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Originally posted by: renukha871

Wow, Tia. Interesting you've used the upcoming track into this songfic. Very well done. And the songs lyrics goes very well with the situation and how he reminisces the old memories between them.

Originally posted by: kdsubs

How did i miss this thread???

Haven't read through all the song-fics (i love that name btw 😊). But i did read a few...

Mina - The One. So so so much better than the show. I love fiction when its close to what real-life could be like. And this one is (ok, barring the emojis, but whatever). 👍🏼 As far as i was concerned, the ending came too soon. You could have gone on for a few hundred more words.


Tia - I adore that song. Tere Bin. Sigh. And what a beautiful and perfect use of the song you made! I especially liked that when Pragya said no, Abhi left - because he did not feel that he had any rights to argue otherwise. Perhaps a small point - but so potent. And then you touched on his guilt, his longing, his sense of loss, of incompleteness. But then, for die-hard romantics like me, you still ended on a note of hope. Lovely.

Thank you for this thread. I am going to come back and read through all of these stories.

[And Mina - fair warning to you. That other OS you wrote about that other explosively awesome couple? Forced me to think more on them. And i am going to inflict the results on you. Serves you right for reminding me of them].

This songfic is for Pragya!

Title: Yun hasraton ke daag

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aQxcv2U1cL8

Voice: Lata Mangeshkar
Composer: Madan Mohan

She sat in his room in dead silence. Her hands lost the race to tears, as they couldn't keep up anymore. It was not just him who had failed her, but her love had failed her, her life had. She was caught helpless from every side. She could see her dreams, desires, hopes and happiness washed off by her own tears.

Yun hasraton ke daag mohabbat mein dho liye
Khud dil se dil ke baat kahi aur ro liye

The stains of desires I washed in love
Had a heart-to-heart talk with my heart and cried away

She was not the one to believe in fairy tales, but she had faith when she came to his life. Though he was unfamiliar, she gave him all the benefit of doubt, she let him win every time he failed. She wished and hoped for happiness in a hidden corner of her heart, only to be bombarded with dejection and heartbreak.

Ghar se chale they hum to khushi ki talaash mein
khushi ki talaash mein
Gam raah mein khade they wo hi saath ho liye
Khud dil se dil ke baat kahi aur ro liye

I left my abode in my quest for happiness
In my quest for happiness
Found sadness in my path and picked it up
Had a heart-to-heart talk with my heart and cried away

Though she claimed she didn't expect much from life, though she wanted to say she didn't believe in love, her heart was vulnerable. But she had locked her agonies aside and hoped to find comfort in his happiness. A faint hope of his approval, had kept her going.

Murjha chuka hain
Phir bhi yeh dil phool hi to hain
Haan phool hi to hain
Ab aapki khushi se kaaton mein so liye
Khud dil se dil ke baat kahi aur ro liye

My heart has wilted, yet it's a flower
Yet it's a flower
Now it's up to you to see in terms of thorns or flowers
Had a heart-to-heart talk with my heart and cried away

Her heart was a locker for secrets and truths. She kept them that way for his peace of mind for she couldn't have seen him shattered. Yet he questioned her silence, along with the world, which never let her smile.

Hothon ko si chuke to zamane ne yeh kaha
Zamane ne yeh kaha
Ye chup si kyon lagi hain aji kuchh to boliye
Khud dil se dil ke baat kahi aur ro liye

When I sealed my lips, the world began to ask
The world began to ask
Why are you so reserved, why don't you say something?
Had a heart-to-heart talk with my heart and cried away

Her tears flowed until her eyes got dry, only to make way for another storm of fresh ones.