IshRa Story : Stand Close To Me ( Chp 6 on Pg 11)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys,
So finally IshRa have inspired me to write something of my own!

The super-slow drama in the name of Shagun and Adi is currently making us all cringe and thus here is my story born to make us, IshRa fans dream on a little more...!

Hope you all like it. Below is the prologue.

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Aankhon ne dard ka farmaan hai bheja
Tujh tak na pahuche woh dard hai kaisa?
Pyaar ke armaan kabhi kahe nahi jaate
Juda hoke bhi pyaar ki karti hai baatein!

Prologue:

"Ishita... Ishita"

The darkness called out to him and he ran to her everytime he felt lost. But today, he was lost... maybe completely!

The silence called out to him and he ran to her everytime it all became too loud! But today the noises kept increasing and he was lost... maybe completely.

"Ishita... Ishita...Ishita..."

His shouts became pleadings and now they were starting to border insanity. He was losing his mind, completely and inevitably.

Raman Kumar Bhalla - the strong, level-headed, responsible, know-it-all was slowly losing it all and it was all because of her - his wife, his... umm correction his angelic, beautiful, flawlessly imperfect but MISSING wife - Ishita Bhalla.

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Do Hit LIKE if you guys like it and want me to continue. Will update the First Part very soon! :)



Chapter One : Scroll below
Chapter Two : Page 3
Chapter Three : Page 6
Chapter Four : Page 8
Chapter Five : Page 10
Chapter Six: Page 11


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Posted: 10 years ago
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What an intriguing start... can't wait to see what's next!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start.. plz continue soon..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting Start...👍🏼



Thank you so much :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

What an intriguing start... can't wait to see what's next!😊



Thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rianshi

awesome start.. plz continue soon..!!



Thanks :) next part coming soon!:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So guys, don't want to keep you all waiting for the next part.
To all those who have liked my story, a big thank you to all. Do share your comments on the next part as well.

Thanks :)

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Chapter One: Let my Heart Talk.

"Ishitaaa"

His startled cry reverberated in the office cabin! He slept in the discomfort of his chair once again, trying to avoid every impending issue going on in his life.

He was running, yet his body took him back to where he belongs... or maybe BELONGED!

Nothing was the same, his life had changed 16 days and 7 hours back when he lost her somewhere in the chaos of his life. When his perfect little world crumbled down right in front of his eyes.

He still couldn't figure out how a 12 year old had the power to pierce right into his life and puncture all the happiness out of it. The same 12 year old who was his lifeline, whose arrival 12 years back had brought a lifetime of happiness in his life. The same 12 year old had now single-handedly brought him to his knees in exactly the same way as his mother-in-law had predicted.

Flashback:

Amma: Ek din Raman you will realize that when you need to choose, you will end up choosing your happiness when in actuality you will lose everything.

He had lost her... he had lost himself and he had once again lost everything!

Just then a small hand touched his moist eyes and got him out of his reverie. That same comforting hand which was guiding him in this lost battle.

"Papa... aap phirse yahi so gaye... gandi baat! Once again I had to tell Romi Chachu to drive me here. Chalo ab ghar chalo, dadi intezaar kar rahi hai."

He loved how his mornings somehow started with his angel and the frown on her forehead brought a cute smile to his face. He leaned down and kissed her forehead, held her little finger and walked right into the chaos that he wanted to run away from.

Around 2000 kms South:

"So, when things go south head to the South!"

She couldn't help but smile at that silly little line. She knew it applied perfectly to her. That one line was enough for her usual predicament to start.

She was back to where she belonged, where she was born and bought up, amongst the people who read the newspaper in the same language her appa does, who loved kanjeevaram just like her and where Sambar and rasam were the staple diet. Yet, she was far far away from where she belonged. Where her heart belonged and where her soul in the name of Ruhi still lingered.

Since the past 16 days she had woken up to the smell of filter coffee, bathed in rose scent and donned her simple dresses, just like before she was married, but still something was amiss - her husband, her daughter and her family. The miracle of love she had witnessed had lost it's light somewhere and now she was plunged into darkness. Alone and incomplete she had started her life afresh.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story..Wer is shagun and adi??
pls continue
Eagerly waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lucky.13

Awesome story..Wer is shagun and adi??
pls continue
Eagerly waiting for ur next update


Thank you :) Adi and Shagun whereabouts will be known soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start. Continue soon 😊

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