Paro TS: Free - Part 3 - Page 12 Updated *COMPLETED* - Page 9

Originally posted by: Alicia2012

Wow great short story

im really going to miss reading this story of your so much

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

Awesome Reunion, Thanks for the PM :)

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Wow Man

She is back with her family

Am glad

With her hubby her son

They are Together again

And away from that tejawat

Aman you got your sister back

They all missed her

As did she

Originally posted by: Sona257

loved the end!

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

Fabulous one
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ProudArShian

Part 1:
-I just wanna give you a standing ovation for the opening of the this part. The description and state of mind of Paro that you provided were amazing!!! I read a book on slavery and the author emoted the same emotions through his writing so very well done Amy!!! 👏 Thankyou so much afshan! <3 To be honest this is my best work till now :P (Self praising? what the eff? lol)
-Also, i love how you created a complete two different versions of after Paro's death, this and A Ray of Hope (you need to update that one!!!). Creating two different versions yet with Tejawat in the story was a bit difficult but i'm glad the different was visible and it made sense. :D

Part 2:
-So everyone thought she is dead whereas she was "enslaved" by Tejawat for seven years... But how!? How did Tejawat even get to her!? If she was dead, then should've been a funeral and all. Lol I think I'm thinking way too much, but I need to know to grasp the story a bit more. 😛 As i said earlier this is totally random and it's from Paro's view (Won't say POV because this was clearly 3rd POV. LMAO #Confused) So she doesn't know what happened after she was taken away. You can make your own story in mind :P Free to think. lol

-Aww love how you accentuated Paro and Aman's bond here. I wish it was more like that in the show too. Brother sister bond is always really good to write and read (My POV :P) Plus i wanted to do something different. Not the same Hero saving his love lady :P I too wish it was shown in the show.. *sigh*

Part 3:
-Honestly I just LOVED the bond between Paro and Aman! And thank God I'm not the only one who thinks it wasn't used the way it should've been in the show! I completely agree with you. The show makers could've used him as Paro had lost all her family members after she was under Rudra's protection but oh well... I guess we expect too much from tv shows! 😆 But thank-you for fulfilling my wish too! 🤗 Yayy! You agree with me :D I really wish they used this character as a brother to Paro. Though they did but in initial episodes only :( I agree we expect too much from tv shows. Lol.. I'm glad i fulfilled your wish :D

-Awww! Dhruv and Paro! Ughh how I wish all this was true!! Wish Myrah was Paro. 😭 I can never forget the writers for that, eventhough I loved Myrah. And a happy ending with all of them together. Sigh... I am noticing that we have similar views :o Even i loved Myrah but really wanted her to be Paro. I supported Myrah the most in the forum. Lol.. Sometimes got bashed because of that too. BUT BUT not to forget i won "Greatest Myrah Fan of the Forum" #ShowOff lmao.. I liked the ending as a saw Paro in Myrah. Call me weird or stupid but i did. The ending was Parud. I still believe she was Paro. Her body language was just like Paro.. Everything said "its Paro!" I remember when i saw the precap of Last episode the first thing i said was "Paro.. She's Paro"

-And why did Mohini never come out of her room!? 😕 🤣 🤣 JK! LMAO! I already answered that in kik :P Mohini is still herself in my TS. So didn't want to show her overdramatic expression.. "DHUAN KUMARI?" "HAYY BHOLENATH" "BHOOT BHOOT" 🤣 I bet you imagined while reading my reply.. :P

Overall:
Great TS Amy! As I said before, really love your different takes on how the story would've been after Paro's death. Just wish the actual writers could think a bit like that! My favorite part in the story was the bro-sis bond of Paro and Aman! I really loved it! ❤️ Thankyou so much once again! <3 I really loved your detailed comment! Love you <3

Thanks for the pm chica! 🤗 Ohhoo! Ye to mera farz tha... :P lol

Originally posted by: silvercloud1980

It was a nice emotional chapter and thanks for the translation
Hema

Originally posted by: believe77

wonderful, impactful, soulful, beautiful and satisfying. In such a short 3 part OS you created a wonderful story from Paro's view. 😃Thankyou so much Di! Completing the whole story in three parts was difficut but i'm glad you all loed it! <3

You had me hold my breath for a few seconds when they guy claimed he couldn't find Paro, but Paro's bhaisa found her.😉 How can Aman Bhaisa leave without finding his sister? He had to find her :D

The equally tearful was the reunion between Dhruv and Paro and lastly PaRud. Thank you for this wonderul story. The reunion part was the most difficult part. Had to write a convincing end :D Parud reunion was more difficult for me than Dhruv and Paro's reunion. I always believed Parud didn't need words to express what they feel. So wrote how i imagined :D

PaRud I imagined them like this... Wonderful Gif Di! Perfect for the scene i wrote. Exactly how i wrote it :D Though i didn't have this scene in my mind while writing the end :o Lovely gif. <3 I can't stop looking at it! <3

Originally posted by: Maghinalls

Wish it could happen in serial