IshRa Story : Stand Close To Me ( Chp 6 on Pg 11) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
woahh!! awesum update! Raman back in action as Ravan to get his JKR back! lovely! loved it when he screamed at shagun n her so-call-social butterflies and Adi too!
loved raman-ruhi scene... this is one of my fav after ishu-ruhi!

cont soon.. waiting for the next part! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Nice story! Please do continue, and I will be waiting for your updates!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Rani thanks for bring RKB back now he blow Shagun in one go that so good. Very nice update love to see like this on the show too. Love the way you write about Raman guilty and he know his mistake and try to make every wrong to be right grate job.now he throw Shagun out hope next update he will go and get his Ishu back. 😉 Have to wait for next update thanks dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
awww ruman convo was so sweet n emotional
finally ravan kumar is bck
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Brilliant, just loved the last update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
finally...fcae off between shagun and raman...

this is suprb...

raman allowing nly ruhi with him...ab aayega maaza...

apshagun never chnage...always selfish...

waiting fr nxt...

updte soonish...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys,
Back with the next part for you... right here! We have been dying to get one IshRa scene in YHM now-a-days so thought of adding one to my Story this time. Hope you all enjoy. Will try updating the story as soon as possible.

Thanks... :)

Recap:

"Shagun Kitni asaani se tumne yeh soch liya that this is your house, your money, your family, your husband. Actually tumhari chottu se brain mein Itna hi working matter hoga. Anyway Shagun all I want to say is mein Bahut Jaldi Adi ki aankhon se tumhari Jhuthe pyaar ka parda Utha doonga. He will see how much you love him and how much you love yourself. So Shagun start packing your bags because your time is up!"

With this Raman turned and left a fuming Shagun to herself. Romi couldn't help but chuckle at Shagun and her halat and then Bhalla family had a good laugh before they retreated too.

_______________Chapter 5 : Memories Stand Close _______________

Ishita was grinning from ear-to-ear, she walked back with a big smile plastered on her face, with a bounce in her step and sparkle in her eyes. That's what Ruhi did to her. She loved her daughter... Err correction: LOVES her daughter, will always love her daughter. Ishita was so lost in her love for her Ruhi and Ramaaa...Ravan Kumar when she heard someone cry out.
"Ishiii... Dhyaan kaha hai? Mujhe gira diya tune...!!!!" Asha made a sad face as she soothed her derrire which had taken the fall.

Ishita as any friend would, stopped and laughed. She knew it was wrong but she couldn't help contain her laughter seeing her friend being a victim to her own clumsiness once again!

"Tum hasss Rahi ho? Ishi very bad!" Asha pouted.

"Hahaha. Ms. Clumsy, sorry sorry! I just... Just couldn't stop myself from laughing. Sorry sorry!"

--/---/ Flashback/---/---/

"Rooh... Please don't make me run! Please na baccha. Eat this idli sambar today... Tomorrow chole. I promise," Ishita panted after taking the 5th round behind her chotta pataka.

Ruhi on the instructions of her Ravanish father had decided to trouble her Ishima. Both the Devils were being monsters to her today.

"Nooo ishima. No idli. No idli day today. Papa has said."

"Papa ki chamchi. Idharrr Aaa beta... Dikhati hoon."

When she felt herself bumping into a hard chiseled chest, the sudden obstacle made her lose balance and she fell right into the arms of his Ravan Kumar.

"Sexy" that's all she could say, her husband was one sexy man. With the light stubble, the piercing brown eyes and gelled-hair, it felt as if she had fallen right into the arms of a Greek god!

"Huh? Pagal wagal ho kya Madrasan? Yeh kya Tum Iyers ka Naya style hai logon ko welcome karneka?"

"Naah... Logon ke liye nahi... Sirf patiyon ke liye... Khaaskar Ravan ... Ahem ahem Sexy Kumar ke liye."

"Ohh hoo. Aaj toh bade mood mein hai koi. Ek baat bolu Ishita...?"

"Raman yaha?" Ishita's eyes widened. "Was he going to say it now? Here?" She mumbled.

"Haan. Bol du?"

"Hmm Bol du" Their noses were inches apart and Ravan Kumar's hand was tighlty wrapped around her bare waist, sending shivers down her spine.

"Amma ne kya khake paida kiya tha? kamar toot gayi hai Meri. Koi Bacchao Mujhe iss 'Mad'-rasan se!"

"Chee so unromantic, Ravan-Satan-Kumaaar" Ishita scrunched her nose and stopped her Kud-Kud Kumar from talking.

Raman's eyes sparkled and he tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear, when she heard chuckles becoming laughter.

And right there in the middle of their living room, Bhalla family found their Raman and Ishita enveloped in the beautiful color of love... that had started from their cheeks, and spread around the entire house!

--//---//// Present////---//

Ishita was brought out of her reverie by the squeals of laughter around her, with Asha still on the floor, nursing her back and all the children enjoying the sight with interest.

Ishita smiled and helped Asha up, just how Ruhi had helped her parents get away from their arms and into hers. She could still see the joy that reflected in Ruhi's face, the smiles of her father-in-law and mother-in-law, the glint of naughtiness on Romi, Rinki and Simmi's face. Raman and Ishita both knew this incident was going to go down in the history of Bhalla family's khullam khulla romance.

As Ishita straightened Asha back on her feet, a thought straightened in her head; no matter where she stays, no matter how far she goes, no matter how much time goes by, she carries her family with her everywhere- in her memories. Along with her life she packed a suitcase full of memories when she left Bhalla House.

And one thing she knew for sure, her Ravan Kumar will make everything right. Her Ravan Kumar will bring her back to her house. Her Ravan Kumar will confess his love to her someday. Someday, very soon, her Ravan Kumar Bhalla will be back... To her... For then and forever!

----------------------------------------- END OF CHAPTER 5 ------------------------------------------------------------


Hey, not very good with Romantic scenes, but my first attempt, hope you all like it!



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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
awww! That was very CUTE romantic encounter! Good to see both of them believing in each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Nice update ..plz pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
very small updte...
bt its nice...
esply ishra romnce...


waiting for nxt...

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