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Posted: 10 years ago
[5 Dec/14]

originally posted here in AT #54 - an alternative ending to the Nov 27 scene with drunk Abhi pawing Pragya...



RECIPROCITY

a- bolo naa shuruwaad...
p- aap...darwaaza band kijiye...phir...
p-phir?
a-kijiye naa...darwaaza band...
*he closes the door and backs her against it, palms flat on the door on each side of her head*
*she looks up at him with angst in her eyes but also something else, that looks disturbingly like hope*
p-maine usko kuch nahin karne diya...
a-jhoot mat bolo -
p-*talking over him* lekin - lekin aap ko poora haq hai... sab kuch karne ka...toh kariye naa, shuruwaad
a-*frowns in confusion* kya?
p-aapko haq jataane tha naa...jataaye. waise meri bhi haq bante hai...mangne ka
a-aur tum...mang rahi ho? mujh par haq?
p-kyun? aap akele mang sakhte kya?
*he pulls away from her*
a-nahin...aise nahin..tum...tumhaare saath mujhe kuch bhi nahin karni hain...aur tumhe mujh par koi haq nahin hain, aur kabhi nahin hoga...
*he stumbles away into the bathroom to douse his head in cold water*
*she slides to the floor and feels numb about her close escape...and yet another rejection*

ENGLISH

a-tell me how he started...
p-close the door...and then...
a-and then?
p-first...close the door
*he closes the door and backs her against it, palms flat on the door on each side of her head*
*she looks up at him with angst in her eyes but also something else, that looks disturbingly like hope*
p-i didn't let him do anything -
a-don't lie-
p-*talking over him* but - but you have every right...to do everything...so...why don't you...start?
a-*frowns in confusion* what?
p-you want to assert your rights don't you? go ahead...but then i also have rights...a right to ask...
a-and you're...asking? for your right...to me?
p-why? are only you allowed to ask?
*he pulls away from her*
a-no...not like this...you...i don't want to do anything with you...and you don't have any right on me, and you never will...
*he stumbles away into the bathroom to douse his head in cold water*
*she slides to the floor and feels numb about her close escape...and yet another rejection*)

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Posted: 10 years ago
[5 Dec/14]

originally posted here in AT #54, following deefan's comment that an abhigya separation would lead Abhi to compose some sad sexy songs...I don't know anything about music but I couldn't resist :P



THE INTERVIEW

*daadi stays in coma six months :(*

*abhi throws himself into his work and tries not to think about the emptiness of his life*

*pragya goes back to becoming pragya arora and discovers life has meaning after divorce after all; her heart still aches for abhi sometimes but she refuses to give attention to that*

*tanu got eaten by sharkie...sorry, i mean she got sent to new york by her agency because they wanted her to model for gap kids*

*aaliya chilled out and found better things to do than ruin her bhai's life*

*abhi's feverish work results in a new album that tops the charts and breaks all records*

*one day pragya is at the dentist's and abhi's on tv being interviewed about his stunning new work; since it's the dentist's office she can't change the channel and the patient before her is taking a long time so she's stuck watching*

interviewer: so rockstar abhi this is a new sound from you

abhi: yeah.

interviewer: please would you tell us your inspiration behind your latest hit, "one day without you"

abhi: well you know when sometimes someone leaves your life suddenly, you notice a lot of little things that are different. the song is about how the world can look different without someone, and how you have to move on day by day.

interviewer: yes, we have heard that you and your wife recently -

abhi: no personal questions please

interviewer: uhm ok. tell us about your album title "balcony dreams"

abhi: i do a lot of composing on my balcony these days.

interviewer: that's interesting, any particular reason?

abhi: the open air. and some memories.

interviewer: memories?

abhi: yeah.

interviewer: what memories?

abhi: that's personal.

interviewer: but you yourself - ok. nevermind. why don't you tell us what's next for you?

abhi: well i -

*the rest of abhi's answer is cut off as the receptionist calls pragya's name, it's finally time for her appointment. in a daze pragya submits to her dentist's attentions, thinking all the while about what abhi meant about someone leaving his life. and spending all his time on the balcony? did he...miss her? her confused thoughts kept her from noticing the stings and scrapings of the dentist's tools and at the end of the appointment the dentist congratulated her on her pain tolerance...pragya laughed to herself that the dentist had no idea..*
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Posted: 10 years ago
[5 Dec/14]

originally posted here in AT #54, following riyya6's wish for an Abhi-peeps-from-Suresh's window scene ;)



I'VE GOT A FRIEND IN YOU

*
abhi tries to make surgya get married because he figures that will reduce the fallout if the MMS ever goes public, and anyway he thinks pragya always wanted suresh and they probably belong together, if he sets them up then he can wash his hands of her and walk away, that will be sensible...*

*suresh agrees because of some warped guilt complex - aaliya helps*

*pragya gets mad and slaps both of them and refuses to maintain relations with either of them. she ignores suresh at work and she hassles the lawyers to hurry up with the divorce process. there's no hurrying the courts so three months later she's technically still married, but she has no contact with abhi. she visits daadi only when he's not around*

*raj gets out of jail and mithali's awfulnesses get exposed and she confesses to the reality of the MMS thing and the surveillance company comes through with backup of the proof*

*abhi goes crazy realizing how much he wronged chashmish. he breaks up with tanu out of disgust and he has a huuuge fight with aaliya which results in her packing off to australia and abhi finally understanding the truth of the past insane six months of his life*

*daadi finally forgives abhi after he unloads his heart to her, and she encourages him to apologize to pragya and try for a second chance*

*pragya won't talk to him and the arora ladies won't help him - though rockstar daadi tells him it will take time and he should be sneaky if he wants to jump start things*

*abhi goes to apologize to suresh for beating him up and to get ideas for chashmish-pacifying strategies*

*suresh forgives abhi and they chill in his living room for awhile. alcohol is involved - don't ask mina how or why, it just is.*

*eventually suresh explains that he has no anybody-pacifying strategies because he's kind of a disaster with women. abhi nods in agreement. then suresh remembers that at least he can give abhi a first class view of pragya and invites abhi to his bedroom. the alcohol obviously means suresh is not thinking things through very clearly*

*abhi follows suresh and listens to the explanation that suresh used to try to catch glimpses of BB but he usually ended up waving goodnight to prags instead. he hasn't done that since around the time of prags and abhi's wedding because the arora ladies have been mad at him*

*abhi is too busy leaning halfway out the window to care too much about this explanation. luck is on his side and he catches sight of chashmish!! ohhh my goodness she seems to be coming out of the shower? it's mesmerizing to watch her drying her hair with a towel...she must be in front of the window to help with air drying? hmm in his room she would've been stuck under the AC but no problems like that in chembur...ohhh hey she's not wearing a dupatta!! ayeee! abhi embarrassedly covers his eyes with his hand but then he peeks...it's not too badtameez if his hand is covering most of the view right? and aww who cares about tameez technically she's still his wife right, and he hasn't seen her in weeks and - suresh taps him on the shoulder*

*suresh says: hey it's a good view isn't it?! and giggles, because he's drunk*

*abhi realizes this double battery has this prime viewing spot of his chashmish, his biwi every day, and he freaks out. he doesn't care about some ridiculous explanation about bb. he punches suresh and he falls to the ground. then he warns him very seriously to never look through this window again, or he'll tear his eyes out and get his family evicted from this flat. in fact abhi is thinking he should probably just buy the whole building, god knows who else might get access to this window*

*suresh frowns and explains the easier solution would be for him to just get his wife back*

*abhi decides that's a good idea and helps him stand up and pats his shoulder in thanks, but warns him again to keep his eyes to himself, so that they can stay friends*

*suresh flops onto his bed and agrees with a smile and then falls asleep*

*abhi carefully pulls the curtains - no bharosa for this double battery honestly* and makes his way to arora house, it's time to explain to sarla maa that she needs to board up that window because her daughters are vulnerable to creepy voyeurs. waise that's as much as he can do for BB but it's definitely time for chashmish to come back to the safety of his mansion...*

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Posted: 10 years ago
[5 Dec14]

originally posted here in AT#54, prompted by -Martinski-'s enthusiasm for nutella and baarish scenes ;)



THE USES OF NUTELLA

a: i'm telling you it's like a face mask it acts as a barrier to moisture it will work
p: that is the most ridiculous thing i've ever heard
a: just take off your glasses and smear it on
p: what a waste of an imported product!!
a: oh come on we can just lick it off after...
p: seriously? don't you remember how i kicked you by reflex the last time you tried to lick my cheek? it tickles!!
a: come on let's just try it
p: it makes no sense! so our faces will be protected from the rain, but the rest of us?? i am not going to coat myself in nutella from head to toe! it would ruin my clothes!
a: then we could just go out without clothes
p: nudism AND misuse of food how did i end up with such an insane husband as you
a: whatever i know you're equally addicted to me and nutella
p: it's true...fine ok but only in the backyard of your holiday house and NO PAPARAAZZI
a: yesss! i knew you'd see it my way. plus it will soften your skin. i'm telling you, it's like a mud mask, but tastier.
p:...😵 🤪
a: 😎

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved all of these!
🤣 the last one tho! Nutella?!? Hilarious! Thanks for posting these! They were fab!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you, Mina!!! I loved them all !!!! You are an amazing storyteller!!!

OK, so there's a new way to enjoy nutella! !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
[5 Dec/14]

a quick drabble before the suresh-wedding thing happens on the show...! originally posted here on AT#54

forgive the stupidness 😳

and big thanks to everyone for likes and comments!! hugs hugs!!



BY ANY OTHER NAME


*p has filled her suitcase and is making her way out of mehra mansion as family watches, draculoxli hanging out by the door waiting to clap as she leaves*

*suddenly abhi comes down the stairs, calling dramatically - stop, chashmish!*

*pragya stops and turns around, heart in her throat, half of her worried "oh god what now" the other half hopeful "is he going to stop me??"*

a: you can leave, but you have to marry suresh first

*assembled family takes a big gasp*

*aalu wonders what the hell her bhai is up to, wants to jump in and stop him because the last thing they need is another excuse for behenji bhabhi to stay, but before she can do anything pragya answers back*

*pragya's heart goes cold for a second but the shock fades away as anger and incredulity takes its place. she can't believe he's serious but she's learned he's often serious about the insanest things so she will assume he actually means this stupid idea, and answers with that in mind*

p: i will never marry him and you can't make me 😡

*suresh slinks up to the door way*

s: i am ready for this marriage! 😃

*whole family gasps in shock again*

*p is amazed suresh has eaten the craziness achar of mehra mansion* 😲

a: *smirks and nods to himself* you will have to do this marriage, chashmish

*p wants to explode in outrage for a moment...then she calms down and decides to throw caution to the wind* 😉

*p drops her bag and runs to abhi*

*a is surprised and by reflex opens his arms to catch her*⭐️

*p gives him a tight hug and quickly jumps up to kiss his forehead*

*a is lattu...and in shock...and lattu...☺️*

*taaliyah freaking out by the door, suresh looking grim, rest of family confused - indu and swarni daasi smiling to selves*

p: oh i knew it! i knew you'd never let me leave! you're the best!

*a is too distracted by having a squirming jumping chashmish in his arms and not able to pay attention to what she said*

*tanu loses it and comes towards them*

t: EXCUSE ME EXCUSE ME. Didn't you hear what you said? you have to marry that DB! and you're so shameless, one minute you're rolling around with the DB, next minute you're jumping on Abhi -

p: *ignores t and looks into a's eyes worshipfully* i can't leave the house until i marry him and i will never marry him! what a perfect solution you have come up with rockstar!

*a is mesmerized by p's jadoo-filled eyes and says nothing*

*t flies toward them like the bat out of hell she is and tries to pull them apart, but daasis get in her way*

p: you have all the master plans!! that's why you signed the divorce papers too right?! it's all a trick?

a: *snaps out of his daze grins* ha ha ha chashmish! you didn't even read the papers did you! *tenderly holds her face in his hands*

p: no! why?

a: they weren't divorce papers!

*family gasps*

*t falls to the floor shrieking; aalu keeps her distance because the world has gone mad and she doesn't know what to do about either her bhai or her best friend*

p: *smiles* no! what were they??

a: name change papers!! i changed my last name and yours, so now your name is pragya abhishek rockstar!! 😃

p: ooh wow. so i can legally be called mrs. rockstar?

a: that's right! and i couldn't let my mrs rockstar go anywhere in a fit of temper, so i called this double battery to do some nautanki with me. he's pretty good don't you think?

p: i guess so...but no one is as good as you!!

a: exactly! now come back upstairs mrs rockstar there are more grey hairs for you to chase down!

p: okayyy!

*family watches as abhigya run up the stairs*

*suresh smiles to himself and leaves after a job well done...he likes abhi's brand of nautanki, they will surely do more plays in the future*

*daasis do some pest control and the bat from hell is removed from the house*

*aalu decides she can't deal with anything anymore and decides to move to ecuador, there are no behenjis there and she's always wanted to learn spanish*

END SCENE

Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mina, love you and thank you for writing this drabble
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you, Mina ... loved it!!! Stress reliever for sure 🤣 !!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh Mina you do know how to crack things up😆😆

Pest Control 🤣

Please do write more. After watching this idiotic episode we do need something like this.

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