||~Just a mere Dare~|| SanDhir SS *Part 5**30/12**COMPLETED* :x

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Nitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Oh god this is scary she killed them sooo badly i cant even imagined waooo sanyu rock

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Samyuktha Krishnan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

wooo girl!!!! read two updates in a go.. wow... i have no words.. seriously... i cried when the entire gang was assaulting her.. i really felt that they all deserve a horrifying death... which will not be granted easily but they should beg for it... and yes... the revenge was extremly awesome. and well planned... everyone had a painful death... yes that's exactly how a guy should be given death penalty whenever he assaults any girl... amazing.. waiting for the next part... eagerly as to what would she do with Randhir...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

awesome update...all are dead except Randhir...I want to know whether she will kill her or not...

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123sandhirian

@123sandhirian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Ohhh I just love u for this.Sanyu did best thing in the world.N that devils deserve this.I hope she will understand rd n will forgive him even though he was not at fault at all.Rd really loves her.Hope she can this in his eyes.
Crazy sandhirian(sona) 😊

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Anushka Mukherjee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

its awesome superb fabulous amazing lovely

it was outstanding mind blowing part

this is the best part i ever read... amazing... lovely

those b****** killed by her...

sanyu's revenge just outstanding...

those monsters... bloody f***...

unka sath jo huya o best tha

they all deserved it... bloody looser"s

sanyu na tho sabki awesomely band bajayi

sabko itna torture karka death di...

parth has a wife and daughter also...

firvi usna itna disgusting harkat ki... bloody b******

rajveer ka death just awesome ...

every body death except Rd...

kya sanyu ussa bhi mardalagi??

he really loves her...

but firvi... o sach much chati tho ussa bachanaki kosis karsakti hi...

obhi kahi na kahi punishment deserve karti hai

you describe everything amazingly

i just loving it so much

hats of sanyukta...

love it. update asap.😃

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Heavenly_Dreams

@Heavenly_Dreams

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

first of all ...hats off girl
really ...superb imagination ...
yrr ...
secondly they deserve that what she did with them . .
especially what she did with that rajveer ...(&%###@).. a long beeep ...
anyways ...
I loved ur all writings dear ...anu...
and I loved ur spirit ...yrr ...
gr8 girl keep going lyk this ..
stay blessed ..hey ..wanna say a lot ...so ek comment free mein ...:)))

Edited by holysoul - 10 years ago

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Heavenly_Dreams

@Heavenly_Dreams

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

take a deep breath ...hmm
well ...hold on ...
hmm so firstly girl ...
woah ...great stuff yrr ...
superb punishments ...4 those ...a long beeep ...
..
secondly wht she did with that rajveer .. he truly desrvers this
fruit .. as he does the same brutality with our sweet yet hot ..
writer sanyukta ...
and I loved ur spirit yrr. ...
sacchi ..
aapke fan ho gye ji ...
stay lyk this foreverrr.
stay blessed and keep smiling..:))

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sanaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

I watch this movie
I like the movie
and your story also
loved it

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crazyshfan

@crazyshfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

omg ...dis was sooo awesome ...so well written..👏 i luved all d previous parts .. ...d plot ..story is so fab n more over d way u hve written dear...frm when u hve started dis ss lyk everydae seriously i wait for yr updates i so much loved it ...i hve my boards cumin bt still i remove tym for dis...bt wat why r u ending such a fabulous story.?...😭 plz dnt...n forget abt d lyks...i knoe , u knoe dat ur work is fab dan why worried abt d lyks ...plz keep writin ...im here waitin eagerly...lookin forward for d nxt update...😊

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shivangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

I read part 3 n 4 2geder.

For pt3
girl!!!! U described it so well.
Felt like crying 😭
Wat had she done to deserve all that.??????
Got Goosebumps after every lyn.
It was horrifying!!!!
How can any one be so cruel???

For pt4
dead rat!!!!! Eewww!!!
This was the worst after wat she did to rajveer.
But I found sahil's death the most painful...
Gud that she returned!!!!
No rapist shud b left to enjoy life..
Everyone shud meet the same fate..
Serves them ryt!!!

Waiting to see wat will happen to Randhir.

Update soon.

Thanks for the pm. 😊