||~Just a mere Dare~|| SanDhir SS *Part 5**30/12**COMPLETED* :x

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Aanya.RS
for the first time i cried while reading any story
i want to say so many things but don't know ki start kahan se karoon
first of all i appreciate u for writing something on this issue. This really needs guts .
how some man can behave like this with a girl as if she is nothing just a mere object of fulfilling their desires. I feel like ...🤬...those men
and the worst part is that the situation is not getting better in any way infact it is becoming worse
people expect that things will change but WHEN????

Thanks

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: roshinicool
moi ne iss baar bhi xtra speed mein unress ke diya h..
Party balle balle!!

31st ko pakka 😆

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

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@.Del.ici.ous.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

ress
unress..
OMGEEE..
I m speechless..
Achcha hua un +-*/.%$(*& k saath..
Pff..
I m speechless..
No lmbu cmnt dis tymm..
D update is fabulous babydoll..

Edited by roshinicool - 10 years ago

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Janavi

@Paravi

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Res

Unres...
Yeppii... I am second...
Glares at sanu...!!
Huh.. Main waise bhi baat nahi kar Rahi ..

Coming to update...
I read two in a go...
First tell me
What the hell is wrong with you??
You gave two updates and I didn't get the pm...!!!
Moreover how can u give soo amazing updates...??
How can you give such a perfect update???

I mean it was awesome...!!
Marvellous update...!! Bloody bustards ...!
I wonder how can someone be so cruel...?
#*%##*****$# Jo bhi gaaliyaan duniya main hai
Woh sari unke liye...!!!

The last chapter literally made me cry...
They are like monsters...!!!
Not like monsters.. They are monsters only...
I was feeling so bad for sandhir...
5 days?? Oh god ...

But this part... Truly rocked ...!!
God I was jumping all the time...
And was hooting for sanyukta ...!
But I really felt bad for randhir !
He kept in waiting for her...!!

He was so much in love...
It was such a treat to read those
Creepy creatures being punished
For their bad deeds...!!

But randhir ?
Randhir ke saath bhi woh aisa kuch
Karegi toh main next part nahi pad paungi...
And parth ko kaise bhul sakti huin??
He is married still doing such things..
God help him...!!!

Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update ASAP
Waiting for it
And don't forget to pm me
Love Janavi

Edited by Paravi - 10 years ago

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

^You both better unres it soon -.-

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

I love you so damn much fr this part anu

Hats off girl

Aisa hi hona chahiye tha

Bloody @&-&-)-(/((/2/&/@/9&-)-

It was the best part i have evr written

Everything was well deserved fr each one of them

U nailed ot girl

Hats off to your writing

But i have a question in my mind

Will she kill rd too ??

I mean he was not at fault

He was forced

Anyway update soon

And keep writing

Coz ur a brilliant writer ^_^

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Now that was really very quick

The update was superb
I k really feeling vry bad for rd
He luvs sanyu
He was dying in guilt

He was wtng for her

N sanyu came back
Back with a bang

Omg the revenge is so terrible
N I luved it

Those b****** got what they deserve
Really sanyu got her revenge very well

She tortured them
She killed them

Really it feels awsme reading revenge part

Parth god he was married n has a daughter
Still he did that sin

The best punishment was of rajvir

Now rd turn
I m feeling very bad for him
He luvs her
I don't want sanyu to kill him

Plz make sandhir together in the end

Wtng for next
Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

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darshana

@23darshana

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

i mean r u serious u r talking about liking ur story m loving it like hell ... i cant tell u how awesome u wrote especially the revenge part it was fantastic really awesome ...

about randhir feeling bad for him but can't ignore wat sanyukta suffered ...i really wanted to give her a award for her kickass come back ...

rajveer part was too good i imagined it in my head with some really spicy images

allover i loved it really loved it those bas***ds deserved that all which she did with them after all that was nothing compared to wat they did wit her ...

waiting for the next part ...u r one of my favourite writer in this forum (but i never actully commented on any of ur previous work sorry )