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Posted: 10 years ago
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Payphone - Maroon 5


I'm at a payphone trying to call home

All of my change, I've spent on you

Where have the times gone?

Baby, it's all wrong

Where are the plans we made for two?


Yeah, I, I know it's hard to remember

The people we used to be.

it's even harder to picture

That you're not here next to me


The phone was ringing. She wipe her tears and picked up. Who could be calling now?; Everyone important who had the house number knew that there was a wedding at the hall and it was all hands on deck to get everything organized. Her mother was the best person to contact anyways, if there was a problem and her phone was attached to her person like a third hand.


"Hello? Who's speaking?"


You say it's too late to make it

But is it too late to try?

And in our time that you wasted

All of our bridges burned down


I've wasted my nights

You turned out the lights

Now I'm paralyzed

Still stuck in that time when we called it love

But even the sun sets in paradise.


He leant his head back against the wall and closed his eyes, tears flowing. It had been too long since he'd heard her voice. It was a soothing balm over his aching soul, he wished all he could do was listen to her voice till he was no longer craving for that sweet sound. His thoughts were broken by her repeated question;


"Hello? Hello? Is anyone there? If you're looking for Ma call on her phone. Hello? Say something. Why did you call if you didn't want to say anything? Time wasters!"


Then all he heard was the dial tone.


I'm at a payphone trying to call home

All of my change, I've spent on you

Where have the times gone?

Baby, it's all wrong

Where are the plans we made for two?


If happy ever after did exist

I would still be holding you like this

All those fairy tales are full of it

One more stupid love song, I'll be sick


She felt like it was him on the phone, there was a sense of peace within her; But why would he call her? He had finished the relationship, he had not stopped her even once when she asked for a divorce, almost getting her married off to someone else and had only agreed to let go of that senseless idea when with a heavy heart she told him that she would never see him or anyone in his family again.


You turned your back on tomorrow

'Cause you forgot yesterday

I gave you my love to borrow

But you just gave it away


You can't expect me to be fine

I don't expect you to care

I know I said it before

But all of our bridges burned down


I've wasted my nights

You turned out the lights

Now I'm paralyzed

Still stuck in that time when we called it love

But even the sun sets in paradise.


She turned on the radio and decided to pack up all her things; she was moving in two days to Kashmir to teach in an all girls school; it was a positive step; towards independence; towards forgetting that she had been married. She's left her magalsutra with him and had stopped applying sindoor; it was all like how it was before they got married; till she heard the song they danced to for Aliyah's sangeet play on radio; She broke down again as the memories came back. He never realised, she thought with regret, that it was always him; her feelings for him would never come to surface, he would never know.


I'm at a payphone trying to call home

All of my change, I spent on you

Where have the times gone

Baby, it's all wrong

Where are the plans we made for two?


If happy ever after did exist

I would still be holding you like this

All those fairy tales are full of it

One more stupid love song I'll be sick

Now I'm at a payphone.


He should have said something, anything to make her listen to what he had to say. He knew it was too little, too late what he wanted to do, but his heavy heart would only feel lighter if he told her how really and truly sorry he was; for not listening to her; not believing her; not trusting her; not telling her he loved her; not wanting to understand that what he saw in her eyes was the truth and not magic. Well it was magic, he thought with a wry smile, he got lost in her deep soulful eyes and he forgot the cruel world for those few moments.


Man, f*** that s**t

I'll be out spending all this money

While you're sitting 'round wondering

Why it wasn't you who came up from nothing


Made it from the bottom

Now when you see me I'm stuntin'

And all cars start with the push of a button

Telling me the chances I blew up or whatever you call it

Switch the number to my phone so you never could call it


She breathed in the fresh, cold air, her face towards the warm sun soaking in the warmth on her face even as the rest of her felt the chill moving in.


" Ma'am, you'd better come in before you fall sick."

"I'm coming. It's beautiful here." Pulling her thick cardigan closer to her frame, she walked towards the office, to get all the paperwork sorted out before she could officially start teaching. She knew she would find the peace she so needed here, once she threw herself in her work. Memories would dim, he would move on, be with the person he wanted to always be with and she would have her selective happy memories that she would remember with fondness. She had changed her number; she didn't need any contact with anyone from that old life.


Don't need my name on my show, you can tell it I'm ballin

Swish, what a shame, could have got picked

Had a really good game but you missed your last shot

So you talk about who you see at the top

Or what you could have saw


But sad to say it's over for

Phantom pulled up, valet open doors

Wiz like go away, got what you was looking for

Now it's me who they want

So you can go and take that little piece of s**t with you


Bulbul told her he had spoken to her. He had called home and had broken down before she could say anything and told her everything. How sorry he was for mistrusting her; for taunting her; for degrading her; for hating her; and he regretted not asking for forgiveness when he had the chance, but he cannot think of a life without her.


Her heart ached for the person she still loved, but she knew there was no sense in going back to that world. His sister and her best friend would never let them live in peace. There would be more misunderstandings, more fights, a dilemma for him if he ever had to chose between her and his sister and she was scared that his decision would shatter her already broken heart.


She wanted to give him a second chance. She really did, but she needed time and she needed to know that his feelings for her were genuine so she did what she thought she would never do and she called him up.


I'm at a payphone trying to call home

All of my change, I spent on you

Where have the times gone

Baby, it's all wrong, where are the plans we made for two


If happy ever after did exist

I would still be holding you like this

And all these fairy tales are full of it

Yeah, one more stupid love song, I'll be sick


"Hello?"

"Hi Pragya, its Abhi."

" You won't call me Chashmish today?" she said with a smile on her face.

"Chashmish, how are you? how was your day? what has been happening? I've recorded a new song. I want you to listen to it later and tell me what you think" Abhi said lying in bed, looking at the photo she had sent him two weeks ago from wherever she was.


Now I'm at a payphone.


It was that time of the day, the time he looked forward to the most; he dialed her number and waited for her to pick up the phone, knowing one day she would come back to him and tell him what he most longed to hear.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
res!

UNRES!!

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT MINI ME!! omg what exquisite angst!! it really thrilled me the way you alternated their perspectives. i think you expressed their pain so movingly...just, so many little details that pack a punch together. and aieee you send her all the way to chilly kashmir! but she found happiness, yay. and they reconnected, how perfect!! i like that their relationship will be just on the phone for awhile - talking, really talking, which they rarely do together. amazing amazing!! very sweet and poignant story, so glad the bhooth got you and made you write it 😉!! thanks for posting 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: -mina-

res!

UNRES!!

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT MINI ME!! omg what exquisite angst!! it really thrilled me the way you alternated their perspectives. i think you expressed their pain so movingly...just, so many little details that pack a punch together. and aieee you send her all the way to chilly kashmir! but she found happiness, yay. and they reconnected, how perfect!! i like that their relationship will be just on the phone for awhile - talking, really talking, which they rarely do together. amazing amazing!! very sweet and poignant story, so glad the bhooth got you and made you write it 😉!! thanks for posting 😃


Thank you thank you thank you...I feel like I rushed you into unres-ing! But it wasn't anything like what I told you about so I wasn't too sure(plus you'll be frank and let me know if its crap)...and I'm going to start carrying a cross and a silver knife and wear a garlic necklace...I dont want this bhoot to mandrao over me...two in less than 24 hours is a record...they all seem to be depressing and I guess the ending for this is slightly better than them never meeting/speaking to each other which was what my head kept spitting out before
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Posted: 10 years ago
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no no, no rushing! i was gonna unres anyway! and yes it is quite different, but given where the track is i can see how you got inspired to go in this direction, and it really is quite powerful!! now as your di it is my sad duty to inform you...there is no protecting against the writing bhootni. she comes and goes at will!! see we will enjoy her visitations to you and you will...err...suffer them? ;)

and if you're getting sadfeels all the time now, write them!! it will help exorcise them and eventually the happy feels will return like fresh air. that's just how the show affects us naa!!

love love love :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh, this was amazing MMM. I really enjoyed reading it. Kudos to you for choosing this song👏!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

no no, no rushing! i was gonna unres anyway! and yes it is quite different, but given where the track is i can see how you got inspired to go in this direction, and it really is quite powerful!! now as your di it is my sad duty to inform you...there is no protecting against the writing bhootni. she comes and goes at will!! see we will enjoy her visitations to you and you will...err...suffer them? ;)

and if you're getting sadfeels all the time now, write them!! it will help exorcise them and eventually the happy feels will return like fresh air. that's just how the show affects us naa!!

love love love :)


Can you please take her back...the depressing feels are almost gone although there is. One more idea but that will have to wait till tonight because I have lots of work at work...lol


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: renukha871

Oh, this was amazing MMM. I really enjoyed reading it. Kudos to you for choosing this song👏!


Thank you renu.. You're very kind... I love this song...my all time fav!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow hun Payphone goes really well with your story I love how you wrote the story brillant
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow hun Payphone goes really well with your story I love how you wrote the story brillant


ray ray!!! Thank you, you are very kind..it was hard work as the story wasn't behaving!😳
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Originally posted by: MinMinMehra


ray ray!!! Thank you, you are very kind..it was hard work as the story wasn't behaving!😳

I can imagine it must have been hard but I like how you didn't get together but Pragya is getting to know him before she goes back

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