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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Hey I am happy that when I started reading it you updated it as well. 😊 😊 😊

Nice update, 👏 👏 👏 you made clear the things how Pari came in to Smita's life. 😊 😊 😊

It's indeed very bad system of our surrounding where such crimes like child trafficking her going on. 😔 😔 😔

She at least saved the life of a kid from spoiling but Nirmala is also right at her place.

But I know our hero will accept his heroine with her daughter as well..

Do update soon.

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Dilsha

@Dilsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

I am in love with this story
Can't wait to read the rest of the story
So shresht and Smita had previously been brought together by destiny
Waiting for their actual meeting

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arpita25

@arpita25

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Nice concept like DMG but different.👏 Mahak suggested me this FF as well.😉 Shresth what a name with as usual amazing personality.😳 Smita is sweet as well. 😊She is totally a good doctor just like my fav Riddhima. Continue soon.

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Sorry for keeping u hanging ppla...will update ASAP..have my exams in a couple of weeks.

Can't Thank you enough for the love and patience you all have given for this fic

Regards
Sia

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sandiab

@sandiab

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Awesome keep it up ladies cnt wait for the next chapter and do pm me when u update

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Hey awesome start with a great concept. 👏 👏 👏

But why didn't you update it from long time? 😕 😕 😕

Pls do update it soon..

Thank u dear, sorry for keepin u all hanging for so long.

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Shreshth as expected turned out perfectly attired for the occasion!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

He even had the reporter from KKN drooling over him along with the other ladies!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Who wouldn't!!

Destiny had brought Shreshth and Smita together 3 years back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But they narrowly missed each other though that incident did change Smita's life!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
There life... there
Smita is indeed a dedicated doctor and inspite of being so tired she took care of the infant!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
She is the best

The way you brought up a heinous crime like child trafficking which is rampant in our society in your story was awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

It seemed like an episode of Crime Patrol!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Crime patrol and awesome dnt go together pal!!!

Smita had done the right thing by adopting the child as she is indeed a perfect mother to her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

But Nirmala was also right in her place!!!!
That she is and will be always!

So this was how Pari had come into Smita's life!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The chapter is fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks for everything Shai🤗

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Khadeja
Hello !!! Sia 😊
This is Khadeja.
hey by any chance where u at LNMDJ forum?

I have read your another FF & OSs.
I love them ..😛
thank u so much!

This ff start was great...😃 thank u
Actually FF's name is killer...👍🏼
The chapter 2 is superb .
Smita and Pari's bonding is lovely..😊
Now , waiting for Shreshth intro with them... that would be soon, hope it fits the 'dhamaka label'
keep reading, update is arnd