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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEllo everyone! 😊
You guys know that ajabde was maharana pratap's beloved true soulmate yeah? Even history verses this.😳 But sadly , she dies a very untimely death and it is said that it destroyed pratap so much that he wouldn't eat for three days straight and later found it hard to focus on his kingly duties...

Now I swear I don't mean to depress you guys with sad thoughts...but I wrote a small poem for ajabde from pratap's POV after she passes away... And I would love it if you guys would review it!

So here goes...:p

I hold out my hand where yours should be,
But that's been snatched away by destiny,
I am groping in thin air...
Pretending you are still there...

But now,
You are like a star I can't reach,
Like a lost shell on the beach,
Like a dream i can't remember,
Like a wisp of vapour...

When I have you yet I don't,
When I want you yet I won't,
You are so far yet so near,
So distant yet so dear.

For any words that remained unsaid,
For that support which never did fade,
For being not only my desire but my dream come true,
I love you.

And far far way from mundane reality,
Where from worries and strides we are free,
There lies a haven for few...
That's where I will be waiting for you...

How is it guys??

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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely poem..🤗...
I hope cvs will maintain this relation pavitr...hope it will not destroy for mirch masala... vse hi..they are destroying lil bit with no apology from pratap side...

But you poem is awsm..i loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤗 Nice And Lovely poem 👏 I Am Very Impressed With This Poem and an Excelllent Poem Too 👍🏼 😊 😃 .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Depth in your words. Touching. Bravo 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful
superbbb 👏
senti kar diya
but amazing poem⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Heart touching poem..its beautiful :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: menoila

lovely poem..🤗...
I hope cvs will maintain this relation pavitr...hope it will not destroy for mirch masala... vse hi..they are destroying lil bit with no apology from pratap side...

But you poem is awsm..i loved it

Well even if these CVs destroy it...at least we all know the real truth abt them na? 😉 I totally wanted an apology from pratap...ajabde deserves it man! And I loved it when she was the fierce baijilal...these days pratap hardly lets her open her mouth. Anyway...thank u so much! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: salmanfan4

🤗 Nice And Lovely poem 👏 I Am Very Impressed With This Poem and an Excelllent Poem Too 👍🏼 😊 😃 .

thank u soon much! 😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: jk77

Depth in your words. Touching. Bravo 👏


Thank u fr reviewing! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
A beautiful poem. Really touches the heart.

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