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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Hearty congratulations for the two years in IF Chaitu.. ❤️

3k14!! Haila!!!
Well.. A different genre.. Sci-fi.. Hmm.. Pretty intersting.. Most intriguing thing of this update was the robot names yaa... Very creative.. La-1-ya & A-K-ash.. Super!! Wotta entry did our hero make!! M still drooling over the description of his magnetic eyes!!!

Way to go , Chaituuu!!!

Edited by Ms.KKN - 10 years ago

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Very interesting...our favourite characters moved up to a future plane...will enjoy reading this with your inimitable style and narrative thrown in, I am sure. Update soon!

Best,

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

oh yes!! The title...! Muah!! Bang on yaara!!! Wot an apt title for the Everlasting ArShi..
Arnav & Khushi : Immortal/Unfading! ❤️
Rabba Vey!!

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

Congratulations for your two years here Chaitu.

when I read 3014 I was like... 😕

But I love it. Be it La-1-ya or Khushi. Btw for how long has Khushi been here on this satellite? This 35 yr. old girl is here, where is her Mr. Right?😉

So it's Arnav - the interesting man who has held her gaze with his own. How could you stop at this important moment?!!! Unfair hai yeh toh bahut hi...

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Science fiction OS. Very good and interesting.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

Hmm. Future with arhi

La is a robot

Doesn't seem to be

Hmmm who is this unknown. Person

And wow he sure has some affect on khushi

Maybe the hypnotic eyes

How did he get here

Can't wait to know more

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

Science fiction ...one of my favorite genre
Loved entry of our hero and khusi's interaction with robot La-1-ya
Cannot wait to read more

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Congratulations on the anniversary nummer zwei!

And my my C what eh story! Totally different! Though it's futuristic it's amazing and it's got the exact details and ingredients that needs to be present yo ensure it sustains!

This is just that!

LA as a robot and Akash too my my!

And then the last part wasn't that one kind of a meeting brilliant man!

So looking forward to this!

Cheers