||~Just a mere Dare~|| SanDhir SS *Part 5**30/12**COMPLETED* :x - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was my reaction after reading those two updates
And that too together
Firstly i wanna speak all the abbusive language i know
To those bullshit boys &/7/)&/9/@@/@/@/@
Srry this is public and i cant speak those words here
My god what do boys think of themselves yar
Bloody hell
I a thinking of nirbhaya yar 😭
How much she would have suffered 😭😭
Mai na ab sachi keh ri hu muje kuch aisa pata chal gaya na
I will kill every damn boy involved in these henious acts 😡
Mera temperature rising 😡
Muje bohot gussa aaying 😡😡😡
But just want to say u r a god gifted writer yar
The way u penned it was more than amaZing
And i still can't believe rajveer speaking such a good english 😆
Abi bhi muje itna gussa aaying
How could they yar 😡
Bas ab muje apna gussa shant krne ke lie jana padega
U update soon and just write such a revengeful part 😡😡
That they forget their mothers and grandmothers😡
Update soon
And yeah we also love you 😆<3
Edited by Sagl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just want those boys to die a very horrible death at the end...😡
im really lukin forward 2 it...
Edited by asritosh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg yr
I m having goosebumps reading this
It was so scary

Yr u nailed it
U penned it flawlessly

Yr the pain n misery sanyu gone through is just not imaginable

Those b****** bloody freaking cheapsters

Really such ppl who things girls r meant for s** n to fulfill their desires should be hang till death

Those r***** they were having fun in assaulting a girl


Poor sanyu she was so scared
She tried so hard to escape bt she was trapped so badly

Rd he was so helpless he wanted to save her bt there's nothing in his power
He was dying to see her lyk dat

The trio forced him rd to made out with sanyu

She sum how escaped bt destiny had sum other plans
She was so hopeful when she saw army men

Bt the destiny is a b****
He was parth
He was with the trio in their sin


They tortured her
They assaulted her for freaking 5 days

Really yr just cnt express what I m feeling rite now


Sanyu jumped in lake
All were thinking dat she's dead


Bt the real story begins now
Those r***** gonna pay for their sins
Its payback tym


I m also feeling very bad for rd
Sanyu is not only the one who has been tortoured poor rd also got tortured emtnl n mentally too


Really make those cheapster suffer lyk hell
Yr u did a great job
Hatts off to you

Really this a big tribute to damini

Cnt wait for next
Update soon




Luv u
Keep smiling
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭 oh my god poor sanyu she going through so much pain aaawww m crying seriously so emotional feeling bad for sanyu and rd he is so helpless 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
moi ne iss baar bhi xtra speed mein unress ke diya h..
Party balle balle!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am very much new to if n a silent reader too.But after reading this update can't stop myself from replying just want to
say after reading this the pain i m going through I want u to make sanyu take her revenge in more than hell possible ways
just give them such torchure that no man have received.thank u for writing this I never felt so connected to such victims like sanyu n even rd.N at last ur just great writer .U have written it flawlessly.Great job dear.N about haters I guess they r blind to c reason behind this ss.Just never stop writing bcz of this blind pplz.U r amazing dear.Love U
My crazy sandhirian fan(can call me sona) 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
what 2 say anu..
u really left me speechless yrrr ..
it was so damn scary yrr
really feeling pity on sanyu.. she jumped into lake . .
omg... poor sanyu..
update soonish ...dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear..well!! its my very first comment on your ff.. and to be honest i hvnt read any of d parts except a few lines from dis recent chapter.. actually im really sensitive to read all dis.. but GIRL! ur an amazing writer.. i appreciate you for the concept u've brought into many attentions...HATS OFF to you yaar.. still i wish dere was a world where writers had not hv to write all dis..i wish the world cud be as safe for girls as its for other species.. i wish girls were considered as Humans rather than just GIRLS...:-((
Edited by Daddysdoll - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
you are good writer
mujhe pata nahi chal raha
hain ki kya bolun
agr mujhe aaise log milen
na ek ek ko chun chun ke maarungi
bloody hell with them
just waiting for revenge part
keep writing
update soon
with love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
for the first time i cried while reading any story
i want to say so many things but don't know ki start kahan se karoon
first of all i appreciate u for writing something on this issue. This really needs guts .
how some man can behave like this with a girl as if she is nothing just a mere object of fulfilling their desires. I feel like ...🤬...those men
and the worst part is that the situation is not getting better in any way infact it is becoming worse
people expect that things will change but WHEN????

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