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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Happy two years anniversery. . 😊..

Interesting and completely different story. . 3014 it is.. I loved La-1-ya... She is cute..

Arnav made an appearance and already left khushi immobile... Can't wait for the next update. .

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Congrats Chaitu on completing 2 years on if.

wow! sci-fi haan. Eager to know what you gave planed for this os.

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Marvellous update
Loved it
Please continue soon
Thanks for the mail

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

woww...

thats really a unique n interesting start..

now m really curious to know about the man...

eagerly waiting...

thanks 4 mail...

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Welcome back!!! Congrats on your 2nd anniversary Chaitu!!!! Interesting start, please continue soon!!!!

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Just came across this by chance ... Love the futuristic feel f the story ...

But more than that just love your La1ya ... too cute to be a robot ...

Waiting for the reaction between the captive and the captor ...

And happy second anniversary Chaitu ...

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Fabulous update
Loved it
Thanks for the mail

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Cant believe...
This is just amazing yaar...

I surely don't want this to over...
Please give us some more parts Chaitu..
Take ur time...but this genre is jus mind blowing...

PS- I love Sujatha novels..(Tamil)
He is genius in sci-fic novels...
Your writing remembers me of him C..
👏

Hats off yaar

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Wow! It's getting interesting!

People of Atlantis believe Earth is uninhabited and Arnav is from Earth.

And he's in need of the expertise of the inhabitants of Atlantis for rebuilding Earth to its former glory. Ain't it?

You really have unbelievable imagination 😉

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Taken

C!!! Wunderbar! Prima! Super!! Das war schn!

Well written man I mean! I simply loved it! Beautifully penned dwon! and I just can't believe it n it was like we were taken through all that setting with the SciFi effect!

Now ArShi just a mere touch but still hot! That was the effect and damn EARTH was the final touch! It's damn interesting man!

Can't wait for the third part but nur drei? Hmm

Cheers

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 11 years ago