Originally posted by: loveansh
This is such a beautiful story Sneha, as I was reading it my eyes fill up with tears, barely could read the last lines..dedication to Seetha...it was just like she was back...I agree with Lili, you should continue with this story...(maybe you already did...should check next pages) Love the way how your words flow easily, just the way her did, love your beautiful writing...
Love the way how you include in your story all that bits and pieces that CVs so conveniently forgot while changing the story, like the fact that SagUn should go and live with Saagz dad... here they did, and it resulted in a cute little boy...love the fact that their love was strong enough to last ,( though they were separated),just like all great love do...please, do continue, make it into SS...would love to see the expression on Amma's face when she see Bunty and Sagz with their son on her doorsteps...looking forward to that...😊
Seetha's Sneha ! Really it is an honor to me to get such a review for my kiddy story .When we were in college , lecturers used to give us assignments to write some essays like , Keats , Wordsworth ,Coleridge or like great novelists . For that we have to read their works first and then we have to be able to catch hold of the rhythmical style of that writer and his special way of expression while writing the words and sentences . As I told you , since 1 month we are reading Seetha's posts and her stories ,not only me ,many are still reading them . Me and Avi many times tempted to post some good posts of Seetha in your passionate and heart wrenching thread The Empress ...---- but stopped ourselves because , we don't want to stir the emotions of her friends by bringing that thread in to front page . It may cause some sadness to all .
Seetha wrote some beautiful lines on the responsibilities of a writer and how to weave a story in an interesting way and how to cover the other imp aspects in it , and her suggestion was ,'' you have to cover all angles of either life or love in your story with totality '' .
Thank you very much for your suggestions and advise . Even her way of acknowledgement to readers' views is something special . 😊