ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts - Thread 4 - Page 9

If you soak in the rain, how will I show you my happy stars. Come, stand under my umbrella, you will see how many stars I have in the day than you have ever seen in the night...

wow beautiful wordings baby👏...khushi offering her sight of star vision to lavuu here by offering the umbrella...wt a beautiful writing deeps...the holes ,the stars...ufff fantastic ..wt an innocent soul is she...from childhood she is epitome of positivity...she can make herself content in any circumstance ...

lavuu all concern and protective about khushi here...her anger aggression pouring out from each word she uttered here...and khushi one line stopped my heart here in return..."i didn't know i have to be different from person to person..." omg brilliant writing ..it touched me deep down deeps...cocooning her pain,burying it for ever...excellent wordings

the way u have shaped up shashi and garima characters here...its amazing well done job...how true to reality...excellent...wt a strong father he emerged under the loads of pressure of society for his daughter...the way he asked khushi to talk about karan the way he heard her side of story..the way his silence was there...it weighs loads in my eyes...how many well groomed fathers r there out who ready to hear daughter's side of story...i guess the manly ego stopping most of them...many ready to blame them without listening infact how many out there who can even speak their heart out in front of parents...seeing the constant struggling life they gone through ...loved the way he asked all three ladies in front about their opinion s...my my i am impressed...

payal fabulous here...the comfort and support she is to family thats awesome...her appreciating wordings for parents about bringing their girls into life..awesome...how true once again payal side of story is...have seen many times younger sisters asked not to come in front of elder sis rishta people ...how painful is this whole scenario is in its ownself...how much payal must be going through its another debate here...uff..

coming to garima..abh mein kiya bolon...she not crying for khushi ..her becoming harsh...her being more into materialistic things ...seeing wt must she had gone through after giving birth to daughters in so called human society...wt must be inhuman humiliating taunts she must had gone through...though i wanted to blame her but my inner is stopping me from doing so...need to see her character in broader aspect..its the society who forced a person to change from optimistic to pessimistic in every walk of life...changing her from happy to harsh..garima in my eyes...worth thought provoking...she is giving back the same which world has given her once...:(

happy to see strong khushi...putting forward her thoughts openly...she wanted justice for her brutally killed babies...she wanted to put karan behind the bars ...and her determination motivated shashi too here...excellent...she bringing out positivity even from dark end...saying she was happy with karanji ...u see she is a content girl...ready to adjust in any environment she is thrown into...thats her character which is worth noticing and worth understanding...

wow loved shashi in action...loved the slap which he gave to karan..not only to karan here but to whole society who thinks beti dey di so they free now ..other can do anything to them...loved the way he stands up in current scenario...it cannot make a father weak here...daughters r prides of family...and a daughter respect is the priority ...loved how shashi caught the cunning karan in his own words...the police complaint ...its awesome step👏

i loved the gait with the whole intellectual family enters the gates of RGH :)...its the walk of achievers ...the people on right ...the people who r there to fight the criminal ,the bad...who r taking their profession damn seriously infact they adoring it as they r there to safe human after God on earth...and seeing how brutally deshmukh butchered its meaning here...ufff its painful indeed...very painful to read the procedure how she was doing the abortions criminally ,brutally ...how can she sleep peacefully after taking sleep from a mother's eyes :(..loved the way arnav all there with evidences,he worked real hard in these two weeks...deshmukh can never be scape goat now...loved the way deshmukh got the slap from arnav after hearing such brutal words from her mouth...just for 2000 rs...she was there to kill not a baby but also its mother and the dream a mother associates with new born ...this pain can never go away,its a constant pain...no matter how many more baby u give birth too...but the one who is being lost ...stays right there in memory maybe the pain less but it makes a permanent place in a mother's heart..:(

abhey and gayatri again very very supportive and understanding parents...the way abhey step forward seeing arnav slapping deshmukh...its fab deeps..and gayatri she stepped forward to calm them,amazing woman

arnav fighting on both fronts professional and personal...poor soul..as dil ka mamla hay ...only healing power is in her touch now...but right now way to go :)