sandhir ts-my tooth fairy,completed

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Posted: 10 years ago
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MY TOOTH FAIRY

It was the breaking of the dawn and someone was looking really frustrated and was sweating out his frustration by continuously punching his punching bag till that fussy bag gave up and fell on the floor

rd-that stupid dentist,who the hell she is ?i just can't believe that i had been thinking of her all the time since three days,that stupid dentist is making me crazy[frustrated he hits the wall next to him]

FLASHBACK

rd was sitting in a restaurant where he ued to have his dinner but suddenly as he took the first bite he cried in pain grabbing everyone's attention

rd-ouch,my teeth[cupping his right cheek]

hearing him wince in pain the manager comes running

ma-sir,r u fine,what happened?

rd-its my teeth

ma-should i call the doctor sir

rd-no just tell me the nearest dental clinc

ma-sure sir

manager goes from there and comes along with a card and hands it over to rd he takes the card and gets up from his seat

rd-try to make spoons softer
saying so he moves out of the bar and reaches the given address
and says to the recepionist

rd[still holding his cheek]-toothach,wanna meet a doc,if possible a male

rep-i m sorry sir but right now we don't have any male doc available

rd-fine thn,just get me an appointment
recepionist dials a no and talks over thephone and thn says to rd

rep-sir room no.4, Dr sanyukta will be checking u

hearing that he groans

rd-huh,Dr sanyukta,another good for nothing women

he goes to the room and waits for the doc

after 15 mins

rd-these women can never be on time, don;t know why they take up these jobs

thatswhen he hears a melodious voice

v-excuse me was that rude comment for me

rd turns to find a beautiful lady of around 24 years,wearing a sky blue shiffon
saree her hair flowing with the wind coming from the open window

he was lost in his own world but was brought back to reality by a the clangs of
medical equipment

lady-btw i m Dr sanyukta,sanyukta aggarwal and i guess u r Mr randhir singh shekhawat [checking his file]

rd[irritated]-i m not interested in any self intro can u just give me some pain killers

sanyu-excuse me if u wanted painkillers u could have brought them from some chemist why wasting ur time here

rd-listen just get me rid of this pain somehow,u silly woman,all women r soo useless

sanyu-mind ur tounge mr. and now lay here

he was not able to argue furher as his pain increased and did what she said

sanyu wears her coat,mask and gloves and adjusts the lamp near his mouth
but was disturbed by her phone bell

she picks up the phone

sanyu-haan ma,i m coming,haan ma mujhe pata hai ladke wale aaen hai
mein aa rahi hoon,bas ek case attendd karna hai
...

sany4-haan ma baarish hone se pehle pohochjaaongi,ma bye mein patient ke saath hoon

she cuts the call and calls the receptionist and tells her to go to her house as its gonna rain heavilyand mumbai roads r not to be trusted,the receptionist goes from there

sanyu-ok so now mr.RSS lets see

she checks his teeth andtells him that he needs a root canal surgery
and because of the unbearable pain rd agrees

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after 2 hours the surgery was over but the rain which started was not ready to seize

both of them were now waiting for the rain to stop and due to bad weather
there was no signal in their phones

rd checks his phone but again no singnal

rd-stupid phone,stupid world

sanyu-i think u should consult a phyciatrist

rd[pointing his finger]-listen just stay away from me,all u women r of the same kind

sanyu-excuse me,what problem do u have with women

rd-the problem the world have with them,now just shut up

sanyu-listen i was trying to start a convo as we r struck but u r an MCP

rd grbs her elbow and jerks her elbow
rd-listen to me very carefully,i m not at all inerested in starting a bullshit
convo with u,so now just shut up

sanyu was abt to say smt but suddenly her phone rings

sanyu-haan maa

s mom-dekh beta yeh log bhi cale gaen,tu kiska intezar kar rahi hai
mujhe to bata,mein dhoondke laoongi

sanyu-offo maa ab chalegaen toaccha hua,aur rahi baat intezaar ki to jiska intezaar tha woh to almost mil gaya

smom-kya sach beta,kaunhai ab to bata de

sanyu-maa mein ghar aake bataoongi

she cuts the call and the rain had sezied

sanyu-it was nice meeting u mr.shekhawat(smiling)

rd(glaring)-whatever

sanyu-i guess we'll meet soon

saying so she winks and goes from there leaving an amazed rd behind

to be continued





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shalbi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
it was really good..
So what happened that he can't keep her out of mind and moreover what did sanyukta mean..
Do continue soon and thanks for the p.m
Nitra thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Its really nice start.. Dear update next part soon
722670 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
I just loved the title but i hate toothache ;-ppp awsome concept dear;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
It was nyc yr
Sanyu a dentist
That's intrstng

Rd he's so rude
Sandhir fighting

Sanyu ko kaun mil gya
Wtng for next
Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
wow now that was beautiful...
Dentist sanyu...amazing...
Excited to c whats cumin up next...
Conti soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
very diff concept
rd is thinking abt sanyu
very eagar to know wat is d meaning of sanyus words
thanks for pm
continue soon nd merry christmas :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
ron thinking about sanyu from past 3 days
what happened?
and sanyu jo kaha uska matalb
kya tha??
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon
keep writing
with love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Awesome update
Lovely start
Thnku for da pm
cuteparsh thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
just awesome yaar
really nice
sanyu is a dentist
and rd is so rude but i like him
abhi next part jaldi se
cant w8
update soon
love
sakshi

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