Paro TS: Free - Part 3 - Page 12 Updated *COMPLETED*

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RenuHooda

@Hrithiksmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awsome Tosome update ..
I hope aman save paro
very soon

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Mukti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

ab toh unres bhi kar diya meri vampire. where is part 3?😆

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Fabulous one
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Nitya

@nik1310

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Part 2 Nice...waw...Aman back in action...👍🏼 Waiting for Rudra's reactions...

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Awesome part...thanks for the PM

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Chitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

awesome ts update
thanks for pm 😃

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bluesky10

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Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Read both part together

It was amazing dear

Soon Paaro Will be with rudra

Please can you pm me

Thanks for your pm dear

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-UnknownSoul-

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: believe77
Wow😃, will unres and discuss in detail later.

unres...
like I said before wow, you are fast.😃 This was a heart stopping update. I loved that you set the dialogues in the original format as it would have been as if Paro was saying them. We had that initially , but lost it by the time RR ended. Coming to the update, your precision for detail is amazing for a short story. yes a person would change their phone no. after 7 years but government offices still maintain them. I am glad that she reached Aman and that he was able to trace her.😃 Now where is part 3?😆 wah how demanding I have become.😆 Please do continue.👍🏼

Thankyou so much di!

I can't really imagine Paro talking in english in this story. So kept the original dialogues 😳

I want to show a brother sister bond. 😃

I've written part three. Will update soon! 😆

I'm really glad you love the story! xx

Love you! <3

Edited by Preggy - 10 years ago

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-UnknownSoul-

@-UnknownSoul-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: chavvi16
cool you continued
she ill get to rudra
no matter what
thank god she knew BSD number
now aman can come for her
hope he does
so she can be with her family again

Thankyou.

I had to continue as some of you asked me to continue this 😳

Stay tuned for the next part to know more! xx