Part 1:
-I just wanna give you a standing ovation for the opening of the this part. The description and state of mind of Paro that you provided were amazing!!! I read a book on slavery and the author emoted the same emotions through his writing so very well done Amy!!! 👏
-Also, i love how you created a complete two different versions of after Paro's death, this and A Ray of Hope (you need to update that one!!!).
Part 2:
-So everyone thought she is dead whereas she was "enslaved" by Tejawat for seven years... But how!? How did Tejawat even get to her!? If she was dead, then should've been a funeral and all. Lol I think I'm thinking way too much, but I need to know to grasp the story a bit more. 😛
-Aww love how you accentuated Paro and Aman's bond here. I wish it was more like that in the show too.
Part 3:
-Honestly I just LOVED the bond between Paro and Aman! And thank God I'm not the only one who thinks it wasn't used the way it should've been in the show! I completely agree with you. The show makers could've used him as Paro had lost all her family members after she was under Rudra's protection but oh well... I guess we expect too much from tv shows! 😆 But thank-you for fulfilling my wish too! 🤗
-Awww! Dhruv and Paro! Ughh how I wish all this was true!! Wish Myrah was Paro. 😭 I can never forget the writers for that, eventhough I loved Myrah. And a happy ending with all of them together. Sigh...
-And why did Mohini never come out of her room!? 😕 🤣 🤣 JK!
Overall:
Great TS Amy! As I said before, really love your different takes on how the story would've been after Paro's death. Just wish the actual writers could think a bit like that! My favorite part in the story was the bro-sis bond of Paro and Aman! I really loved it! ❤️
Thanks for the pm chica! 🤗
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