Sab Mera Tu..Ch:2 Pg: 4

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Sig credit: our talented Dilsha.. thank u pal for the patience, hard work



Author's note:

Hi folks...it has been quite some time that I logged in to IF. Since it's vacation time, I am so gonna use it for my fav EBI and ViCHA. So here is my new SS on ViCha in a whole new setting and with new characters. Would like to thank Shai for being there motivating me to bring this piece into words and share it with you all..Shreshth and Smita, yeh that's what our MriAra/ ViCha will be called in this cross fic...Hope you enjoy it.

Waise she is the EDITOR to this SS as well.. thank you for your effort. This fic is dedicated to you.😳

To all my readers: Now that the thread is unreserved n updated please do like n comment.😊

Regards
Sia

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reserved







Author's note Page 1

Character Sketch Page 1

Prologue Page 1

Chapter 1 Page 1

Chapter 2 Page 4


Edited by sankalp_prapti - 10 years ago
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Sig Credit : Moh..thank you pal for the awesome sig n permitting to edit it.

Chhavi Pandey as Smita Bansal

The earnest Doctor and a heart surgeon. She is the only child of late Mr. Dharam Bansal and Mrs. Rupa Bansal. Losing her parents at a very young age left a deep impact on Smita, She had her mumu, i.e. her maternal aunt as her guardian. Mumu was her world and so was she to her aunt. She had the duty of maintaining the prestige of the only memory left of her parents - the hospital. And so the hospital was her home ever since she became a cardiologist.



Viraf Phiroz Patel as Shreshth Kashyap


A shrewd and successful businessman. 'Work is worship' is what his life defines. But what made him get so deep into work? It isn't something without reason. He had become an epitome of saduness over the course of time. Will he die with the same? Or is life gonna teach him something else? After the loss of his dear ones he learnt a fact that life is tough and love is tougher...but little does he know that he is going to wake up to realities that he never knew or may be never wished to know.



Gauri Yadav Tonk as Dr. Nirmala Singh Shekhawat


Elegance with brains defines this lady. She is a neurosurgeon and the dean of Lifeline Hospital. Smita's mumu is the most eligible middle-aged bachelorette. Waiting for her true love, she has plethora of experience in treating people's brains both in the literal and in the metaphoric sense.


Rest coming soon...




Picture says a hundred words..so do check the VM


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=luWyrEt0vSw[/YOUTUBE]

or


http://youtu.be/luWyrEt0vSw


Regards

Sia.

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 10 years ago
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Chapter 1


His eyes gazed into hers...they conversed something profound and she saw herself answer to him in as ardent manner as he did. His eyes gently eyed her down as he held her curvy waist kneading it with his palm. Gulping hard, she voluntarily shut her eyes at his act.

She drools as he feels her satan skin. His lips wanting to taste hers...he then moves down to make his desire to touch her lips true...


No sooner than he did this, she opened her eyes and found herself on her bed but there was no sign of him at any place near.

"Ms. Smita Bansal, get a grip on yourself. This is the nth time that you dream of a complete random guy kissing you..uhh!" She got up disciplining herself.

The phone rang. "Hey Simmi..Good morning." said Sonia, Smita's bestie as soon as Smita picked up.

"Good morning Sonia.." Smita muttered.

"Wait...don't tell me you had the same dream..!" Sonia exclaimed.

"How do you guess it all the time?" Smita inquired.

"Well it's not hard to guess with you talking in a seductive tone. Is there any improvement this time? As in did he improvise on his acts?" Sonia teased Smita.

"Sonia not again," Smita said.

"Smita you just need to believe in it happening." Sonia pepped up her friend.


"Hmm...I know, I will...um.. Chalo meet you at the hospital." Smita hung up with that statement.



Somewhere on the busy roads of the metropolitan, he waited patiently in the traffic jam...well that was the level of patience that he could afford.

Time was something he could not waste for anyone. After the painful experience of braving the death of his parents, he didn't have time to even see his own face in the mirror.

The office buzzed with the usual hustle. But as soon as there was even a word of him entering the office, it would discipline his employees. He was nicknamed as Satan and was loathed by many in his field for what he was.




"Pari...dekho aaj late hogaya toh mujhey mat kehna ki aap mujhey subha uthatee he nai..late hojata hai school ko!" The mother tried to wake up her 5 year old.

"Momma please 5 minute aur..." Pari requested with her utterly sweet tone.

"Dekho tum mujhey aise phigla nahi sakti. This time I won't melt. You get that straight in your little head miss!" The mother warned.

"Mom aaj toh chod do...aaj Sunday hai!" Pari reminded her.

"Haan Smita, its Sunday. Bechari bachi ko at least aaj aaram say sone do late tak." Nirmala told her.

"Sunday...! It's already Sunday.. ohoo ...ok soh jaoo.!" Smita permitted.

Smita, seeing her sleeping daughter, realized that time passes away really fast. It was just yesterday that she got Pari home. Her child was so adorable..so small...cute..She couldn't remember the time before Pari happened.


Thanks for reading


Do drop in your valuable comment.

Regards

Sia & Shai

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great concept Sia!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The siggy is beautiful Dilsha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

This siggy portrays Smita and Shreshth aptly Mohi!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

What a pair and the character sketch is awesome!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The VM is fabulous and serves as the perfect promo of the story!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Trailer aisa hai toh picture toh superhit hi hogi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Smita's dream was quite hot!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I hope she meets Shreshth soon who would surely make all her dreams come true!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sonia rightly guessed about Smita's dream and teased her about it!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

His life seems to consist only of work and more work!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Smita and her daughter Pari's scene was too cute!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The chapter is awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏




Edited by Shaina_b - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hhaye shuru me aise Shremita (Shreshth Smita) dreams mention karke jaan lene ka irada hai kya shuruwaat hi itni zabardast hai toh aage kya hoga.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SIA, SIA, SIA, SIA, SIA...

Theres no doubt I'm a fan of ur write ups and again u've left me in awe with the concept cant wait to read on. 😃
Edited by mastaTmohi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally you are back on writing 😃 🤗

Thank you 😃

⭐️ ~Sab mera tu~ ⭐️ 👏

Appropriate title 👏 👏

Introduction of characters is strong 👏

Sm- a cardiologist and Sh- a business man what can be their story ??

Nimmo is there 😛

U mixed TMLS and EBI 😊

Thanks for bringing back ViCha 😃
I am eager to know what will be their love story 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sab mere tu 👏👏 Nice title
Very beautiful plot you choose👍🏼
Starting is really brilliant
Thank you so much Sia 🤗
phir se vicha aik naye rang mein humein dene keliye
Lovely and Beautiful ❤️
Waiting for next 😉😛😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It heartwarmingly endearing. .loved it..Please update soon..and don't forget to finish it...

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