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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: tiniaa

Very very very nice. Pl write more than one more part. Make it a FF & continue with the story, pleassseee


I'm so sorry.. I've already written the last/next part so can't continue it.
I don't wanna drag it.. So sorry once again but the last part will be longer than both of the current chapters! :D

Thankyou so much! Glad you liked the TS.. xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: yoga123

Awesome part...thanks for the PM


Thanks alot! xx


Thanks alot! xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

awesome ts update
thanks for pm 😃


Thankyou so much! <3 xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: bluesky10

Read both part together

It was amazing dear
Soon Paaro Will be with rudra
Please can you pm me
Thanks for your pm dear


Thankyou so much! I'm really glad you liked the TS.
I will surely PM you when i update the next chapter.. :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Wow thank you so much dear, I love you 😳
Nice chapter...I cried wit paro ...waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: prabha.abha

Wow thank you so much dear, I love you😳

Nice chapter...I cried wit paro ...waiting



I'm so glad you liked it!
Love you too! x
Will update tomorrow inshallah!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Iwas amazed that you continued the story and for a moment I wondered whether or not to read it.

Just because the first part was so good, and left for my room for the imagination...

But the second part was just as good as the first one and I am glad that I decided to read it, and the fact that you added English translation...thank you for doing it.

But update itself; lovely, brilliant, fabulous, loved Paro's dialogues with Aman. I am glad that Paro spoke with Aman, I liked Aman a lot. I am sure that Aman will rescue her.

And her need to get back to her family; to be with Rudra and Druv was heartbreaking to read.

Now that you continued the story, I look forward to the next part. And I hope you update soon.

Waiting for their reunion...

Amy, I am sorry for late response. I was working and then too tired to read.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazyAmie

yup i m still active



Kamz di we know 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Part 3 (Last)

(Translation in pink)


Paro looked at the mother daughter duo. They both look worried.

"Kya aap maare ko yahaan raat tak rehne desakti ho auntyji?"(Will you let me stay here till the night, auntyji?) Paro asked the elder lady


"Haan kyun nahi.. Aap yahan raho aaram se. Theek hai? Baisa aap mujhe Jyoti kakisa bulasakti ho"(Yes why not.. You can stay here without any problem.. Okay? You can call me Jyoti Kakisa if you want to)


"Ji kakisa" (Yes Kakisa) Paro smiled

"Kya mein aapko didi bulasakti hoon? Aap ka kya naam hai?" (Can i call you didi? (Elder sis) What's your name?) Naina asked Paro with a smile.


"Kyun nahi baisa. Maara naam.. Paro hai" (Why not.. My name.. is Paro)

Paro smiled. She reminded her of Bindi. Her friendly nature was very similar to her beloved friend. Paro's eyes watered as she thought of Bindi. How much she missed her.


"Aap kyun roraho ho Paro didi?" (Why are you crying?)


"Kuch nahi Naina Baisa." ( its Nothing) Paro wiped her tears and smiled her her.


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Aman and the other officers were on the way to Bhilwara. There were more than 6 cars with them.


"Once we reach the place I need 3 cars with me and rest of you has to go and search for Tejawat. Aaj nahi bach paye ga wo.. Am I clear?" (He won't be able to run away from us today) Aman said in a strict tone.

"Yes sir" The officers nodded.


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About 3 hours later they reached the place.

"Purab check the traced location of the call. Kitni door hai yahan se?" (How much distance it is from here?) Aman asked the other Officer

"Sir 10km from here" Purab answered

"Okay good. Is the GPS on?"

"Yes sir"

"Guide me the way"

"Sure Sir"


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It took them about 15 minutes to reach the traced location.

"Sir are you sure Parvati ma'am is here?" Sanjay asked


"What do you mean by that? We need to search every place of Bhilwara if she's not here." Aman sounded angry at the officer's words.



Over these years Aman changed a lot. The death of his second sister was a huge shock for him. Above of all after Rudra left BSD he had most of the responsibilities as he worked under Rudra but today he felt happy, first time he was happy in these years!


His sister was alive, what more did he want?

"I just need one officer with me. Rest of you for me. Purab you come with me" Aman said

"Yes Sir."


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Aman and Purab entered the Dhaba making everyone look at them in worry. Aman asked Purab to keep check on the door and make sure no one enters or exits until they leave. Purab nodded.

"Is dhabay ka maalik kon hai?" (Who is the owner of this dhaba/restaurant ?) Aman asked


"Ji aap ko koyi kaam hai?" (Umm.. Do you want something?) Naina asked nervously. She had no idea what these wardi wale are doing here

"Baat karni hai unse" (I want to talk to him/her) Aman responded



"Ye maare Bapusa ka dhaba hai. Wo to nahi hain is wakt yahaan. Maasa ko bulaun?" ( this is my father's restaurant. He's not here at the moment. Should a call my mother? ) Naina asked.

"Haan bulao unko" (Yes call her here)


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Naina came in the kitchen

"Maasa.. Maasa koyi aaya hai. Unko aapse milna hai" (Maasa someone is here. He wants to meet you) Naina said hurriedly


"Kya hai Naina? Unse bol mein khana banarahi hoon. Thora sabar Karen" (What is it Naina? Tell them to wait i'm cooking the food right now.) Jyoti said

"Nahi Maasa abhi chalo. Koyi wardi wale aadmi aayen hain. Maaray ko to police lagrahi hai" (No Maasa you come with me right now. Some wardi wale are here. I think they are police) Naina said in fear.


Paro immediately stood up from the stool. Wardi wale! Aman Bhaisa! BSD!



"Kya unho ne gehre haray rang ki wardi pehni hai?" (Are they wearing dark green uniform?) Paro asked with hope in her eyes.


"Haan baisa.. Aap unko jaanti.." (Yes.. Do you know...) Before naina could complete her sentence Paro ran outside.

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"Aman Bhaisa!" Paro called him out... Tears weren't stopping today. Seeing her brother infront of her was something she never imagined in these years.


Every night she saw dreams of meeting her family and then it just broke but today it wasn't a dream. This was real! Aman was real, this wasn't a dream..

She was finally going home.


Paro hugged him tight crying for all these lost years. Aman was really close to her. She got a brother she never had, he found his sister again.


Aman and Paro loved each other like real sibling. Their bond was really strong. She was happy, really happy to be with her brother.


"Parvati.. Bus rona nahi hai abb. Tere bhaisa aagaye hain na? Abb kuch nahi hoga" (Paro.. Stop.. No more crying.. Your brother is here. right?) Aman wiped her tears smiling as he finally found his sister. She was right here, she was alive, she was fine and most importantly she was safe from Tejawat.



"Tu theek hai naa Paro? Tujhe chot to nahi lagi hui? Hospital chalna hai?" (Are you okay Paro? Are you hurt? Do you want to do to the hospital?) Aman asked. He himself was really emotional at the moment. This was a miracle, she was here.


"Nahi mein theek hoon.. Maare ko ghar jaana hai. Maare ko sabse milna hai. Maare ko sabki bohot yaad aati hai" (No i'm fine.. I want to go home.. I want to meet everyone.. I miss them so much) Paro cried..

"Chal Paro.. Bus abb or nahi rona.. Ghar chal" (Lets go Paro.. No more crying..) Aman patted on her head making her realize that she's indeed safe.



"Ye Maare bhaisa hain" (He's my brother) Parvati told Jyoti and Naina with a smile.

Paro thanked the mother and daughter for all the help. They both really helped her..


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Paro sat in the car with Aman, she couldn't wait to see her family.. She couldn't wait to meet her Major Saab and Dhruv..

"Dhruv kaisa hai bhaisa?"(How is Dhruv?) Paro asked with tears filled eyes.


"Tujhe bohot yaad karta hai Paro. Har wakt Maithli jeeja se teri baaten karta hai" (He misses you alot Paro.. He keeps talking about you with Maithli jeeja) Aman said with a small smile.


"Manne bhi wo bohot yaad aata hai. Saat saal hogaye, maare ko to pata bhi nahi hai wo kaisa dikhta hai" (I miss him too.. Its been seven years. i don't even know how he looks like) Paro tried to wipe her tears but she felt helpless. They just wouldn't stop!



"Abb rona nahi hai Paro, abb sab theek hojaye ga. Tu abb surakshit hai, apne bhaisa ke saath hai" (No crying Paro.. Everything will be okay now. you're safe with your bhaisa..) Aman desperately tried to calm her down.


The rest of the journey to Udaipur went smoothly. Paro told Aman how she got into that place, Aman told Paro what happened after her accident.


He told her about Maasa and Bapusa which was really heartbreaking for her. He told her that Rudra started his own Private work and he was no longer in BSD.

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It was time.. Paro stood at the door of the haveli ready to ring the bell keeping her hand on her chest trying to calm down her pounding heart.


She was finally home, this was more beautiful than the dream she used to see. Aman smiled at her encouraging her to go ahead.


She rang the doorbell and held her breath. She was feeling hell nervous more than she ever imagined. She had no idea how they will react seeing her standing right in front of them.


She closed her eyes and started praying to her Bholenaath

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"Arre is wakt kon aagaya?"(Oh ho who is where at this time?)Mohini wondered.

"Mein dekhta hoon dadisa" (I'll see dadisa) Dhruv said

"Arre tu kyun jaaraha hai? Mein dekhti hoon naa" (Why are you going? let me see) Mohini said

"Arre aap betho mein dekh ke aata hoon" (No no you sit i'll see who's at the door)

"Acha chal dekh. Mein aati hoon kamre se" (Okay go and see. I'll be back from my room in few minutes)

Dhruv walked to the door


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As soon as Paro felt the door opening she opened her eyes. She felt her tears falling down her eyes as she looked at him. It didn't take her a second to realize who he is.


"Mumma.." Dhruv gasped. He couldn't believe it, his mumma standing in front of him


"Dhruv" Paro cried. She sat on her knees and instantly hugged him.

"Dhruv, mera bacha.. Dhruv" (My baby!) She couldn't, she just couldn't say anything. She felt speechless, honestly she didn't know what to do, she didn't know what to say, she didn't know how to react.


"Mumma.. aap sach mein yahan ho?" (Are you really here? Mumma) Dhruv asked innocently


Paro nodded making his doubts go. He hugged her tight asking her where she was, why wasn't she with him?


Telling her how much he missed her.. He cried with her asking her again and again if she was alright.


"Manne maaf kardo beta, Mumma nahi aasakti thi, Mamma ko thaari bohot yaad aati thi." (Forgive me. Mumma couldn't come.. I missed you alot beta) Paro sobbed and then wiped his and her tears.


"Par ab mumma aagai hai naa? Abb nahi jaaun gi. Pakka" (But Mumma is here naa? I won't go back)

She smiled at him placing kisses all over his face. She missed him so much! She didn't want to break the hug, she wanted to stay like this forever..


"Andar chalo mumma.. Mere saath" (Lets go inside mumma..) Dhruv hugged her again


Paro smiled and picked him up in her arms

"Arre Paro" Aman asked her if she was alright in picking Dhruv up. Paro smiled at him telling him she's perfectly fine.

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"PAPA.." Dhruv shouted as they entered the house.


Paro looked at Dhruv and smiled at his excitement. She made him sit on the sofa and sat beside him. Dhruv stood up and sat on her lap hugging her once again, Paro smiled tightening the hug.


"Kya hua Dhruv? Kya hai, Cheekh kyu..." (What is it dhruv? why are you shouting..) Rudra didn't complete his sentence. He couldn't, he couldn't even believe what he saw.

Paro?


"Paro?" Rudra barely whispered

"Major saab" Paro called him, smiling through her tears.. Seeing him after seven long years was overwhelming.


"Major saab" She stood up with Dhruv by her side and slowly walked towards her Major saab...

"Major saab" Paro kept her hand on in cheek. "Aapki Paro.." (Your Paro) She whispered.


"Paro.. tu.. Paro.." He felt tears running down his face.


"Paro tu sach mein?" (Paro are you really..)


"Haan Major saab" she hugged him tight not knowing what to say.

"Aapki Paro, Mein sach mein" (I'm here.. Your Paro) Paro cried..

"Aapki Paro aapse kabhi alag rehsakti hai?" (Can your Paro ever stay away from you?) She asked

He shook his head making her smile..

"Paro.."

"Kuch matt kahiye Major Saab" (Don't say anything Major Saab) She hugged him tighter..

Dhruv tapped on his mumma's hand.. She looked at him and smiled brightly taking him in her arms..

Her family was complete.. She was finally home.. She was Free..

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I'm so happy! I finally completed one story on time! I updated this real quick tbh..

I tried to get emotions of parud in translation but it doesn't give that affect. I don't know.. The original dialogues are way better..

As the title already says "Paro" OS. This was for Paro not Parud.

Tried to show a brother sister bond in it. :) Aman was a wonderful character. They could use it but sadly they didn't :/ anyways I fulfilled my wish :p


Lastly thankyou so much for such wonderful comments on this TS. This was really random but you guys supported me alot!


So bye bye friends from this TS.

Will be back with another one soon :D

-Amy-



Edited by Preggy - 10 years ago

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