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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Oh, so Arnav is from EARTH,

and wishes to take Khushi back with him!!

But Khushi and others like her believe, Humans are no longer present on Earth, but only on Atlantis and Moon, but didn't earth get destroyed & became submerged or something like that!!!

So they have a Water based population, living on ships like Noah's arks or like they live on House Boats in Kashmir??? How are they alive on Earth??

And why is his body Temp. so different from her??

What is so special about Khushi, that he's insisting on her coming back!!

The new currency, Gravity sensors, being able to walk on all four-walls, different Time-keeping methods!!! This totally awesome!! Just love this Story!!

Great Job, waiting for Friday!!!

Take Care!!!
😊

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

That was nice update...

I am suck at these planets thing...😆

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

I love this update. Looks like emotions and feelings were left behind on earth for Kushi to be so confused at what she is feeling. However he sounds like he knows exactly what he is doing and in control of his feelings. He wanted her for the questioning. Is it because his purpose is to find a mate for procreation? i like how unlike her, he seems to be using his charm to unsettle her. He is going to bring the human feelings and emotions back to her, isn't he? But the question is why? Is he playing with her? I hope he is not using her. What is with the no discipline people of Moon? this story is becoming very interesting . , ,

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Res

Edited.

"Our-No" wow a robotic accent to Arnav. I like it. And it's true too, Arnav is only Khushi's not ours.

"Hard to believe that. Your porcelain like skin is too smooth and blemish-free to be true." - did he complemented her or made fun as Khushi's assumed?

Which ever world or era it is the man is arrogant and handsomely so... "The attribute is purely my own creation."

And that stand true to the fact that it doesn't matter the genre of the fic is si-fi, because Khushi could still feel does butterflies and Dhak Dhak ...

"There it was again, Khushi realized, the unnatural symptoms... they had returned in full force, ...the tightening in her abdomen and the erratic palpitation,... she affirmed to herself, stomping the shot of thrill that went through her as she thought about the befuddling yet welcome effect that the stranger had on her." --- "She refused to look at him now, believing that it would lessen the impact of his hidden weaponry upon her." Oh my Chaitalee, you wrote it so well that this si-if investigation and the way Khsuhi is deciphering the new feelings in herself in the presence of this stranger is making all of it so hot!

"We do have a considerable lot of our kind, but would like to expand. Opting for natural means to do the same would be a tedious process" Seriously ???

"We need people", she heard him say, but from his look he could have been saying I need you'. They kept echoing in her mind, fanned by the tachycardia." Well this said otherwise.

"A sudden rush of warmth filled through her. As moments ticked by, her hand began to feel hotter than it had throughout her lifetime...his core body temperature was quite higher than the optimum human body temperature." ---- well what more evidence is required that he is sooo hot!!!😉

And you nailed it with the way you made Arnav utter "E.A.R.T.H".

Sorry Chaitalee, if I made your update sound how I found this arshi hot. But I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

oh...will Khushi go back with him...is it even possible for her to go..?

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

will she go back with him
thought earth is no longer habitable
she doesnt know what he is making her feel
awww so cute
poor thing is clueless
well so are we as to why he wants her to come with them
wow the robots can read people real well
this is so cool
hmmm this is what out future could be like
he is like her but a male
has she not been in contact with other human males i wonder
so much mystery and so much fun

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Why did you choose this as the title? Amaranthine means everlasting. Does it indirectly refer to the earthly beings ? And the fact that arnav is from earth indicates that "life has found its way". May be they lived off in arks or underwater or something of that sort where they were protected from the extreme environment outside their habitat. Now that's for you to disclose. I love this genre.

And it's quite obvious his temperature is more than that of khushi's. Earth is quite closer to sun than Mars or its so called satellite Atlantis.

So he wants khushi to come to earth? Well it will be tough for her to cope up since she is adapted to Atlantis- type - climate . She would be sent with an oxygen cylinder since I am sure due to climatic conditions O2 will be less.

Our-no ...That's quite creative.

And I love the fact you have added scific concepts like artificial gravity. Oh. I love that concept and I am sure one day it would be applied in our spaceships or iss soon. And I wonder how can a person be tied using magnetic field?...

Do continue soon.