bad rubbish!!!!

Why is Khushi still bleeding?? I am really worried about her health. Please make her better. I dont want a situation to arise where the doctors will say something really bad about the consequences of the constant abortions.

Coming to Arnav - can someone fall in love with a person so much in such a short interval of time???

Maybe yes, love does happen under unexpected conditions. They way you have described his desperation, his longing for her, his dilemma regarding what she wants was just superb!!!!

It reminded me of the song below:

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hain

kya kahu pyaar mein deewano jaisa haal hain

deewano jaisa haal hain tumhara hi khayal hain

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kzPLjMnXlF4[/YOUTUBE]

And finally Dr. R spoke to Khushi on the phone. I am sure the next two hours would be like hell waiting for her. 😳

I hope Khushi makes it to the hospital soon and let the bonding between their hearts to continue.

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GuruDeep246

@GuruDeep246

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#549

My immediate reaction after seeing the photo Amala in the role of Mrs.Gayatri Singh Raizada was wow! I have to give the credit to you for this awesome choice for this role deepthi..very well deserved, well mannered, beautiful, sophisticated and elegant lady..what a mother goes through when her son is in pain very well written..i love your 3Rs and 3As dear..DR.Abhay Singh Raizada seems very professional in his duty..even though he is his son and director of RGH he suspended Arnav for some days..and i loved the way arnav told to his mother utilizing suspension to the full..and what can i say abt the friendship of 3As..they know everything abt each other..including their personal matters..loved how arjun and anjali in question regarding khushi is concerned..and arnav's entry in his bedroom..o my god..my heart went thud thud after seeing how much arnav involved in khushi. Even he felt smelling the bloodshed bed sheet..and he dint allow his maid to enter in to his bed room..one should get such a lover in the lifetime yaar..i am becomming jealous now..and finally when khushi called to hospital his expression awwwe..and their phone conversations..hilarious..thank you deepthi for this wonderful update..

Edited by GuruDeep246 - 10 years ago

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#550

UNresss

Buhat kuch hai Dil Mai Kehne Ko.. Magar Alfaaz Kaha Se Laawo..

Jo Bayaan kar Sakey Meri Kaefiyat.. Wo Ehsaas Kaha Se Dikhaawo..

For ME i can describe myself in this particular line

" I THINK TOO LITTLE BUT I FEEL TOO MUCH"

Part A was only pain.. Pain of ...? i don't know pain of heart or pain of love..? pain of longingness or pain of sepration..? pain of feeling her pain or pain of not to protecting her... i am thinking may b ek hafta isi mai nikal jaaye.. pain bt kis baat ki..?

but why i am feeling his pain..? why u wrote so damn good due to which ur daughter is suffering...lol.. kasam se now i believed this quote too..

"Life Is Commedy For Those Who think, A tragedy For Those Who Feel"

now i can say i m proud member of Tragedian...

Relationship of Mother And Her Child is Something Which We Can't describe in words nor in feelings.. Mother is the Door of Heaven.. Mother can cross any limit while protecting her baby.. Mother is name of affection.. and seriously i don't need any pic for this charcter coz in Gayatri's every move i only feel u Maa.. and i don't know why..? i olrdy told u about this.. and again i am saying u r not Arnav's mother and nvr think about it in ur future...lol

when i read part A i was lyk why i read.. i commented too it hurts alot.. his evry battle to himself was unbearable for me... and this lyn lil'lah "I hate this feeling Mom. It bloody hurts alot!"

Khuhsi too want to talk to Dr. R G..? naa R Ji.. she is mising his touch... aaw..

she is still bleeding.. health problem toh nhi hogi na.. risk typ..?

Arnav, Arjun and Anjali.. feeling good his two buddies r with him.. he is not alone.. see he is smiling and me too.. JAB TUM AESE MUSKURATEY HO ACHEY LAGTEY HO, DIL MERA TAB GUNGUNATA HAI ACHA LAGTA HAI..lol

part A khtm n wat i do was only Pm Maasi.. maasi bardasht nahi ho raha hai.. part 2 kab aayega.. i m stupid i knw bt kya karu Oh ladies Mai hon Aadat se Majboor

n Yes agree with good bye procedure.. it hurts jb milney ka kuch ata pata na ho..

Maasi was ryt Jitna Part A ne rulaaya.. Part B ne utni hi kushiyaaa de di.. itna hasaayaa.. aur end pe Heartattack b de diyaa update nxt week na milney ka..huh

but aapkaa kaam b zaruri hai.. so aap b kya yaad krogi kis achi wali beti se paala padha hai.lol

Arnav is too much profesional and pata chal gaya jb wo parents[Mr n Mrs Sehgal] ko samjhaa raha tha.. kaash aese Dr.'s sachi mai hotey..

aur then finally...😆😆😆

aagaya agaaya phone call aagaya.. arey see he is behaving lyk teenager..

phone rakhna mat and apni cabin ki aur bhaagnaa.. oye hoy.. koi toh ho ishara.. pyaar ka dard hai meetha meetha pyaara pyaara..

aaw he is angry coz she didn't call..

she is asking him to say sorry to her coz he scold her..

he is proffesional again while describing her about various important things.. lyk pads.. bt one question from mys side to ol who thought it funy including Maasi.. when i read that i felt like someone stabbed my heart.. i cried... it was not any joke..

I AM in Love Maine Naa Jana...

Milengey Milengey Arshi Milengey..

2 weeks baad milengey.. Milengey Milengey...

nahiii..😭😭 kuch karu.😭. humse nahi hogaa itna lambaaa wait..😭

aaap zaalim nahi ho.. bs bsy ho.. kuch kro.. ya toh maha update ka promise kru yaaa early update de dou... Meri MAaa sunlounaaa. update donu mai se ek waaala chunn lou naaa...😆

thankyou for itney saarey hugs k lye... seriously bht zydaa need thi coz i was missing pampering...

tk care of urself.. and remember Mai hon Naaa...

and last i can't said anything coz i don't know how to express my thoughts. may b this lyn wil work from side...👏👏👏

If I Write What I Feel, It's to reduce of Fewer Of Feeling.. What I Am Writing Is Unimpotant, Because Whatever U Wrote In Update Was Important...

Edited by ShahSAIR - 10 years ago