||~Just a mere Dare~|| SanDhir SS *Part 5**30/12**COMPLETED* :x

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 10 years ago

-- PROLOGUE --

"No, it's still not convincing." The elderly man, who looked of nearly 45 said, removing his reading glasses.

"What? Its not convincing? How's that even possible? You got to be kidding me, oldie. I'm the best writer." She said, toying with random stuffs that were lying in front of her, on the wooden table. She looked at the old man in front of her, again going through the new story she has written. And his expressions were still not seemed convincing.

"What the heck? I'M THE FUDGING BEST WRITER ON THE EARTH. AND YOUR COMPANY IS LUCKY ENOUGH WHO IS BLESSED WITH THE PRIVILEGE OF PUBLISHING MY FICTION" she literally shouted at the elderly man in front of her.

She never gave respect to any one other than, her parents, her friends and her close relatives, very close ones only.

"I'm not saying that YOU are not worthy, but the story lacks something. Something is missing. You should give it another chance, change the script a bit at least. I know what you should do. Go on a vacation, somewhere where there is peace. Concentrate only on the script, and you cn do this. After all you're the best writer on the earth." The old man said.

Vacation. This sounds fun.!

Especially after her recent break-up. She definitely needed a break. So she agreed.

After thinking a lot, she decided her Vacation spot. She wanted peace, she wanted forests and a home between forest with a lake facing view. Yeah what more do you expect from a writer?

Writers and their imaginative world.

And after GOOGLE-ing she decided to go to South Africa, one of the most peaceful place on the Earth. Surrounded by forests and greenery.

And the next day she left for Zanzibar, South Africa.

Little did she knew, that where she is leading, thinking that she'll enjoy, will change her life. For ever.

Yes the fun part is true, but the fun will be for the boys, the enjoyment for some boys, for whom ego is bigger that the f*cking tower. Harassment of a girl, will be fun for them.

But when this, S*xually assaulted women will come back to take her revenge, it'll be more fun.

Just a mere dare, led to so many things.

But that fine summer, they got a reason to live.

-- INDEX --

Synopsis :: Posted above

Prologue :: Posted above

Chapter 1 :: HERE

Chapter 2 :: HERE

Chapter 3 :: HERE

Chapter 4 :: HERE

Chapter 5 :: HERE [LAST PART]

Scroll down for PMs and More information 😃

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

So um, This Idea came in my mind yesterday.

I was at my friend's house and was watching my favourite movie "I spit on your grave"
You should watch it too, Its one of the best movies ever. Its on this issue as well.

A women who is s*xually assaulted by some guys, and how she takes her revenge.

after that when we were in the garden, for some walk, we saw some guys, passing some dirty comments to a girl who was jogging. The guys were not of that area. But they were literally staring at each and every girl who was passing.
I was with a group of friends, 5 girls and 6 guys, and they were continuously passing comments on us. so all my guy friends got furious and they went for a fight. Thank god the fight didn't take place, but what happened was no less than harassment.

This is when I decided to write something, on this issue.

And today is the 2nd anniversary of the Nirbhaya case, So I thought this would the best day to post the SS, but still I'm uncertain about it.

This will be extremely mature from 1st part to the end.

I don't know whether you guys even want to read that or not. Because the way in which I'll show the revenge will contain very explicit things, I'm not sure if anyone is willing to read it or not,

SO SHOULD I CONTINUE?????
AND THIS SS IS VERY MUCH INSPIRED FROM THE MOVIE "I SPIT ON YOUR GRAVE"

AND FOR PMs ADD --Non--Sane--

after the PM for prologue and the synopsis, I won't be sending any PMs from this ID...
and the one who really wants to read this SS send a buddy req. to --Non--Sane--

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KAJAL

@foreverhers

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Posted: 10 years ago

Pft! Rosh dadi! This is not fair!!😡
Although second position ain't that bad but... Moi ka first position!!
Never mind... 1st position will be mine soonish.

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The entire Nirbhaya case was a very unfortunate event, one that has shook the belief of many upon humaity.
Where on hand many preach girls as incarnations of goddess, incidents like this jostle us to the harsh reality of 21st century.
It's high time to take action rather than waiting for the birth of another Nirbhaya.

Ah! That was certainly a splendid way to start a wonderful fiction: a thought provoking and mind-jolting prologue.
Although I have seen that movie yet after reading this prologue I want to watch that movie again and again.
The prologue is highly intriguing and has certainly perked up my curiosity.
I'm eagerly waiting for the first part to be updated.
Do update that soonish cause I lack patience...

Regards
Keya

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

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Posted: 10 years ago

See i am unresing so soon 😆

Not like others ..lazy lads🤣

Actually couldn't control yr

I spit on your grave is such a wonderful movie

And now a ss on that will be worth reading 😉

The prologue seems touching as well as exciting too

Its totally different 😃

I am already excited

I spit on your grave into a ss wil be wonerful

Just give quick updates

And that 16 dec case

Once again #RIP NIRBHAYA

And tell me one thing that park incident which u described was true

Waise bhi its so common these days why am i even asking 😡

Anyway just continue this story soon I'm very excited

And i have pm'ed the mentioned account 😃

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shivangi

@daringdarlo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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The way u hav rittn it... It sounds so damn interesting..
It would b great to read more of your stories...
Eagerly waiting for ur update..
Buddy request - sent.
Do pm me..

Ps- send me pms for ODP as well..

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Omg breaths in
Breaths out

Wowie one new fic by u
Moi super excited

Really amzng plot yr
Moi already in luv with this

Super tribute to nirbhaya
Its vry touchy topic n I m sure u will do full justice to it

I so luved the proloug n synopsis
Would luv to read it yr
Super excited

Update soon
Wtng

Luv u
Keep smiling

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samridhi

@samridhigoodiez

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res Unres.. Anu Bache u took my breathe away with this one.. Really hats off to u for giving us this sort of story.. For such kind of scribbles u need all guts n heart for both reading n writing.. I m very grateful that I get to read it here.. Also when that JYOTI PANDEY SINGH AKA NIRBHAYA GANGRAPE happened.. I cried thousand tears . I so wanted to kill those bas***ds right then.. They are still alive till yet.. After after the verdict has been pronounced. Its the brutal reality.. Assault against women is now an epidemic in not just India but other parts of the world.. We women have to take an initiative rather than behaving like a bechari sitting at our homes.. I m so happy that in your story I get to read it.. Also this time update this story frequently not like ur other stories.. Thanks for pm..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

WOW!! nice concept...I also watched that movie...It was brilliant...the way she took her revenge was mindblowing...👏...continue soon...

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